Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: まず直接質問に答える簡潔な主文を作ってください。文法と語順の誤りが多く、不要な繰り返しや躊躇語（uh, umm）が頻出しています。より自然にするために：1) まず短く明確に“Yes”か“No”で答える。2) その理由を1文で付け加える（場所や環境の具体的説明）。3) つなぎ語（because, so, therefore）を使って論理を示す。発話は3文以内に収め、躊躇語を減らす練習をしてください。

Exemplo: No, there aren't any tall buildings near my home because I live in the countryside. I'm surrounded by fields and forests, so the area is mostly low-rise houses and nature.

Sugestão: 回答は直球で始め、理由と具体例を続けるべきです。現在の発話は繰り返しや言い淀みが多く、語彙の選択も不自然です。改善方法：1) まず短い主文（No, I don't really）で始める。2) なぜかを明確に述べる（I prefer photographing nature）。3) 具体例（flowers, landscapes）を1つか2つ挙げる。結論は1〜3文にまとめる練習をしてください。

Exemplo: No, I don't usually photograph buildings. I prefer taking pictures of nature because I enjoy capturing flowers and landscapes. For example, I often photograph wildflowers and nearby hills when I go for a walk.

Sugestão: 回答が漠然としており、目的語や場所の説明が不十分です。改善のポイント：1) 質問には簡潔に“Yes”か“No”で答える。2) 行きたい具体的な建物を一つ挙げ、その理由を述べる（歴史的価値、建築、設備など）。3) 場所や時期の詳細を加えると説得力が増します。躊躇語を減らし、文を2〜3文でまとめる練習をしてください。

Exemplo: Yes, there is. I'd like to visit the main prefectural library because it has a historic reading room and a large collection of local archives. I plan to go there next time I visit the city to do some research.

Sugestão: 意見は伝わりますが、表現が非常に混乱しています。改善方法：1) 明確な主文で始め（No, I don't want to live in a tall building.）、2) 理由を2つ程度、簡潔に述べる（cost, fear of heights, preference for quiet）。3) つなぎ語（because, also）を使って論理を示す。感情を説明する際は具体例（e.g. noisy, crowded）を入れると説得力が上がります。話は2〜3文に収めてください。

Exemplo: No, I don't want to live in a tall building because they are usually more expensive and often feel crowded. I also prefer a quiet house close to nature, so a low-rise home suits me better.

× Nor it does the, uh, not any, uh, tall highlight spreading are in my neighborhood because now I'm out of currently out of in or uh, in our uh, uh, country. Sorry, uh, where, umm, surrounded upon nature, yeah.

✓ No, there are no tall buildings in my neighborhood because I currently live in the countryside, where we are surrounded by nature.

The original sentence is disfluent and has incorrect sentence structure and word order. It uses fragments and duplicated words (e.g., 'out of currently out of in or uh') and incorrect phrases ('tall highlight spreading are'). The correct form uses 'there are no tall buildings' (existential 'there be' with plural noun) and a clear clause 'I currently live in the countryside, where we are surrounded by nature.' Suggestion: plan the sentence before speaking, use simple clauses, and practice the 'there is/there are' structure for stating existence. Grammar problem type ID: 26

× No, not really. I uh, I'm not a type of person. Uh, I, I'm, I'm much, uh, taking 40, uh, whenever I take photo of, I like to, uh, to taking photo of, uh, nature, such as flowers or.

✓ No, not really. I'm not that kind of person. When I take photos, I prefer taking pictures of nature, such as flowers.

The original has incorrect use of gerund and infinitive forms ('to taking', 'taking 40' unclear) and awkward noun phrases. Use 'that kind of person' instead of 'type of person' for naturalness, 'take photos' for plural usage, and 'prefer taking pictures' for correct verb+ing after 'prefer'. Suggestion: use 'prefer + -ing' and 'take photos' consistently and avoid filler words. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× Well, yes, I have some, uh, buildings, uh, I'd like to update the, uh, someday. One of, uh, there's one over there saying, uh, it's umm. Umm, act uh, the big library in actual prefecture to uh.

✓ Well, yes, there are some buildings I'd like to visit someday. One is the big library in my prefecture.

The original is confused with wrong verb choice ('update' instead of 'visit'), unnecessary fillers, and broken clauses ('there's one over there saying'). The corrected sentence uses simple, clear phrasing: 'I'd like to visit' and 'the big library in my prefecture.' Suggestion: choose correct verbs for intended meaning (visit vs update) and use concise clauses. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Nor I've never uh, wanted to uh, live in Howard buildings because I, uh, I hate umm, the price at say, uh, I hate to being umm, adatory prices and uh, umm, it uh, fears me and.

✓ No, I've never wanted to live in high-rise buildings because they are expensive and that worries me.

The original contains plural/singular confusion and wrong word choices ('Howard buildings'? 'adatory prices'). Use plural 'high-rise buildings' or singular depending on context; here plural matches general statement. Also 'they are expensive' correctly matches plural subject. Suggestion: use clear vocabulary ('high-rise' or 'tall') and ensure subject and verb match number; avoid repeating fillers. Grammar problem type ID: 27