Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail. Avoid repetition and fix sentence structure (e.g. subject-verb agreement, articles). Use a linking phrase if you add more info.

Exemplo: No, there aren’t any tall buildings near my home. I live in a small hometown where most houses are just two or three storeys, so skyscrapers are very rare there.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear short answer, then give one or two specific reasons or an example. Use correct verb forms and fewer awkward phrases. Replace vague phrases like “photo file person” and “provide me a content” with concrete descriptions.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings, especially when I travel. For example, I like photographing both tall modern buildings and historic monuments because they tell different stories about a city’s past and present.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer and correct factual errors. Keep details specific and accurate: mention location correctly and explain why you want to visit using concise reasons. Avoid long, unclear phrases and repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, I would love to visit the Taj Mahal in Agra, India. I want to see its famous Mughal architecture and marble inlay work, and to experience the historical atmosphere behind its story.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then support with two concise, specific reasons using linking words. Improve word choice and grammar (e.g., “top floor view”, “sense of satisfaction and relaxation”).

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because the top-floor views are amazing. Also, at night the city lights would make the apartment feel cozy and relaxing.

× Definitely no. To be honest, I live in a small hometown where people most of people have only two and three story house so it is very rare to me see a tall building in my hometown.

✓ Definitely no. To be honest, I live in a small hometown where most people have only two- and three-story houses, so it is very rare for me to see a tall building in my hometown.

Errors: 'people most of people' is redundant and incorrect word order; 'two and three story house' uses incorrect plurality and missing hyphens; 'it is very rare to me see' has incorrect word order and preposition. Suggestions: Use 'most people' for correct order, pluralize 'houses' to match 'most people', hyphenate compound adjectives 'two- and three-story', and use 'rare for me to see' or 'for me to see' for correct syntax.

× Of course, yes, being a photo file person, I love to capturing the photo with the tall building, especially when I travel.

✓ Of course. As someone who likes photography, I love capturing photos of tall buildings, especially when I travel.

Errors: 'being a photo file person' is ungrammatical and awkward; 'love to capturing' mixes infinitive and -ing forms (should be 'love to capture' or 'love capturing'); 'the photo with the tall building' uses definite article incorrectly and wrong preposition. Suggestions: Use 'as someone who likes photography' or 'as a photographer', choose either 'love capturing' (verb + -ing) or 'love to capture' (infinitive), and say 'capture photos of tall buildings'. Also split into clearer sentences.

× For example, I would like to take a photo with the tall building as well as a historical building which provide me a content about the historical period.

✓ For example, I would like to take a photo with a tall building as well as a historical building, which provides me with information about the historical period.

Errors: 'the tall building' and 'a historical building' inconsistent article usage; 'provide me a content' uses incorrect quantifier and collocation; missing preposition 'with' after 'provides me'. Suggestions: Use 'a tall building' unless referring to a specific building; use 'provides me with information' or 'gives me information' instead of 'provide me a content'; ensure subject-verb agreement 'which provides'.

× Definitely yes, I would like to visit in Taj Mahal which is located in the Germans of Bank of the Jamuna River and I would like to see the architecture style of Taj Mahal as well as the stunning beauty such as the background of Taj Mahal historical period.

✓ Definitely yes, I would like to visit the Taj Mahal, which is located on the banks of the Yamuna River, and I would like to see the architectural style of the Taj Mahal as well as its stunning beauty and historical background.

Errors: 'visit in Taj Mahal' wrong preposition; 'Germans of Bank of the Jamuna River' is incorrect phrase and name (should be 'banks of the Yamuna River'); 'architecture style' should be 'architectural style'; 'background of Taj Mahal historical period' is awkward. Suggestions: Use 'visit the Taj Mahal', 'on the banks of the Yamuna River', 'architectural style', and 'historical background' or 'its historical context'. Also include articles 'the Taj Mahal' and possessive 'its'.

× Of course, yes, I would like to live in a tall building. I would like to enjoy the view of top floor. Apart from this, I would like to see the lights in the night, which give me a sense of satisfied and relaxation.

✓ Of course, yes, I would like to live in a tall building. I would like to enjoy the view from the top floor. Apart from this, I would like to see the lights at night, which give me a sense of satisfaction and relaxation.

Errors: 'view of top floor' missing preposition 'from' and article 'the'; 'in the night' incorrect preposition, should be 'at night'; 'sense of satisfied' uses adjective instead of noun - use 'satisfaction'. Suggestions: Use 'view from the top floor', 'at night', and pair 'sense of' with a noun like 'satisfaction' and 'relaxation'.