Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response direct, correct grammar and avoid hesitations. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one short supporting detail. Use correct negatives and past participle when appropriate.

Exemplo: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home because I live in a small village. For example, the highest structures here are two-storey houses and small shops, so I rarely see skyscrapers.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use consistent tense. Remove filler words and clarify frequency with a linking phrase. Give a specific reason or one example to support your answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I visit a city because I enjoy their architecture. For instance, I usually photograph historic facades or modern towers to remember their unique details.

Sugestão: Be specific about the name and reason, and correct tense and word choice. Use a concise topic sentence, then add one or two clear supporting details (what interests you and why).

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to visit the Virasat-e-Khalsa museum. I’ve wanted to go for several months because it showcases Sikh history and cultural artifacts, and I’m interested in learning more about my heritage.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion in one sentence, then support it with 1–2 concise reasons using linking words. Correct grammar (singular/plural, adjectives, and collocations). Avoid repeating the same idea.

Exemplo: No, I don’t plan to live in a tall building because I prefer the peaceful atmosphere of a small village house. For example, village life feels more relaxing and commuting to local places is easier than living in a busy high-rise.

× As I live in a village, there is no not any uh tall building near my hometown, so I never seen that.

✓ As I live in a village, there are no tall buildings near my hometown, so I have never seen one.

This sentence has multiple problems: incorrect use of 'there is' with plural noun and double negation. Use 'there are' for plural 'buildings' (There be issue + subject-verb agreement). Remove double negative 'no not any' and use 'no' or 'not any'. Also use present perfect 'have never seen' to indicate experience up to now and replace 'that' with 'one' to refer to a building.

× Whenever I go in a city I used to take photo or take a took a snap for a streak and I usually like watching buildings as it looks very high 5.

✓ Whenever I go to a city, I usually take photos or snaps, and I like looking at buildings because they look very tall.

Errors include wrong preposition 'in' (should be 'to a city'), incorrect use of 'used to' which implies past habit (present routine uses 'usually'), wrong noun forms 'photo' pluralization, and awkward phrases 'take a took a snap' (remove redundancy). Use 'looking at' (verb + -ing form) and plural 'buildings' require 'they look' (subject-verb agreement). Remove stray '5'.

× Yes, there is a building called Virasite Khalsa. It is a museum which I was I would like to visit from last few months as it has a lot of things related to my culture and it devotes so many Sikh religions things.

✓ Yes, there is a building called Virasite Khalsa. It is a museum that I have wanted to visit for the last few months because it has many items related to my culture and it displays many Sikh religious artifacts.

Problems: misuse of relative clause ('which I was I would like' is incorrect) and tense (use present perfect 'have wanted' for desire continuing up to now). 'From last few months' should be 'for the last few months'. 'Devotes' is incorrect verb choice and 'Sikh religions things' is ungrammatical; use 'displays' and 'Sikh religious artifacts' (correct noun phrase).

× As such, I have no plan to live in a building, so I like living in a small houses situated in our villages because I feel peaceful and relax and there this kind of environment and it is easy to commutable from a small house as compared to a tall building.

✓ I do not plan to live in a building, so I prefer living in a small house in our village because I feel peaceful and relaxed in that kind of environment, and it is easier to commute from a small house than from a tall building.

Multiple issues: article and number errors ('a small houses' should be 'a small house' or 'small houses'); tense/aspect and wording ('have no plan' -> 'do not plan' or 'I have no plans'). Adjective/adverb misuse ('relax' should be past participle 'relaxed'). Word order and comparative structure: use 'easier to commute' and compare 'from a small house' with 'than from a tall building'. Remove redundant phrases 'as such' and fix prepositions ('in our village' singular).