Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, correct grammar, and use clearer vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence, reduce hesitations, fix grammar (e.g., 'especially in the summer' and 'cut it into dice' or 'dice it'), and give one specific example with a linking phrase. Aim for 2–4 sentences and avoid fillers like 'umm'.

Exemplo: My favourite food is fruit, especially watermelon in summer. For example, I often dice watermelon as a refreshing snack, and sometimes I blend it into a chilled drink to cool down after outdoor activities.

Sugestão: Answer directly, correct grammar and logic, and use linking words to explain the change. Replace vague phrases ('buttery things') with precise language and avoid contradictions ('can bear' vs 'can't'). Provide a clear reason for the change in taste.

Exemplo: When I was young, I liked greasy foods like hamburgers and pizza because they tasted exciting and were easy to find. However, as I got older I began to feel uncomfortable after eating heavy, oily meals, so now I prefer lighter, healthier options.

Sugestão: Focus on answering the question about seasonal variation rather than place. Correct grammar ('depends on where I live', 'few Korean restaurants') and reduce hedging. Use linking words to contrast seasonal and location-based differences and give one concise example.

Exemplo: Yes, I tend to eat different foods depending on the season; in summer I eat more fruit and salads, while in winter I prefer warm, hearty dishes. For example, when I studied in Australia, I ate more fast food like hamburgers because there were few Korean restaurants nearby, so location also affected my diet.

Sugestão: Give a direct, well-structured response and correct small errors ('favorite one', 'hasn't changed'). Keep sentences concise and add a brief explanation or example why it remained the same. Use linking words like 'because' to support your statement.

Exemplo: No, my favourite food hasn't changed — it's still fruit, especially watermelon. I've loved fruit since childhood because it's refreshing and easy to eat in summer; I always looked forward to watermelon every year.

× Umm I am a huge fan of all kinds of fruit and especially for summer season I love eating watermelons into different ways.

✓ Umm I am a huge fan of all kinds of fruit and especially in the summer I love eating watermelon in different ways.

Use 'in the summer' not 'for summer season' (preposition and article). 'Watermelon' as a mass noun is used without plural when speaking generally, and use 'in different ways' not 'into different ways'. Suggestion: say 'in the summer' and use 'watermelon' and 'in different ways'.

× For instance I just cut it into a dices and eat it and also I like to make it into water.

✓ For instance I just cut it into dice and eat it, and I also like to make it into juice.

'Dice' is the plural of 'die' but when cutting fruit, 'dice' (unchanged) or 'pieces' is used; 'a dices' is incorrect. Also 'make it into water' is unnatural; use 'juice'. Maintain simple present for habitual actions. Suggestion: use 'cut it into dice' or 'cut it into pieces' and 'make it into juice'.

× Umm. When I was young I enjoyed oily and buttery foods such as hamburgers and pizzas, etcetera. But as I'm getting older my stomach can bear with the buttery things, so yeah.

✓ Umm. When I was young I enjoyed oily and buttery foods such as hamburgers and pizza, etc. But as I'm getting older my stomach cannot bear buttery foods as well, so yeah.

'Pizzas' can be 'pizza' to refer to the kind of food; both are acceptable but keep consistent. 'Can bear with' is incorrect collocation; use 'cannot bear' or 'can't tolerate'. 'Buttery things' is informal; use 'buttery foods'. Suggestion: say 'my stomach can't bear buttery foods'.

× Yeah, obviously, because the food that I eat, umm, is depended by the place that I live in.

✓ Yeah, obviously, because the food that I eat depends on the place that I live in.

Use active verb 'depends on' not passive 'is depended by'. Also preposition 'on' is required. Suggestion: use 'depends on the place'.

× For instance, when I was in Australia as an exchange student, I was forced to eat a lot of hamburgers and pizza because there were only few Korean restaurants nearby.

✓ For instance, when I was in Australia as an exchange student, I had to eat a lot of hamburgers and pizza because there were only a few Korean restaurants nearby.

'Was forced to' is grammatical but implies coercion; 'had to' is more natural. Also missing article 'a few' (quantifier error). Suggestion: use 'a few' and 'had to' for necessity.

× I think my favorite 1 doesn't change a bit because I have been having a lot of fruit for all my life and since I can't remember I was always having a watermelon in every summer.

✓ I think my favorite hasn't changed at all because I have eaten a lot of fruit all my life, and for as long as I can remember I have always had a watermelon every summer.

Several issues: 'favorite 1' seems to be a typo; use 'favorite' or 'favourite food'. Use present perfect 'hasn't changed' to talk about change up to now. 'Have been having a lot of fruit for all my life' is awkward; use 'have eaten a lot of fruit all my life'. 'Since I can't remember' should be 'for as long as I can remember'. 'Was always having a watermelon in every summer' should be 'have always had a watermelon every summer' (correct tense and collocation). Suggestion: use present perfect and idiomatic expressions 'for as long as I can remember' and 'have always had'.