Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid filler words and incorrect verb forms. Also correct subject-verb agreement and possessive forms (e.g., "my mother's cooking").

Exemplo: My favourite food is homemade dishes, especially my mother’s cooking. They are healthy and full of flavour, and I enjoy them more than fast food because they are made with fresh ingredients and family recipes.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and use specific details. Fix grammar (past tense) and clarify phrases ("made in the rooms" unclear). Use a linking word to connect reasons or memories.

Exemplo: When I was young, I loved potato dishes my mother made. They were tasty and often spicy, and I enjoyed sharing them with my friends because we ate them together after school.

Sugestão: Organize your answer: start with a clear yes/no statement and explain with specific seasonal examples. Avoid vague phrases. Use linking words (for example, in summer..., in winter...) and correct noun phrases ("seasonal vegetables").

Exemplo: Yes, I do. In my country we eat seasonal vegetables: for example, in summer we eat fresh tomatoes and cucumbers, while in winter we have root vegetables like yams and carrots that are common and more available then.

Sugestão: Answer directly and use past vs. present contrast with linking words (e.g., "when I was younger... now..."). Be specific about which foods changed and why. Correct grammar and word order.

Exemplo: Yes, my tastes have changed. When I was younger I mostly liked potatoes and avoided other vegetables, but now I enjoy a wide range of vegetables because I have learned to cook them in different ways and they taste better to me.

× My favorite food are the old food I've made in the home.

✓ My favorite food is the old food I've made at home.

The subject 'My favorite food' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' not 'are'. Also 'in the home' is unnatural; use 'at home'. Fix plural 'food' context by keeping 'food' as uncountable (singular verb) and adjust preposition.

× My favorite food are the old food I've made in the home.

✓ My favorite food is the old food I've made at home.

Use the preposition 'at' with 'home' to indicate location. 'In the home' is possible but less natural in this context; 'at home' is the common phrase.

× Yeah, because it, uh, it is healthy.

✓ Yeah, because it is healthy.

Redundant repetition 'it, uh, it' should be reduced to a single 'it' for correct sentence flow. Present tense 'is' is appropriate.

× It is delicious too and from the mothers and it is very tasty food here.

✓ It is delicious and homemade by my mother, and the food here is very tasty.

Original sentence uses vague pronoun 'from the mothers'. Clarify with 'homemade by my mother'. Maintain pronoun consistency and natural word order.

× I like little fast food too, but the most I like is.

✓ I like fast food a little, but what I like most is homemade food.

The original sentence is incomplete and has awkward word order. Reorder to 'I like fast food a little' and complete the second clause 'what I like most is homemade food'.

× I like. Potatoes that made in the rooms.

✓ I liked potatoes that were made in the house when I was young.

The question asks about the past ('when you were young'), so use past tense 'liked' and passive 'were made'. 'Rooms' is incorrect for 'house'; use 'house' or 'home'.

× Potatoes that made in the rooms.

✓ Potatoes that were made in the house.

Use 'in the house' or 'at home' for location. Also include auxiliary 'were' for passive voice.

× It was very delicious. Tasty and spicy too because the mother made it.

✓ It was very delicious, tasty, and spicy because my mother made it.

Combine adjectives with commas and use possessive 'my mother' for clarity. Maintain past tense 'was'.

× Served with my friends and it is very tasty.

✓ It was served to my friends and me, and it was very tasty.

Use the correct object pronoun 'me' instead of 'I'. Maintain past tense 'was' to match context.

× Umm, not in the air, but the month.

✓ Umm, not in the air, but by month.

The phrase 'not in the air' is unclear. Likely meaning is 'not all year, but by month' so use 'by month' or 'at different months'.

× Yeah, because the monthly vegetables which are different in my country, half month, others vegetable, half month other vegetables yam not in the air but doing month.

✓ Yes, because seasonal vegetables differ in my country: some are available for half the month and others for the other half of the month.

The sentence is ungrammatical and wordy. Use 'seasonal vegetables' and clarify availability 'available for half the month' to express intended meaning. Fix plural 'vegetables' and word order.

× Yeah, because the monthly vegetables which are different in my country, half month, others vegetable, half month other vegetables yam not in the air but doing month.

✓ Yes, because vegetables are seasonal in my country; some are available at different times of the month.

Restructure the sentence for clarity: state the main idea 'vegetables are seasonal' and then give a concise explanation about timing. Remove unclear words like 'yam' and 'doing'.

× Yes it changes inside.

✓ Yes, it has changed over time.

Question asks about change since childhood (past to present). Use present perfect 'has changed' to indicate change from past to now. 'Inside' is incorrect here.

× I don't like vegetables I only eat vegetable I like most was potatoes and now the all vegetables I eat at they all are my favorite I like them too much.

✓ I didn't like vegetables; I only ate potatoes before, but now I eat all kinds of vegetables and they are all my favorites; I like them very much.

Multiple tense and agreement errors: use past tense 'didn't like' and 'ate' for childhood, then present tense 'now I eat' for current habits. Fix plural 'vegetables', article usage, and word order. Split into clearer clauses and use appropriate punctuation.