Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, correct grammar, avoid awkward phrases (e.g., “helps me on white”), and limit to up to 5 concise sentences. Add a specific reason and one brief example using linking words like “for example” or “so”.

Exemplo: I particularly enjoy cake because I have a sweet tooth and it cheers me up. For example, after a busy day I often have a slice of chocolate cake, which helps me relax and feel more energetic. Because it’s a treat, I usually have it only occasionally.

Sugestão: Make the answer grammatically correct and more specific. Begin with a clear topic sentence about childhood preferences, use linking words like “but” to contrast with current habits, and give concrete examples (e.g., specific fruits or snack types). Avoid unclear phrases like “choose with tags” or “survival snacks.”

Exemplo: As a child I loved sweet treats such as cookies, candies and cakes because their taste made me happy. However, now I try to avoid too much sugar, so I usually choose fresh fruit like apples or berries and healthy snacks such as nuts.

Sugestão: Use accurate vocabulary and clearer linking. Start with a direct statement, then give a specific seasonal example and explain why seasonal food is preferable. Correct word choices (e.g., ‘refreshing’ not ‘drying’, ‘tastier’ not ‘tessier’).

Exemplo: Yes, I prefer seasonal foods, so my diet changes throughout the year. For example, in summer I often eat watermelon because it’s very refreshing and hydrating, while in autumn I choose apples and pears because they’re ripe and tastier then.

Sugestão: Clarify the apparent contradiction (saying it hasn’t changed, then implying it has). Begin with a clear statement about change or consistency, use correct tense and vocabulary (e.g., ‘relieve stress’), and give a brief supporting example. Keep within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: My taste has stayed quite similar because I still enjoy sweet foods, although the specific items have changed slightly. For instance, I loved cake as a child, and now I often eat chocolate as a comfort food to relieve stress.

× My favorite food is cake because I have a sweet tooth and sugar that helps me on white.

✓ My favorite food is cake because I have a sweet tooth and sugar helps me feel better.

The original sentence has sentence structure errors and incorrect idiomatic phrases: 'that helps me on white' is ungrammatical. Replace with 'helps me feel better' to express the intended idea. Also remove the unnecessary 'that' after 'sugar' when making a simple verb clause. Suggestion: Keep subject-verb-object order and use idiomatic verbs (help + someone + do something).

× For example.

✓ For example,

'For example' alone is a sentence fragment; it should be attached to the following clause or followed by a comma and an example. Combine with the next sentence or add a clause to complete the thought. Suggestion: Write 'For example, after a busy day, I often have a slice of chocolate cake.'

× After a busy day I often have a slice of chocolate cake and it helps me relax and feels more energy.

✓ After a busy day, I often have a slice of chocolate cake; it helps me relax and feel more energetic.

There is a tense and subject-verb agreement issue: 'feels more energy' is incorrect. Use the verb 'feel' after 'helps me' (help + object + bare infinitive) and use the adjective 'energetic' to describe the speaker. Also add punctuation and commas for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'helps me relax and feel more energetic.'

× When I was a child, I really choose with tags such as cookies, candies and cakes because I love their text and they made me feel happy.

✓ When I was a child, I really chose items such as cookies, candies, and cakes because I loved their texture and they made me feel happy.

Multiple errors: 'choose' should be past tense 'chose' to match 'When I was a child' (past tense). 'With tags' is incorrect word choice; use 'items' or 'things'. 'Text' is the wrong word; the intended word is 'texture'. Also maintain past tense consistency with 'loved'. Suggestion: Use past tense verbs for past-time descriptions and choose correct nouns (texture, items).

× Now I try to avoid too much sugar and prefer fresh fruit or survival snacks instead.

✓ Now I try to avoid too much sugar and prefer fresh fruit or healthy snacks instead.

'Survival snacks' is an incorrect collocation; the intended meaning is likely 'healthy snacks'. Replace with 'healthy snacks' which is a correct adjective-noun combination. Keep present simple for habitual preferences. Suggestion: Use appropriate collocations like 'healthy snacks' or 'nutritious snacks.'

× I am a big friend of seasonal foods so I eat different things at different times of the year.

✓ I am a big fan of seasonal foods, so I eat different things at different times of the year.

'Big friend of' is incorrect collocation; use 'big fan of' to express liking. Add a comma before 'so' for clarity. Suggestion: Use common expressions like 'a big fan of' or 'very fond of.'

× For example, I usually eat watermelons in summer because they are very high drying and refreshing, and eating fruits that is in season is generally healthier and tessier.

✓ For example, I usually eat watermelons in summer because they are very juicy and refreshing, and eating fruits that are in season is generally healthier and tastier.

Several word choice and agreement errors: 'high drying' is wrong; 'juicy' fits watermelons. 'That is in season' should agree with plural 'fruits' so use 'that are in season.' 'Tessier' is a misspelling of 'tastier.' Suggestion: Check adjective selection ('juicy'), plural agreement ('fruits...are'), and spelling ('tastier').

× Absolutely, my favorite food hasn't changed much since I was a child.

✓ Absolutely, my favorite food hasn't changed much since I was a child.

This sentence is correct. It correctly uses present perfect 'hasn't changed' with 'since' to indicate a period from the past to now. No change needed. Suggestion: Keep present perfect when referring to changes from the past to now.

× I always love sweet things.

✓ I have always loved sweet things.

When describing a lasting preference from past to present, present perfect 'have always loved' is more natural than simple present 'always love.' This keeps tense consistent with previous sentence about 'since I was a child.' Suggestion: Use present perfect for actions or states continuing from the past to the present.

× As a child I love cake because it feels like the whole world was sweet, and nowadays I often eat chocolate as a comfort food to relieve suggest.

✓ As a child, I loved cake because it felt like the whole world was sweet, and nowadays I often eat chocolate as a comfort food to relieve stress.

Tense inconsistency: when referring to childhood, use past tense 'loved' and 'felt.' 'Relieve suggest' is incorrect word choice; the intended word is 'stress.' Suggestion: Use past tense for past time references and correct noun 'stress' for the feeling being relieved.