Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Keep your answer focused and use clear sentence structure. Start with a concise topic sentence naming the favourite food, then give one or two specific supporting details (memory, taste, ingredients) using linking words. Avoid run-on sentences and repeated phrases; check verb tenses and subject–verb agreement.

Exemplo: My favourite food is adobo. I love it because my grandparents used to cook adobo with pineapple and a fried egg, which always made me feel at home. Consequently, the dish reminds me of warm family meals and comfort.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific details with correct grammar. Use linking words to connect reason and result. Avoid repetition and ensure pronouns and verb forms are correct.

Exemplo: When I was young I loved sweet treats. For example, my parents rewarded good school grades with chocolate marshmallow lollipops, so I became a big fan of them and still enjoy them now.

Sugestão: Answer directly about seasonal or occasion-based eating. If you mean you try different cuisines, say so clearly and give one specific example of seasonal foods or cuisines you eat and when. Use correct vocabulary for cuisines and avoid vague phrases.

Exemplo: I don't change my diet only by season, but I do try different cuisines at different times. For instance, in winter I prefer hearty Italian dishes like pasta, while in summer I enjoy lighter Japanese meals such as sushi and salads.

Sugestão: Give a direct yes/no answer and then support it with a clear reason or specific memory. Use concise sentences and correct grammar for clarity; avoid redundant phrases like 'since child' and 'for me just for me.'

Exemplo: No, my favourite food has not changed. Adobo has been my favourite since childhood because my grandmother always cooked it for me, and it reminds me of the warmth and care from those family meals.

× My favorite food since I was a child until now is adobo because it feels like I will still reunited with my grandpa grandma who is love the idea of cooking adobo with pineapple and also an egg with it and it feels like home.

✓ My favorite food since I was a child is adobo because it makes me feel like I am reunited with my grandparents, who loved the idea of cooking adobo with pineapple and an egg; it feels like home.

Subject-verb agreement and overall sentence structure errors (Grammar problem type 27 and 26). 'Will still reunited' mixes future auxiliary with past participle; correct is 'I am reunited' or 'I feel reunited.' 'Grandpa grandma' should be plural 'grandparents' and verb 'who is love' should be 'who loved' to match past habit. The long run-on sentence needs punctuation and clearer clause connections. Suggestion: divide clauses, use correct verb forms, and ensure subjects and verbs agree.

× It feels a warm hug from my grandma who teach me how to feed myself.

✓ It feels like a warm hug from my grandma who taught me how to feed myself.

Subject-verb agreement and tense (Grammar problem type 27 and 5). 'Feels a warm hug' needs 'feels like a warm hug' for correct expression. 'Who teach' should be past tense 'who taught' because the teaching happened in the past. Suggestion: use 'feels like' for comparisons and past tense for completed actions.

× When I was a kid I really liked the idea of eating sweet treat.

✓ When I was a kid, I really liked the idea of eating sweet treats.

Singular/plural and article usage (Grammar problem types 1 and 22). 'Sweet treat' should be plural 'sweet treats' or 'a sweet treat'. Also add a comma after the introductory clause. Suggestion: match singular/plural and include articles as needed.

× That why my parents always have this reward system when I was have a high grade on school so that they can give me chocolate marshmallow lollipop because I really like that and I I am the huge fan of it until now.

✓ That's why my parents always had a reward system when I got high grades at school so they could give me chocolates, marshmallows, or lollipops because I liked them; I am still a huge fan.

Multiple errors: sentence structure, tense and subject-verb agreement (Grammar problem types 26, 5, 27). 'That why' should be 'That's why'. 'Always have' should be past 'always had' to match 'when I was'. 'When I was have a high grade on school' should be 'when I got high grades at school'. List items need commas and plural forms. 'I I am the huge fan' should be 'I am still a huge fan.' Suggestion: keep consistent past tense for past habits, fix agreement, and break long run-on into clearer clauses.

× Yes, to be honest, as growing up, I really like the idea of this thing you cuisine, like Japanese cuisine, Italian, Italian cuisine, because I really like the idea of taste, what's new and how I used to like it and traveling around the world just to try something new.

✓ Yes, to be honest, as I grew up I really liked different cuisines, such as Japanese and Italian, because I enjoyed new tastes and I used to want to travel around the world to try new dishes.

Tense and sentence structure errors (Grammar problem types 5, 6, 26). 'As growing up' should be 'as I grew up'. 'I really like' should be past 'I really liked' to match timeframe. Phrase 'this thing you cuisine' is incorrect; use 'different cuisines'. 'I really like the idea of taste' is awkward; use 'enjoyed new tastes'. Suggestion: use consistent past tense for childhood actions and simplify phrasing.

× I will probably say no since child because adobo is one of my top one favorite since a kid and I really like the idea of not changing yet because I feel the warmth of my grandma who is liking of cooking adobo for me just for me so that I can feed myself.

✓ I would probably say no since childhood because adobo has been one of my favorite dishes since I was a kid, and I don't want to change it because I feel the warmth of my grandma who liked to cook adobo for me so I could feed myself.

Tense and modal usage and sentence structure errors (Grammar problem types 7, 6, 26). 'I will probably say no since child' is awkward; 'I would probably say no since childhood' or 'I would say no; it hasn't changed since childhood' is better. 'Is one of my top one favorite' is incorrect; use 'one of my favorite dishes'. 'Who is liking of cooking' should be 'who liked to cook' (past habit). Suggestion: use appropriate modal ('would') for hypothetical/current preference, consistent past/perfect forms for duration, and simplify redundant phrases.