Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, correct grammar, and use clearer linking and specific vocabulary. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two supporting details using linking words. Correct subject-verb agreement and phrasing (e.g., "Thai food has a wide variety of flavors"). Avoid repetition like saying "I love" twice in adjacent sentences.

Exemplo: I enjoy Thai food because it has a wide variety of flavors, such as salty, sweet and spicy. For example, papaya salad combines these tastes perfectly and is very refreshing, so it's my favourite dish.

Sugestão: Improve tense consistency and clarity, and shorten the answer. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Remove filler words like "uh" and correct phrases ("my family sold desserts", "leftovers").

Exemplo: When I was young, I liked desserts because they were delicious and my family sold them at the market. As a result, there were always leftovers for me to eat after their stall closed.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and then a brief, coherent explanation using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid contractions like "uh" and incorrect phrasing ("I with eat"). Say "not really" if you sometimes do. Be specific about what "local food" means or give an example.

Exemplo: Not really. I usually eat the same local dishes throughout the year because my family prefers traditional meals, such as rice with stir-fried vegetables and fish, rather than changing menus seasonally.

Sugestão: Use past and present tenses correctly and organize the answer: state the change, then give reasons with clear language. Correct vocabulary mistakes ("contains a lot of sugar", "it makes me gain weight quickly"). Keep it concise and avoid informal fragments.

Exemplo: Yes, it has changed. I used to love desserts, but as I grew up I realised they contain a lot of sugar and made me gain weight, so I started choosing healthier meals like salads and grilled fish.

× I love eating Thai food because they have so many variety of flavor like salty, sweet and spicy and especially papaya salad.

✓ I love eating Thai food because it has so much variety of flavor, like salty, sweet and spicy; especially papaya salad.

The subject 'Thai food' is singular and should be referred to with the singular pronoun 'it' (pronoun error). Additionally, 'many variety' is incorrect; use 'so much variety' or 'many varieties' (quantifier and noun form). The sentence was reorganized for clarity and parallelism.

× I love eating papaya salad because it's contain all of flavors and very delicious.

✓ I love eating papaya salad because it contains all the flavors and is very delicious.

Use 'contains' (third person singular verb) rather than 'contain'. Also use 'the flavors' to refer to specific flavors (definite article) and include the verb 'is' before 'very delicious' for a complete predicate.

× When I was young, I like dessert because, uh, it's delicious and one of the reason that I have to eat is my family selling desserts and every day my parents prepared sale in the market and I have leftover to eat every day, so I like it.

✓ When I was young, I liked desserts because they were delicious, and one reason I had to eat them was that my family sold desserts. Every day my parents set up a stall in the market and I had leftovers to eat, so I liked them.

The time frame is past, so verbs must be in past tense ('liked', 'were', 'had to eat', 'sold', 'set up', 'had leftovers'). Pronouns and plural forms adjusted ('desserts', 'them') for agreement. 'Prepared sale' is incorrect; 'set up a stall' is a natural phrasing.

× No absolutely not. I with eat the same food like almost every days because uh, I don't know what's the point of changing the food every year because we just eat our local food regularly.

✓ No, absolutely not. I will eat the same food almost every day because I don't know the point of changing food every year; we just eat our local food regularly.

Corrected tense for future intent with 'will eat' (future tense). Removed extraneous 'with'. 'Every days' is wrong; use 'every day' (singular). Simplified 'changing the food' to 'changing food'. Pronoun and article usage improved for natural English.

× Yes, absolutely. When I was younger I mentioned that I like dessert so much, but when I grow up I realize that dessert is not good for health and it contains a sugar a lot and it make me factor very quick so I change.

✓ Yes, absolutely. When I was younger I said that I liked desserts a lot, but as I grew up I realized that desserts are not good for your health because they contain a lot of sugar and make me gain weight quickly, so I changed.

Mixed tenses corrected to past where appropriate ('said', 'liked', 'grew', 'realized', 'changed'). 'Dessert' should be plural when speaking generally ('desserts'). 'Contain a sugar a lot' corrected to 'contain a lot of sugar'. 'Make me factor very quick' is unclear; replaced with 'make me gain weight quickly' for intended meaning. Pronoun 'your health' is idiomatic.