Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise: start with a clear topic sentence naming your favourite food, then give 1–2 specific supporting details (ingredients, flavours, or why you like it). Avoid repetition and correct basic grammar (tense, articles, word order). Use linking words like “also” or “because” to connect ideas.

Exemplo: My favourite food is momo. They are dumplings made with a wheat wrapper and usually filled with spiced buffalo meat, although chicken and vegetable versions are common as well. I love them because the filling is juicy and the dipping sauce is spicy, which makes them very satisfying.

Sugestão: Answer directly: state what you liked when young and compare to now briefly. Use past tense correctly and one linking word for contrast or similarity (e.g., “still” or “now”). Keep it to 1–3 sentences.

Exemplo: When I was young I also liked momo. I enjoyed them because they were easy to eat and tasty, and I still like them now, so my preference has stayed the same.

Sugestão: Be specific about seasonal differences and give examples. Use conditional linking or sequencing words like “in summer” and “in winter” to organise your answer. Correct vocabulary (“try” instead of “test”) and grammar (plural forms, articles) will help clarity.

Exemplo: Yes, I eat different foods during the year. For example, in summer I prefer light meals like salads and fruit, while in winter I enjoy hearty soups and stews. I also like to try new dishes when the seasons change.

Sugestão: Give a clear yes/no answer and explain why with a specific reason or example. Use correct verb forms (has/have, was/were) and avoid filler words. Limit to 2–3 sentences: one topic sentence + one supporting detail.

Exemplo: No, my favourite food has not changed since I was a child; I still love momo. Over time I have tried more varieties, but my preference for the traditional buffalo-momo has remained the same.

× When to talk about my favorite food it was Momo.

✓ When I talk about my favorite food, it is momo.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and tense. 'When to talk about' is not correct English; use 'When I talk about'. Also 'it was Momo' uses past tense incorrectly for a general preference—use present tense 'it is momo'. Improve by placing the subject 'I' after 'When' and using present tense for a habitual preference.

× It was made by all flour and cornflour and inside in the moment there was a Buffalo meat and we can find a variety of momo also like a chicken or vegetable if you are vegetable.

✓ It is made from wheat flour and cornflour, and inside there is buffalo meat; we can also find varieties like chicken or vegetable for vegetarians.

Multiple errors: wrong preposition 'made by' should be 'made from' (material), 'all flour' is incorrect—use 'wheat flour' or just 'flour', 'inside in the moment' is meaningless—use 'inside there is', 'Buffalo meat' should be lowercase 'buffalo meat', 'we can find a variety of momo' should be 'we can find varieties of momo' or 'varieties like', and 'if you are vegetable' is wrong—use 'for vegetarians'. Corrections fix material preposition, noun choice, word order, and correct term for people who do not eat meat.

× When to talk about this question, I was still a young person, but at this moment I like the momo as I said earlier.

✓ When I was young, I liked the same food; at the moment I still like momo, as I said earlier.

'When to talk about this question' is incorrect; use 'When I was young'. The sentence mixes tenses awkwardly—use past tense 'liked' for the past and present tense 'like' for the current preference. Reordering clarifies meaning.

× Want to talk about this question yes, of course I eat different foods at different times of the year because I have to test uh, I like to test every new foods uh.

✓ Yes, of course I eat different foods at different times of the year because I like to try new foods.

Fragment 'Want to talk about this question' is incorrect; start with 'Yes'. 'I have to test' is unnatural—use 'I like to try'. 'Every new foods' mixes 'every' with plural; use 'new foods' or 'every new food'. Removing filler 'uh' and fixing verb collocations improves clarity.

× Has your favourite food changed since you were a child?

✓ No correction needed.

This is the examiner's question and is grammatically correct. No change required.

× Uh, let's talk about this question. Uh, is of course my favorite food change since, uh, I were a child when I was a child.

✓ Let's talk about this. Of course my favorite food has changed since I was a child.

Remove filler 'uh' and simplify. Use present perfect 'has changed' to link past to present. 'I were a child' is incorrect; use 'I was a child'. Reordering improves fluency.

× I like a charming, uh, and now as I, as this moment, at this moment, I like more.

✓ When I was a child I liked something different, and now I like momo more.

Original sentence is unclear and contains filler and repetition. 'I like a charming' is ungrammatical—'charming' is an adjective and needs a noun. Clarify what was liked in the past and use comparative 'like ... more' to show change. Remove redundancies 'as I, as this moment, at this moment'.