Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repeating obvious facts (e.g., that Bangkok is the capital) unless relevant. Use linking words if adding details.

Exemplo: Yes, there are many tall buildings near my home. For example, my apartment building is a high-rise and there are several office towers and shopping malls within a 10-minute walk, which makes the area very busy and convenient.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity: state the habit clearly, then give a specific example with simple, accurate descriptions. Use linking words (for example, because) and correct verb/noun forms.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I find them unusual or attractive. For example, there is an interesting building near my apartment that looks like a giant number 11, so I photographed it because it attracts many tourists.

Sugestão: Answer directly and organize information: state the building you want to visit, give one specific reason, and include concise details about location and functions. Correct sentence structure and use linking words (because, and).

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the building that looks like the number 11 because it is only about 10 kilometers from my home. Moreover, the complex houses shops, offices and hotels, so I could explore shops during the day and enjoy the architecture as well.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence stating preference, then support it with one or two specific reasons. Fix grammar and repetition, and use linking words such as because or for example.

Exemplo: Yes, I would prefer to live in a tall building in Bangkok because tall buildings are usually close to facilities. For example, many are within walking distance of train stations, bus stops and shopping malls, which makes daily life more convenient.

× I often take a photo or building when I feel is different.

✓ I often take a photo of a building when I feel it looks different.

Missing and incorrect articles and missing pronoun. Use 'a' before singular countable nouns ('a photo', 'a building') and the preposition 'of' to indicate the object of 'take a photo'. Add the pronoun 'it' and the verb 'looks' to make the clause grammatically complete.

× For example nearby my apartment have a interesting buildings is look like 11 so I think it's great and attracts many tourists to visit there.

✓ For example, near my apartment there is an interesting building that looks like 11, so I think it's great and attracts many tourists.

Multiple structural problems: incorrect word order ('nearby my apartment' should be 'near my apartment'), subject-verb disagreement and pluralization ('have' incorrect), wrong article ('a interesting' should be 'an interesting'), incorrect relative clause ('is look like 11' should be 'that looks like 11'), and redundant phrasing ('to visit there' unnecessary). Reordering and choosing correct articles and verb forms fixes clarity.

× I would like to visit the buildings look like 11.

✓ I would like to visit the building that looks like 11.

Incorrect pluralization and missing relative pronoun and verb agreement. Use singular 'building' if referring to one structure, include 'that' to introduce the relative clause, and use 'looks' for third-person singular.

× It's not far from my apartment, just, uh, 10 kilometers.

✓ It is not far from my apartment; it is only about 10 kilometers away.

Minor tense/form and idiomatic usage: add 'away' to indicate distance, replace filler commas with clearer phrasing, and use 'only about' for natural speech. Present tense remains appropriate.

× So there are many purposes in this buildings, shopping, accommodating and office, I think is very interesting place.

✓ So this building serves many purposes: shopping, accommodation, and offices. I think it is a very interesting place.

Multiple errors: plural/singular mismatch ('this buildings' -> 'this building'), incorrect noun forms ('accommodating' -> 'accommodation'), missing articles ('a very interesting place'), and sentence run-on. Split into two sentences, list functions correctly, and use proper noun forms and articles.

× If I live in Bangkok, I prefer to live in a tall building because tall buildings often in the often near the facilities, for example train station, bus station and malls.

✓ If I live in Bangkok, I prefer to live in a tall building because tall buildings are often near facilities such as train stations, bus stations, and malls.

Missing verb 'are' after 'often' and duplicated word 'the often'. Use plural nouns for general reference ('train stations'). Include 'such as' to introduce examples and correct article use. Present tense preference is appropriate.