Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then give 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb tenses and complete sentences. Avoid repetition and finish your thought.

Exemplo: My favourite food is adobo, a popular Filipino dish. I especially like the tender, flavorful chicken because it’s marinated in soy sauce and vinegar, and I often cook it for dinner when I want a comforting meal.

Sugestão: Use past tense consistently and remove hesitations. Give one or two specific memories and use linking words to connect ideas. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: When I was young, my favourite food was fried chicken. We only had it about once a month, so I remember how crispy and savory it tasted, and how excited we were to eat it together as a family.

Sugestão: Be specific about seasons or occasions and avoid repetition. Use linking words (for example, because, so, thus) and correct tense. Limit to 2–3 sentences and give one clear example.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, during holidays I eat traditional dishes from my region, and when I travel I try local specialties to explore new flavours.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, use past and present contrast, and give a specific reason and example. Remove filler words and complete the sentence. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood because I can now afford different cuisines. For instance, when I started working I began eating fast food like Jollibee frequently, and I also tried international dishes that I couldn't buy as a child.

× I love the chicken, it is tender, I like the meat and the last time I eat is on my dinner.

✓ I love the chicken; it is tender. I like the meat, and the last time I ate it was at my dinner.

The sentence mixes present tense ('eat') with past context 'last time'. Use past tense 'ate' for completed actions. Also 'at my dinner' is more natural than 'on my dinner'. Split run-on sentence into shorter sentences for clarity.

× When when I was young, my favorite food is fried chicken.

✓ When I was young, my favorite food was fried chicken.

The time phrase 'when I was young' sets past context, so the verb should be past tense 'was', not present 'is'. Also remove duplicate 'When'.

× We ate these once in a month and I remember it when I bite that it is crispy and savory.

✓ We ate it once a month, and I remember when I bit it that it was crispy and savory.

Use singular 'it' to refer to 'fried chicken' rather than 'these'. 'Once a month' is the correct expression. For completed past actions use past tense verbs: 'bit' and 'was'. Word order adjusted for natural English.

× I like the meat, it is tender and we enjoyed eating it.

✓ I liked the meat; it was tender, and we enjoyed eating it.

Context refers to childhood memories, so use past tense 'liked' and 'was'. Also change comma splice to proper punctuation.

× Sometimes I eat different foods at different times of the year because I want to try some dishes that I don't eat when I was young and I I want to explore the food, especially in other countries, I like to try the foods there.

✓ Sometimes I eat different foods at different times of the year because I want to try dishes that I didn't eat when I was young. I want to explore foods, especially those from other countries; I like to try food there.

When referencing past habits use past tense 'didn't eat'. Avoid repeating 'I'. Break into shorter sentences and use 'foods' or 'food' consistently. Use 'those from other countries' for clarity.

× Honestly yes it it changed a lot when I have a when I get a job and I have a salary to buy some foods or any cuisines like sample I buy everyday in the Jollibee but.

✓ Honestly, yes, it changed a lot when I got a job and had a salary to buy different foods or cuisines. For example, I buy from Jollibee every day.

The change occurred in the past, so use past tense 'changed', 'got', and 'had'. Remove duplicate 'it'. 'For example' is the correct phrase rather than 'like sample'. Use 'buy from Jollibee' and 'every day' as two words. Break run-on sentence into clear sentences.