Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and complete sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, give brief reasons with specific details, and avoid pauses or unfinished phrases. Use linking words like because and also to connect ideas. Keep it within 3–4 short sentences.

Exemplo: My favourite food is satay. I often buy it at Pujawa because the meat is well-marinated and grilled over charcoal, which gives it a smoky flavour. I especially like the peanut sauce they serve with it, and I enjoy eating it with steamed rice or cucumber.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence about the food you liked as a child, then give specific supporting details and a short reason. Use linking words such as because or when to connect ideas and avoid sentence fragments.

Exemplo: When I was young, I loved my mother’s chicken curry. She made it with coconut milk and spices, and I especially enjoyed the tender pieces of chicken and the rich, creamy sauce. Because she cooked it often, it became my comfort food.

Sugestão: Provide a clear direct answer then add specific examples of seasonal foods and explain briefly why you eat them at those times. Use linking words like for example or during to make your answer coherent and avoid trailing off.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. For example, in winter I usually eat more soups and stews because they are warming, while in summer I prefer fresh salads and fruit because they are refreshing. During Ramadan I also choose special dishes like sweet vermicelli for iftar.

Sugestão: Give a clear, concise statement about whether your favourite food has changed, then support it with specific reasons and a brief comparison if relevant. Use linking words such as because and but to structure the response and keep sentences complete.

Exemplo: In my opinion, my favourite food has not changed since childhood because I still love my mother’s chicken curry for its familiar taste. I also enjoy satay, and although I try new dishes, these two foods remain my favourites because of the memories and flavours.

× My favorite food is satay. I always buy satay in the Pujawa because the.

✓ My favorite food is satay. I always buy satay in the Pujawa because it is delicious.

The original has an incomplete sentence 'because the.' and lacks a subject and verb. This is an article/errors and sentence structure issue: complete the clause by adding 'it is' to express reason. Use 'the Pujawa' only if it is a known place; otherwise 'Pujawa' without 'the.' Ensure sentences are complete and avoid fragments. ID:22

× The food is very delicious when I eat.

✓ The food is very delicious.

Adding 'when I eat' is redundant and awkward; 'delicious' already describes the food. The original sentence has unnecessary adverbial clause causing sentence structure awkwardness. Keep it concise: 'The food is very delicious.' ID:26

× I remember when I was tired. I like chicken.

✓ I remember that when I was a child I liked chicken.

The speaker intended to refer to past preferences, so use past tense 'liked' not present 'like.' Also make temporal reference clear: 'when I was a child.' The fragment 'when I was tired' is likely wrong context; replace with 'a child.' ID:5

× The Curry chicken.

✓ I liked curry chicken.

This fragment lacks a subject and verb. Convert to a full sentence with past tense to match context: 'I liked curry chicken.' ID:26

× My mom.

✓ My mom used to make it for me.

'My mom.' is a fragment. Provide a full clause to explain relationship, e.g., 'My mom used to make it for me.' Use past tense to match narrative about childhood. ID:26

× Yes I do. I eat different food at different time of this year.

✓ Yes, I do. I eat different foods at different times of the year.

Pluralization and noun-number agreement: 'food' -> 'foods' and 'time' -> 'times'. Also include article 'the' before 'year' to specify the year. This reflects habitual present tense. ID:6

× This year I eat. And.

✓ This year I have eaten different foods, and I will try more dishes later.

Fragments 'This year I eat. And.' are incomplete. Use present perfect 'have eaten' to describe this year's experience and add a coordinating clause for continuation. Ensure sentences are complete and maintain tense consistency. ID:26

× I in my opinion my favorite food not change since my since I child because I still like chicken Curry my mom cook and I like satay.

✓ In my opinion, my favorite food has not changed since I was a child because I still like the chicken curry my mom cooks and I also like satay.

Multiple issues: sentence fragments, word order, tense, and articles. Use present perfect 'has not changed' for a change from past to present. Correct word order 'since I was a child.' Add article 'the' before 'chicken curry' and 'cooks' for third person singular present. Use 'also' to link satay. Break into clear clauses for readability. ID:26