Building— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Улучшите беглость и грамматику: уберите паузы и повторения, используйте правильную форму существительных и согласование. Сделайте ответ короче и естественнее, например: одна-две ясные фразы, первая — тема, вторая — краткая поддержка с конкретной деталью.

Exemplo: Yes. I live in the city centre, so there are many tall apartment buildings near my home. Most of them house local families and some include small shops on the ground floor.

Sugestão: Исправьте грамматику и выбор слов: избегайте лишних местоимений и неправильных форм; говорите более естественно и конкретно. Используйте связку для логики и укажите причину или пример, не больше двух предложений дополнения.

Exemplo: Yes, I often take photos of buildings when I travel to a new city or country. I do this to share interesting places with my family and to remember what the city looked like.

Sugestão: Устраните ошибки в произношении и грамматике, избегайте повторов: используйте связки и точные названия. Сформулируйте чёткое предложение о желании посетить здание, затем добавьте короткое объяснение почему, максимум два дополнительных предложения.

Exemplo: Yes. A friend sent me photos of the Petronas Twin Towers in Malaysia, and they inspired me to visit. I would love to see their architecture up close because the towers look stunning in those pictures.

Sugestão: Улучшите структуру и закончите мысль: начните с прямого ответа, затем добавьте одно-два предложения с причинами и возможными недостатками. Избегайте намеренно заполняющих слов (uh, umm) и повторов, используйте корректные времена и слова (e.g., 'afraid of heights').

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to live in a tall building because I enjoy having a wide view of the city from above. However, I might be worried about elevators or if I had a fear of heights, so I would consider those factors before choosing an apartment.

× I live at the center of the city. Uh, that's why there are a lot of, uh, tall apartment near my home and uh, most of them are apartments for local residents.

✓ I live in the center of the city. Uh, that's why there are a lot of tall apartments near my home, and most of them are for local residents.

The noun 'apartment' should be plural because it refers to many units; use 'apartments'. Use 'in the center' rather than 'at the center' for location in this context. Also remove redundant 'apartments' after 'most of them are' and simply say 'for local residents'. Improve punctuation and flow. Suggestions: use plural forms for countable nouns when referring to multiple items and prefer 'in the center' for city location.

× Yes, of course sometimes it does.

✓ Yes, of course, sometimes I do.

The original sentence uses 'does' incorrectly; 'take photos' is an action the speaker performs, so use 'I do' or 'I sometimes do'. Also add commas for natural speech. Suggestion: match auxiliary verb to the subject 'I'.

× When I visit to new city or country, I may take a photos of different buildings for sharing with my friends or with my family members.

✓ When I visit a new city or country, I may take photos of different buildings to share with my friends or family members.

Do not use 'visit to'; use 'visit' with the object directly. Use the article 'a' before 'new city'. 'a photos' is wrong—use uncountable 'photos' without 'a' or 'take some photos'. Use 'to share' instead of 'for sharing' for a more natural infinitive purpose clause. Also 'with my friends or family members' is better than repeating 'with'.

× Actually, it's a good way for having memorizes.

✓ Actually, it's a good way to remember things.

'Having memorizes' is incorrect English. Use 'to remember' or 'for remembering' and 'memories' is a noun; 'remember things' expresses the intended meaning. Suggestion: use infinitive 'to remember' for purpose and correct noun forms.

× Last year my friend visited to Malaysia and sent me a lot of photos and one of them is a twin building in the Malazi.

✓ Last year my friend visited Malaysia and sent me a lot of photos; one of them showed a twin building in Malaysia.

Again, do not use 'visited to'; use 'visited Malaysia'. Use past tense 'showed' to match 'sent me photos'. 'Malazi' is likely a misspelling of 'Malaysia'—corrected. Also replace 'is' with past 'showed' for consistency.

× The photos really inspired me for going there.

✓ The photos really inspired me to go there.

Use 'inspired me to do something' rather than 'inspired me for going'. Replace gerund with infinitive 'to go' after 'inspired'.

× After that I want to visit to Malazi and I am really keen on to visit.

✓ After that I wanted to visit Malaysia, and I am really keen to go.

Maintain tense consistency: 'After that' referring to past-stated events requires past tense 'wanted'. Remove 'to' after 'visit' in 'visit to Malaysia' and correct spelling to 'Malaysia'. 'Keen on to visit' is ungrammatical—use 'keen to go' or 'keen on visiting'. Suggestion: choose 'keen to go' for simplicity.

× Yeah umm, definitely, uh, it's I believe that it was very amazing when I, uh, live in the tall building because I I'm able to see all city views in a high in a high and there however, umm, in some cases, I may afraid from the.

✓ Yeah, um, definitely. I believe it would be amazing to live in a tall building because I would be able to see the whole city from a high floor; however, in some cases I might be afraid of heights.

Original has multiple issues: tense and modal consistency (use 'would be' for hypothetical), remove redundant 'it' and extra 'I', use 'live in' without tense mismatch, 'see the whole city' better than 'see all city views', 'from a high floor' is the correct prepositional phrase, and 'afraid from the' is incorrect—use 'afraid of heights' or 'afraid of them'. Also fix punctuation and redundancy. Suggestion: simplify and use correct prepositions 'in', 'from', and 'afraid of'.