Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence naming the building, then add one or two specific factual details. Avoid repetition and filler words. Also correct basic grammar (e.g., century, floors) and use simple linking words if needed.

Exemplo: Yes. There is a tall building near my home called the State Bank of Pakistan. It was built in the 19th century and has about 19 floors, so it stands out in our neighborhood.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give a specific reason and example. Use simple, correct verbs and avoid repeating phrases. Use a linking word like 'because' or 'when' to connect ideas and provide one concise example.

Exemplo: Sometimes I do, especially when a building catches my eye because of its design. For example, I often photograph old mosques and modern shopping malls to remember their unique details.

Sugestão: Give a clear answer naming the building you want to visit and explain one specific reason. Avoid vague phrases and unrelated details about offers. Keep responses to two or three sentences and use correct tense and articles.

Exemplo: Yes. I would like to visit a shopping complex called 'Cheese Value' near my area because it has many sections for different kinds of cheese and food. I want to try new products and compare prices there.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement of your preference, then give two specific reasons with linking words (for example, 'because' and 'for instance'). Fix grammar (e.g., 'I do not want to live', 'ground-floor buildings') and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: No, I do not want to live in a tall building because I find ground-floor flats healthier and more convenient. For instance, a ground-floor flat is closer to the road and a nearby garden, so it is easier to exercise and go outside quickly.

× Yes, obviously a tall building up near my home is called State Bank of Pakistan.

✓ Yes, there is a tall building near my home called the State Bank of Pakistan.

The sentence needs the existential construction 'there is' to state existence and the definite article 'the' before a specific institution name; also remove redundant 'up' and place 'called' after the noun for clarity. Suggestion: use 'There is' + 'a/an' or 'the' appropriately and place modifiers after the noun.

× Basically it basically that was that building was held in 19 century and it and that and it is and it's right now in 19th floor of its and.

✓ Basically, that building was built in the 19th century, and it currently has 19 floors.

Original contains repetition, wrong verb 'held' instead of 'built', missing articles, incorrect century expression, and an unclear phrase about floors. Use 'built in the 19th century' and 'has 19 floors' to convey meaning. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use correct verbs and articles.

× Sometime, sometime when some sometime when I see a building and building was and building is attracted to me.

✓ Sometimes, when I see a building that attracts me,

Use 'Sometimes' (adverb) and place it at sentence start; use the relative clause 'that attracts me' instead of incorrect passive forms and repetitions. Also 'building' should not be repeated. Suggestion: simplify and use present simple for general habits.

× So at that time I at that time I will try to snap the photo and to give my to increase my memory.

✓ At that time I try to take a photo to help me remember it.

Avoid repeated phrases; use 'try to take a photo' instead of 'try to snap the photo and to give my to increase my memory'. Use 'to help me remember it' for purpose. Use present simple for habitual actions. Suggestion: keep verbs concise and use 'remember' instead of 'increase my memory.'

× I guess it's a building of like an it's a building under the shopping center, the name of cheese value.

✓ I think there is a building under a shopping center called 'Cheese Value'.

Original is repetitive and ungrammatical. Use 'there is' for existence, choose 'a' for a non-specific shopping center, and present the name clearly. Suggestion: restructure sentences to 'There is a ... called ...'.

× It's the cheese that you have different have different categories like it's giving some kind of offers for a buyers and customers.

✓ It is a cheese shop that has different categories and offers promotions for buyers and customers.

Use 'cheese shop' or 'store' instead of ambiguous 'the cheese'; correct verb 'has' for possession and 'offers' for providing promotions; remove duplicate words. Suggestion: use concrete nouns and correct verb forms.

× So that's why I will visited every day.

✓ So that's why I visit it every day.

'Will visited' mixes future auxiliary with past participle incorrectly. Use present simple 'visit' for habitual action. Suggestion: use present simple for routines and avoid combining 'will' with past tense.

× I'm not, I'm not want to live in a tall building because of because of it's not good for health and basically the ground building are more attractive and best for runner and exercises.

✓ I don't want to live in a tall building because it is not good for my health, and ground-level buildings are more suitable for running and exercising.

Use 'I don't want' not 'I'm not want'. Use 'it is not good for my health' and 'ground-level buildings are' (plural agreement). 'Best for runner and exercises' is corrected to 'suitable for running and exercising.' Suggestion: use correct negation, possessive 'my', plural agreement and gerunds for activities.

× It is. It's basically it's nearest the road and nearest the garden.

✓ They are usually near the road and close to the garden.

'Nearest' followed by article is awkward; use 'near' or 'close to'. Also refer to plural 'they' or 'such buildings' rather than 'it' if talking about buildings in general. Suggestion: use 'near'/'close to' and match pronoun number to noun.

× That's why I want to live on the ground floor.

✓ That's why I want to live on the ground floor.

This sentence is correct. Use 'on the ground floor' to indicate the level in a building. No change needed.