Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more specific and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence naming a particular favourite or category, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Reduce hesitations and filler words (uh, um).

Exemplo: My favourite food is traditional home-cooked meals, especially grilled fish and vegetable stews. For example, my grandmother’s grilled fish is seasoned with garlic and herbs, which I find both comforting and healthy.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use past tense consistently. Give a clear topic sentence about your childhood preference, then add one or two specific examples and a brief reason using a linking word (because, so). Avoid repetition and fillers.

Exemplo: When I was young, I preferred unhealthy snacks. For example, at around age 12 I ate a lot of fries and sweets because I liked their taste and convenience, but I rarely ate vegetables back then.

Sugestão: Give a clear yes/no topic sentence and then explain with specific seasonal examples and linking words (for example, in summer/ during winter). Remove hesitations and be logical in sequence.

Exemplo: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I eat more fresh fruits like watermelon and berries, while in winter I prefer warm soups and roasted root vegetables to stay warm.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear statement about change, then explain briefly why with one or two specific reasons and linking words (because, so, therefore). Use past and present tenses correctly and avoid filler words.

Exemplo: Yes, my favourite foods have changed. As a child I liked sweets and fast food, but now I prefer healthier, traditional dishes because I care more about nutrition and taste balance.

× My favorite food is anything related with the tradition dishes or uh, healthy food.

✓ My favorite food is anything related to traditional dishes or, uh, healthy food.

Use 'related to' (not 'related with') and use the adjective 'traditional' instead of the noun 'tradition' to modify 'dishes'. Suggestion: say 'related to traditional dishes' and reduce filler words.

× My favorite food is anything related with the tradition dishes or uh, healthy food. I love them a lot.

✓ My favorite foods are anything related to traditional dishes or, uh, healthy food. I love them a lot.

Subject 'favorite food' refers to foods in general; if referring to multiple items, use plural 'favorite foods' and match pronoun 'them'. Alternatively keep singular 'favorite food' and change pronoun to 'it'. Suggestion: decide singular or plural and keep consistency.

× Honestly, when I was young I was preferring, uh, unhealthy food, unlike, uh, what I love nowadays because uh, when I was 12 I focused only on the, umm, unhealthy food Like fries, Like, uh, sweets.

✓ Honestly, when I was young I preferred, uh, unhealthy food, unlike what I love nowadays, because when I was 12 I focused only on unhealthy food like fries and sweets.

Use simple past 'preferred' instead of past continuous 'was preferring' for habitual past actions. Remove unnecessary commas and filler words, and use 'unhealthy food like fries and sweets' for natural listing. Suggestion: use simple past for repeated past habits.

× Of course I eat different foods because it's, it's season has its own, uh, style of food. Uh, yes, so and honestly, I prefer eating fruits a lot.

✓ Of course I eat different foods because each season has its own types of food. Yes, and honestly, I prefer eating a lot of fruit.

Incorrect phrase 'it's season has its own' should be 'each season has its own'. Use 'types of food' instead of 'style of food'. 'Fruits' as an uncountable general preference is better as 'fruit' or 'a lot of fruit'. Suggestion: say 'each season has its own types of food' and 'I prefer eating a lot of fruit.'

× Uh, honestly it changed a lot because I when I was child I prefer eating sweets and unhealthy food unlike uh, what I like most today.

✓ Uh, honestly it changed a lot because when I was a child I preferred eating sweets and unhealthy food, unlike what I like most today.

Use simple past 'changed' and 'preferred' for past events. Include article 'a' before 'child'. The present 'prefer' is incorrect for past; use 'preferred'. Suggestion: use 'when I was a child' and past tense for past habits.

× Uh, honestly it changed a lot because I when I was child I prefer eating sweets and unhealthy food unlike uh, what I like most today.

✓ Uh, honestly my taste changed a lot because when I was a child I preferred eating sweets and unhealthy food, unlike what I like most today.

Using 'it' is vague; specify 'my taste' or 'my favorite food' to be clearer. Also reorder for natural English: 'my taste changed a lot'. Suggestion: replace vague pronoun with specific noun and keep consistent tense.