Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Correct grammar and word choice (e.g., "I live in Ho Chi Minh City, which is the largest city in Vietnam") and avoid irrelevant or unclear phrases. Use one linking word if you add a detail.

Exemplo: Yes. I live in Ho Chi Minh City, which has many tall buildings because it is Vietnam's largest commercial and tourist center. For example, the downtown area has several office towers and hotels that dominate the skyline.

Sugestão: Give a direct short answer first, then one clear reason with specific detail. Avoid filler words and unclear phrases. Use correct grammar (e.g., "I'm not really interested in photographing buildings"), and mention an alternative subject you photograph if relevant.

Exemplo: Not really. I rarely photograph buildings because there are so many similar high-rises in my city; instead, I prefer taking pictures of my grandmother and family when we visit interesting places.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence naming the building, then give one or two specific reasons using correct phrasing and linking words. Mention what you would do there to make the answer more vivid.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Eiffel Tower in Paris because it is an iconic symbol of the city and offers excellent views. If I go, I would climb to the observation deck to see the cityscape and take photos at sunset.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give one clear, specific reason with correct vocabulary (e.g., "I prefer a small house because stairs and elevators can be inconvenient"). Avoid repetition and unclear words. Use a linking word like 'because' to connect reason and consequence.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't. I prefer a small house because living in a tall building often means relying on elevators and walking up stairs, which can be inconvenient; also, a house makes it easier to go outside quickly.

× Yes, definitely. I was living in Ho Chi Minh City, it was a biggest industry or city in Vietnam.

✓ Yes, definitely. I lived in Ho Chi Minh City; it was the biggest industrial city in Vietnam.

The student uses 'was living' which implies a continuous past but here a simple past 'lived' is more appropriate to state a past fact. 'a biggest industry or city' is incorrect: 'the biggest' requires the definite article 'the' and 'industrial city' is the correct adjective-noun collocation. Use a semicolon or separate sentences to avoid a run-on sentence. Suggestion: Use simple past for completed past facts and correct article and adjective forms.

× So there many town meeting or were for the purpose of office and tourism destination.

✓ So there were many towns and meetings there for the purposes of offices and tourism destinations.

The original sentence lacks proper verbs and has unclear noun forms. 'So there many' misses the verb 'were' and 'town meeting or were' is garbled. Use 'there were' for existence (There be issue also relevant but primary problem is structure). 'Towns' plural and 'meetings' plural match context; 'for the purposes of offices and tourism destinations' clarifies intent. Suggestion: include 'there were' and correct plural nouns and prepositional phrase.

× Well, not really is on way is uh, just the very tumbling set as sky rubber because building are very popular in my city, so I don't have very interested in them.

✓ Well, not really. One reason is that the skyline is very crowded because buildings are very popular in my city, so I'm not very interested in them.

Multiple issues: missing subject-verb agreement and awkward phrases. 'is on way' and 'tumbling set as sky rubber' are ungrammatical. I replaced with 'One reason is that the skyline is very crowded.' 'Buildings are' uses correct third person plural. 'I don't have very interested' is wrong; the correct form is 'I'm not very interested' or 'I am not very interested in them.' Suggestion: Use clear subjects and correct adjective/adverb forms.

× I think I just take photo of grandma.

✓ I think I just take photos of grandmothers.

Pronoun/noun usage: 'grandma' is singular and informal; the student likely meant 'grandmothers' or 'my grandma.' If referring to one specific person, use 'my grandma' and if speaking generally, use plural 'grandmothers' and plural 'photos.' Also use plural 'photos' when habitual. Suggestion: Clarify the referent and match noun number with 'photos.'

× Tell me more because they did, uh, turn rest building in my city.

✓ They rebuilt or renovated old buildings in my city.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear: 'Tell me more' is inappropriate in this context and 'turn rest building' is meaningless. Likely intended meaning is buildings were renovated or turned into something. I suggest 'They renovated old buildings in my city.' Use active verb 'renovated' or 'converted' depending on intended meaning.

× Yes, I think that's a Eiffel Tower in Paris because it is a more symbolize image of the world in Paris.

✓ Yes, I think that's the Eiffel Tower in Paris because it is a symbolic image of the city and the world.

Use 'the Eiffel Tower' with definite article. 'A more symbolize image' is incorrect: 'symbolic image' or 'symbolizes' should be used. Also 'of the world in Paris' is redundant; better: 'symbolic image of the city and the world.' Suggestion: Use correct article with unique landmarks and correct adjective form 'symbolic.'

× I would try to take a trip to France some days because I very love this country.

✓ I would like to take a trip to France someday because I love this country very much.

'Would try to take a trip' is awkward; 'would like to' expresses desire. 'Some days' should be 'someday.' 'I very love' is incorrect word order and adverb placement; use 'I love this country very much.' Suggestion: Use natural modal phrase 'would like to' and proper adverb placement.

× No, not really. I I think living Tom building can bring me a lot of inconvenience because I would like to go up and down very Craven rate.

✓ No, not really. I think living in a tall building would cause me a lot of inconvenience because I would have to go up and down very frequently.

Errors include wrong preposition 'in a tall building' and wrong modal/time reference: 'can bring me' is acceptable but 'would cause me' matches hypothetical. 'Tom' is incorrect word, should be 'tall.' 'Craven rate' is nonsense; likely 'craven' intended 'frequent' or 'at a high rate' — 'very frequently' is appropriate. Suggestion: Use correct adjectives and adverbs and match conditional mood.

× So I think I would show a small house because it very, very convenient to go outside.

✓ So I think I would choose a small house because it is very, very convenient for going outside.

'Show a small house' is wrong verb; use 'choose' or 'prefer.' Missing subject-verb agreement 'it very convenient' needs 'it is very convenient.' Use preposition 'for' + gerund 'going outside' to express purpose. Suggestion: Use appropriate verb and include 'is' for linking verb and correct preposition.