Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Shorten and organize your answer. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repeating similar adjectives and fix grammar (e.g., 'are made of' not 'formed with').

Exemplo: Yes, there are several tall buildings near my home. For example, two residential towers close by are made of marble and glass, and they offer modern amenities and comfortable apartments.

Sugestão: Give a concise topic sentence, then add one specific reason and an example. Correct grammar (e.g., 'they help', 'such as the Taj Mahal and the Burj Khalifa') and avoid filler words.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings because photography is my hobby. For instance, when I visited the Taj Mahal, I took several pictures to remember its intricate architecture and the atmosphere.

Sugestão: Start directly with the building you want to visit, then give two specific reasons why (appearance, history, personal significance). Use linking words (for example, because, and) and avoid vague phrases like 'a lot'.

Exemplo: I would like to visit the Taj Mahal in Agra because of its stunning white marble architecture and its historical significance as a monument of love. Also, I want to see the intricate inlay work up close and learn more about its history.

Sugestão: Make your answer shorter and clearer: one topic sentence stating preference, then one specific reason and a short example. Avoid repetition and correct phrasing (e.g., 'a view of the city', 'comfortable and cozy').

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because it would offer a panoramic view of the city. For example, living on a high floor would let me enjoy sunsets over the skyline and feel more peaceful.

× Definitely yes, a considerable amount of large as well as tall buildings are located near my home and they are formed with very luxurious items such as the marble stone and they are very cozy as well as a very comfortable living.

✓ Definitely yes, a considerable number of large and tall buildings are located near my home; they are built with luxurious materials such as marble, and they are very cozy and comfortable to live in.

The student used 'amount' with a countable noun 'buildings'; use 'number' instead (Grammar problem type 1). 'As well as' is unnecessarily repeated and awkward; use 'and'. 'Formed with' is incorrect collocation for construction; use 'built with' and 'materials' instead of 'items' (related to word choice but fixed here while still under plural/singular guidance). 'The marble stone' is redundant; 'marble' suffices. 'A very comfortable living' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'comfortable to live in' or 'comfortable for living'. Suggestions: Use 'a number of' for countable plural nouns, simplify conjunctions, and use standard collocations like 'built with' and 'materials'.

× Definitely yes. Taking photos or clicking pictures is my hobby and whenever I see any building such as Taj Mahal, Burj Khalifa I like to take photos of them as they helps to create a memory of the buildings as well as also.

✓ Definitely yes. Taking photos or clicking pictures is my hobby, and whenever I see a building such as the Taj Mahal or the Burj Khalifa, I like to take photos of it because they help to create memories of the buildings.

Errors include subject-verb agreement with 'they helps' where 'they' (plural) requires 'help' (Grammar problem type 27 and 2); here corrected to 'they help' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'any building such as Taj Mahal, Burj Khalifa' needs articles and conjunctions; use 'a building such as the Taj Mahal or the Burj Khalifa' (article error, Grammar problem type 22/17). 'Them' referring to buildings can be singular when referring to one building; changed to 'it' when referring to a single building and adjusted sentence to refer to buildings generally with 'they help'. Removed redundant 'as well as also'. Suggestions: Ensure subject and verb agree, use articles with proper nouns of monuments, avoid redundant phrases, and maintain consistency in singular/plural references. Note: Main corrections applied focus on verb form and noun reference per allowed problem types.

× Well, there are a lot of buildings that are situated in my hometown and I want to visit Taj Mahal that is located in Agra and I have heard a lot about the beauty as well as the significance of Taj Mahal in my country and also in the ancient history of my nation.

✓ Well, there are a lot of buildings in my hometown, and I want to visit the Taj Mahal in Agra. I have heard a lot about the beauty and significance of the Taj Mahal in my country and in the history of our nation.

This sentence had redundancy and article misuse. 'Taj Mahal that is located in Agra' is wordy; use 'the Taj Mahal in Agra' (Grammar problem type 3 and 22). 'As well as' is overused; replace with 'and' for clarity. 'Ancient history of my nation' is awkwardly phrased; 'the history of our nation' is clearer. Suggestions: Use concise 'there are' constructions where needed, include the definite article with famous monuments, and avoid repetitive conjunctions.

× Definitely yes, if I get a chance to live in a tall building then I would not lose the chance as living in a tall building will help me to take a view of around the city and also the bigger and tall buildings are like a very comfortable as well as cozy.

✓ Definitely yes. If I get a chance to live in a tall building, I will not miss it, because living there would allow me to have a view of the city. Also, bigger tall buildings are very comfortable and cozy.

Mix of conditional and future tense errors: original used 'if I get... then I would' which mixes first and second conditional; use 'if I get... I will' for real future possibility (Grammar problem type 7). 'Would not lose the chance' is awkward; 'will not miss it' is natural. 'Will help me to take a view of around the city' is ungrammatical; use 'allow me to have a view of the city' (verb + -ing and preposition issues, types 8 and 11). 'Are like a very comfortable as well as cozy' is incorrect adjective/adverb use; simplify to 'are very comfortable and cozy' (Grammar problem type 13). Suggestions: Choose consistent conditional/future structures, use natural verbs like 'miss' and 'allow', and place adjectives in normal order without redundant phrases.