Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, chính xác và tự nhiên hơn; sửa ngữ pháp và trật tự từ; tránh cụm từ không tự nhiên như "cheese on the face" hay "with me"; bổ sung 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: vì vị béo ngậy, nhiều lớp thịt và phô mai) và dùng liên từ đơn giản để mạch văn rõ ràng.

Exemplo: My favourite food is lasagna, an Italian pasta dish. I love it because the layers of pasta, meat sauce and melted cheese are rich and comforting, and it’s perfect for cold evenings.

Sugestão: Cần dùng thì quá khứ đơn rõ ràng và cấu trúc câu hoàn chỉnh; tránh thiếu từ như "did" hoặc "made"; rút gọn và liên kết ý bằng các liên từ như "because" hoặc "so"; thêm một ví dụ cụ thể và ngắn gọn.

Exemplo: When I was a child, I usually liked sweet foods such as cakes and candy because they made me happy. For example, I often ate chocolate cake at birthday parties.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời lộn xộn và có lỗi từ vựng ("film meals" không rõ nghĩa) cùng ngữ pháp; cần bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp, rồi giải thích với liên từ (e.g. "but now"); dùng từ vựng phù hợp ("hearty/filling meals", "noodles with meat") và sửa cấu trúc để rõ ý hơn.

Exemplo: Yes. In the past I ate a lot of sweets like cakes and candy, but now I usually prefer hearty meals, such as rice noodles with meat or fish, because they give me more energy and are healthier.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời thiếu liên kết, nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và cụm từ không rõ nghĩa ("I was shy", "change the bargain"); cần trả lời rõ ràng "Yes/No" rồi giải thích lý do thay đổi, dùng từ vựng chính xác như "filling/hearty meals" và đưa ví dụ cụ thể về món ăn hiện tại so với trước đây.

Exemplo: Yes, it has changed. When I was a child I preferred sweets, but now I choose filling meals like lasagna or rice dishes because I want more nutrition and energy.

× My favorite food is lasagna from Italian pasta with cheese on the face and this was delicious with me.

✓ My favorite food is Italian lasagna with cheese on top, and it was delicious to me.

The original sentence uses incorrect prepositions and awkward phrasing: 'from Italian pasta' should be 'Italian lasagna' to name the dish; 'cheese on the face' is wrong—use 'cheese on top'; 'delicious with me' is ungrammatical—say 'delicious to me'. Also join clauses with 'and'. Improve by using correct prepositions and natural collocations (e.g., 'with cheese on top', 'delicious to me').

× In my childhood I usually sweet food like cake and candy because make me happy when I have it and when I eat it.

✓ In my childhood I usually ate sweet foods like cake and candy because they made me happy when I had them and when I ate them.

Tense and verb form errors: 'usually sweet food' lacks verb—use 'usually ate'; 'food' should be plural 'foods' or 'sweet treats'; 'because make me happy' needs past tense 'made me happy' and subject 'they'. Use consistent past tense for childhood habits. Also repeat pronouns appropriately ('them').

× In the past I like sweet foods like uh, cakes and candy, but now I prefer film meals.

✓ In the past I liked sweet foods like cakes and candy, but now I prefer full meals.

Tense inconsistency: 'In the past I like' should be past 'liked'. Also 'film meals' appears to be a wrong word—likely 'full meals'. Ensure verb tense matches time adverbials and choose correct vocabulary ('full meals').

× Chips, yes, uh, rice noodle with meat or fish because it's more energy and I want healthily.

✓ Chips, and rice noodles with meat or fish, because they give me more energy and I want to be healthy.

Multiple errors: 'rice noodle' should be plural 'rice noodles'; 'it's more energy' is incorrect—use 'they give me more energy' or 'they are more filling/energetic'; 'I want healthily' is wrong form—use 'I want to be healthy'. Use plural agreement and correct adjective/adverb forms ('healthy' as adjective describing a state).

× I was shy. I like with food and and change the bargain and now I want to eat filling meals.

✓ I was shy about food choices. I used to like different foods and change my preferences, and now I want to eat filling meals.

Sentence fragments and incorrect phrases: 'I like with food' is ungrammatical—likely 'I liked different foods' or 'I was fussy with food choices'. 'and change the bargain' is unclear—use 'change my preferences'. Maintain past tense for past habits ('used to') and connect ideas coherently. Improve by making subject-verb clear and using natural expressions ('used to', 'preferences').