Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Use correct verb tenses and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, there are a couple of tall buildings near my apartment. They mainly house tutoring centers and small language schools, so the area feels quite busy in the evenings.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and provide a clear reason with one brief detail. Use correct vocabulary (e.g., "artificial" is unusual here; use "modern" or "architectural") and avoid fillers like "uh".

Exemplo: No, I don't usually photograph buildings because I'm not very interested in modern architecture. I prefer taking pictures of nature or old historical sites instead.

Sugestão: Clarify tense and be specific about the building and what you liked. If you already visited it, say so clearly and give one memorable detail using linking words.

Exemplo: Yes. A few months ago I visited a famous observation tower in Korea, and from the top I enjoyed a fantastic panoramic view of the city. The glass observation deck was especially memorable.

Sugestão: Answer clearly, use correct expressions for feelings (e.g., "I'm afraid of heights"), and give one concise reason. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases.

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't like to live in a tall building because I'm afraid of heights. I feel uncomfortable on high floors and would prefer a low-rise apartment.

× Oh yes, actually I live in apartment now so I just usually saw the two buildings near my apartment where there are academic or study center.

✓ Oh yes, actually I live in an apartment now, so I usually see two buildings near my apartment that are academic or study centers.

Multiple issues: missing article 'an' before 'apartment' and incorrect verb tense 'saw' (past) should be present 'see' for current situation; word order 'just usually' is awkward—use 'usually'; relative clause 'where there are academic or study center' is incorrect—use 'that are academic or study centers'. Improve by using correct articles, present tense for habitual actions, and a clear relative clause. Suggested practice: form sentences with 'live in an X', use simple present for routines, and practice relative clauses with 'that are'.

× Uh, no, actually I don't like taking a photo artificial building.

✓ Uh, no, actually I don't like taking photos of artificial buildings.

Problems: countable noun 'photo' should be plural 'photos' when speaking generally; missing preposition 'of' after 'taking photos'; adjective-noun order and pluralization: 'artificial building' should be 'artificial buildings' or 'an artificial building' depending on meaning. Use plural for general statements and include 'of'. Suggested practice: remember 'take photos of ...' and match plural/singular consistently.

× So I just uh, I just saw that, but I don't like the tall building.

✓ So I just, uh, saw that, but I don't like tall buildings.

Conflict between past 'saw' and present dislike; if referring to a recent observation, 'saw' is fine but then general dislike should use plural 'tall buildings' or 'the tall building'. Better: 'I just saw that' (past) followed by 'I don't like tall buildings' (general present). Also remove unnecessary article 'the' before 'tall building' when speaking generally. Suggested practice: keep tense consistent and choose plural for general preferences.

× Oh yes, actually a few months ago I visited to a building in Korea where it's famous a top building, so I could see the town view in the building.

✓ Oh yes, actually a few months ago I visited a building in Korea that is a famous tall building, so I could see the town view from it.

Errors: 'visited to' is incorrect—use 'visited' without 'to'; 'where it's famous a top building' is ungrammatical—use relative clause 'that is a famous tall building'; preposition 'in the building' should be 'from it' when talking about the view; 'town view' is better as 'view of the town' or 'town view'. Improve by removing incorrect preposition, correcting relative clause, and using correct preposition for viewpoint. Suggested practice: 'visit' takes a direct object, form relative clauses with 'that is', and use 'view from' when describing seeing something from a place.

× No, actually I don't prefer living in tall building or taller location because I have a lot of scary.

✓ No, actually I don't prefer living in tall buildings or in higher locations because I am very afraid of them.

Multiple preposition and word choice errors: 'living in tall building' needs article or plural 'tall buildings'; 'taller location' should be 'higher locations' or 'on higher floors'; 'I have a lot of scary' is ungrammatical—use 'I am very afraid' or 'I get very scared'. Also 'prefer' often pairs with 'to' or 'prefer living in X' is acceptable. Improve by using plural nouns for general statements, correct prepositions 'in higher locations', and proper expression of fear. Suggested practice: learn common collocations: 'afraid of', 'scared of', and pluralize general nouns.

× So I didn't I didn't enjoy the view of you.

✓ So I didn't enjoy the view.

This sentence has repetition 'I didn't I didn't' and the phrase 'the view of you' is incorrect—likely intended 'the view' or 'the view for you'. In context, the student meant they did not enjoy the view, so simply 'I didn't enjoy the view' is correct. Remove duplicate words and wrong object. Suggested practice: read sentences aloud to catch repetitions and ensure pronouns refer correctly to intended nouns.