Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and clear: state the food by name in one sentence, then give 1–2 specific details (why you like it, when you eat it). Use correct grammar and avoid filler words. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use linking words like “because” or “so”.

Exemplo: My favourite food is mantı, a traditional Turkish dumpling. I like it because the filling is flavorful and it’s served with garlic yogurt, so it tastes rich and comforting.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence describing what you liked, then give a specific reason or example. Correct verb forms and articles are needed. Use a linking word (for example, because) to connect idea and keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: When I was young, I loved chocolate and other sweets. I ate a lot of desserts because they were tasty and my parents sometimes rewarded me with them.

Sugestão: Answer the seasonal question directly (yes or no), then give specific examples of seasonal differences or explain that you don’t change your diet. Use linking words (however, in summer, during winter) and avoid vague phrases. Keep sentences grammatical and concise.

Exemplo: Not really — I tend to eat the same kinds of food year-round, such as pasta and pizza. However, in winter I sometimes prefer warm soups, while in summer I eat more salads and fruit to stay cool.

Sugestão: State clearly whether your favourite food has changed (Yes/No). Provide 1–2 concise supporting details explaining why, using past and present verb forms correctly. Use linking words like “because” or “so” to show reason and keep under five sentences.

Exemplo: No, my favourite foods haven’t changed much since I was a child. I still prefer pasta and pizza because they are easy and comforting, although now I sometimes try healthier versions with more vegetables.

× Oh that's really good question.

✓ Oh, that's a really good question.

Missing determiner 'a' before 'really good question' and needs a comma after 'Oh'. Suggestion: include the article and pause: 'Oh, that's a really good question.'

× My favorite food is in my.

✓ My favorite food is from my country.

The preposition 'in' plus 'my' is incorrect and incomplete. The intended meaning is possession or origin: 'from my country' or 'in my hometown'. Suggestion: use 'from' to indicate origin or 'in' with a complete noun phrase (e.g., 'in my country').

× I can't choose it right now but in my opinion these days I prefer to eat months.

✓ I can't choose right now, but these days I prefer to eat mantı (a Turkish dumpling).

'Choose it right now' is acceptable but 'in my opinion these days' is redundant and word order is awkward. 'Months' is a wrong word choice (likely 'mantı'). Suggestion: remove 'in my opinion' or place it appropriately and use the correct food name; add comma before 'but'.

× It is a Turkish food and in my country peoples I really love this food.

✓ It is a Turkish food and in my country people really love it.

'peoples' is incorrect plural for 'people'; article use and word order are wrong. Use 'people' (uncountable plural) and 'it' to refer to the food. Suggestion: 'people really love it' or 'people in my country really love it.'

× When I was a young and I prefer to eat chocolate, I really love eat something, but I hate to eat vegetables, so I really like to eat desserts.

✓ When I was young, I preferred to eat chocolate; I really loved eating sweet things, but I hated vegetables, so I liked desserts.

'a young' is incorrect — 'young' without an article is correct. Tense consistency: question asks about past, so use past tense ('preferred', 'loved', 'hated'). 'I really love eat something' wrongly mixes forms; use 'loved eating sweet things'. Suggestion: keep past tense and correct verb forms ('love eating' -> 'loved eating').

× When I was a young and I prefer to eat chocolate, I really love eat something, but I hate to eat vegetables, so I really like to eat desserts.

✓ When I was young, I preferred to eat chocolate; I really loved eating sweet things, but I hated vegetables, so I liked desserts.

Also 'to eat vegetables' is acceptable but parallel structure is improved by using consistent gerund or infinitive forms. Suggestion: use 'loved eating' and 'hated eating' for parallelism.

× And when I want to eat something I usually prefer to eat like pasta ***** or pizza.

✓ When I want to eat something, I usually prefer pasta or pizza.

Starting with 'And' is unnecessary; 'prefer to eat like pasta' is ungrammatical. Remove filler words and 'to eat' after 'prefer' is optional. Suggestion: 'I usually prefer pasta or pizza.'

× It's a basic foods like it's a very unhealthy but I like to eat.

✓ They are basic foods and are very unhealthy, but I like to eat them.

Subject-verb agreement and article use: 'It's a basic foods' mixes singular 'it' with plural 'foods'. Use plural pronoun 'they' and plural noun 'foods' or use singular 'food'. Also 'very unhealthy' needs linking verb. Suggestion: 'They are basic foods and very unhealthy, but I like to eat them.'

× Like not interest on different food, I prefer to eat as some spec.

✓ I'm not interested in different foods; I prefer to eat certain specific dishes.

Phrase 'not interest on' is incorrect; use 'not interested in'. 'as some spec' is unclear; likely 'certain specific dishes'. Suggestion: use 'I'm not interested in trying different foods' or 'I prefer certain dishes.'

× When I was a child I I can't eat something because I really hate to eat other things and I all day eating like pasta or pizza like this fast food or dessert.

✓ When I was a child I couldn't eat some things because I really hated other foods, and I ate pasta or pizza and other fast foods or desserts all day.

Tense errors: 'can't' should be past 'couldn't' to match 'When I was a child'. 'hate' should be past 'hated'. 'I all day eating' is ungrammatical; use 'I ate ... all day'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently and use correct past forms ('couldn't', 'hated', 'ate').

× So it doesn't change when I was a child.

✓ So it didn't change since I was a child.

Tense and time expression mismatch: 'doesn't change when I was a child' mixes present with past. Use past 'didn't change' or better 'hasn't changed since I was a child.' Suggestion: 'It hasn't changed since I was a child.'