Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, clarity and vocabulary. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and fewer redundant phrases. Use specific reasons and one linking word. For example, say why you like pizza (taste, convenience) and mention balance briefly.

Exemplo: My favourite food is pizza because it has a rich, savory flavour and a crisp crust. However, I try to eat it less often now because I follow a balanced diet, so I usually have it as an occasional treat.

Sugestão: Use natural idioms sparingly and correct sentence structure. Begin with a clear topic sentence about liking sweets as a child, then give specific examples and one linking phrase. Avoid awkward idioms and filler words.

Exemplo: When I was young I loved sweet foods. For example, I often ate chocolate and cakes because I had a big sweet tooth, and I remember choosing desserts over savoury snacks.

Sugestão: Focus on clear, concise sentences and correct vocabulary. State directly whether you change your diet seasonally, give specific examples (seasonal fruits, warm soups in winter), and use linking words like 'for example' or 'in summer'. Avoid incorrect phrases like 'discrepancies foods' and grammar errors.

Exemplo: Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, I prefer light salads and fresh fruits in summer, while in winter I choose warm soups and roasted vegetables to stay warm.

Sugestão: Answer clearly whether your favourite food changed and explain how, using correct tense and concise supporting details. Start with a direct statement (Yes/No) then contrast past and present preferences with linking words like 'but' or 'however'.

Exemplo: Yes, my favourite foods have changed since childhood. I used to prefer sweets like cakes and chocolate, but now I enjoy savoury dishes such as pizza and grilled vegetables because I try to eat more balanced meals.

× To be honest, I am a foodie so I heavily into eating pizza.

✓ To be honest, I am a foodie so I am heavily into eating pizza.

The verb 'be' is missing before 'heavily into'. After 'be' + 'into' uses 'being into' structure; here the correct form is 'am heavily into'. Add the auxiliary verb 'am' to form present continuous/ state description. Suggestion: use 'I am really into eating pizza' for natural phrasing.

× It is due to the fact that it's flavorful and have a aromatic species.

✓ It is due to the fact that it's flavorful and has an aromatic spice.

Subject-verb agreement: the subject 'it' requires singular verb 'has' rather than 'have'. Also 'a aromatic species' has multiple errors: article + adjective needs 'an aromatic' and 'species' is wrong word; 'spice' is likely intended. Correction fixes agreement and word choice. Suggestion: 'it's flavorful and has an aromatic spice' or better 'it's flavorful and aromatic.'

× It is due to the fact that it's flavorful and have a aromatic species.

✓ It is due to the fact that it's flavorful and has an aromatic spice.

The article 'a' before a vowel sound should be 'an', so 'an aromatic'. Also 'species' is incorrect in this context; the correct noun is 'spice'. Combined with verb correction, use 'has an aromatic spice'. Suggestion: 'it's flavorful and aromatic'.

× But recently I stick to a balanced diet and limit the times I eat pizza.

✓ But recently I have been sticking to a balanced diet and limiting the times I eat pizza.

Time adverb 'recently' calls for present perfect continuous to indicate ongoing action that started in the past. Use 'have been sticking' and 'have been limiting' or present perfect simple 'have stuck/limited'. Also 'limit the times' is awkward; 'limit how often I eat pizza' is clearer. Suggestion: 'Recently I've been sticking to a balanced diet and limiting how often I eat pizza.'

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? -> Actually, when I was knee high to a rush hopper, I used to have a sweet tooth.

✓ Actually, when I was knee-high to a grasshopper, I used to have a sweet tooth.

Idiomatic phrase is 'knee-high to a grasshopper'. Original 'rush hopper' is incorrect word choice. Hyphenate 'knee-high'. 'Used to have a sweet tooth' correctly expresses past habit. Suggestion: use common idioms accurately.

× So my cup of tea is eating, uh, chocolate and cake have a lot of sugar.

✓ So my cup of tea is eating, uh, chocolate and cake that have a lot of sugar.

Pronoun/reference problem: the clause 'have a lot of sugar' needs a relative pronoun 'that' or 'which' referring to 'chocolate and cake'. Also 'my cup of tea is eating' is awkward; better: 'What I like is eating chocolate and cake that have a lot of sugar' or simply 'I like chocolate and cake because they have a lot of sugar.' Suggestion: 'I like chocolate and cake because they contain a lot of sugar.'

× To be honest, I always weighed my appetite so sometimes I try to eat discrepancies foods at this different times of the years to brighten my plate and it's the fact that I'm culinary experienced persons so I always try the different foods.

✓ To be honest, I always watch my appetite, so sometimes I try to eat different foods at different times of the year to brighten my plate, and I'm experienced in cooking, so I always try new dishes.

Multiple issues: 'weighed my appetite' is wrong verb; use 'watch my appetite'. 'Discrepancies foods' is incorrect adjective and noun order; use 'different foods'. 'This different times of the years' should be 'different times of the year'. 'It's the fact that I'm culinary experienced persons' has pronoun/number and word order errors; use 'I'm experienced in cooking' or 'culinary experience'. 'try the different foods' -> 'try new dishes'. Suggestions: simplify and use correct collocations: 'watch my appetite', 'different foods', 'different times of the year', 'experienced in cooking'.

× To be honest, I always weighed my appetite so sometimes I try to eat discrepancies foods at this different times of the years to brighten my plate and it's the fact that I'm culinary experienced persons so I always try the different foods.

✓ To be honest, I always watch my appetite, so sometimes I try to eat different foods at different times of the year to brighten my plate, and I'm experienced in cooking, so I always try new dishes.

Article usage: 'the years' is incorrect; use 'the year' in the phrase 'times of the year'. Also 'the different foods' is unnecessary; use 'different foods' or 'new dishes'. Suggestion: drop unnecessary definite articles and use standard time expressions.

× I would definitely say that where I was at an early age, I am a picky eater so I just only follow my childhood stable and falling into the trap of eating sweet food and dessert like cakes and fruits or chocolate.

✓ I would definitely say that when I was young I was a picky eater, so I used to stick to my childhood habits and fall into the trap of eating sweet foods and desserts like cakes, fruits, and chocolate.

Tense consistency: speaking about childhood requires past tense ('when I was young I was a picky eater', 'used to', 'fall' -> 'fall into' adjusted to 'fall' as part of past habitual). Also 'just only follow my childhood stable' is ungrammatical; 'stick to my childhood habits' conveys meaning. 'Dessert' should be plural 'desserts' when listing. Suggestion: keep past tense for past habits and use common collocations like 'used to' and 'stick to habits'.

× ...it's the fact that I'm culinary experienced persons...

✓ ...I'm experienced in cooking...

'Culinary experienced persons' mixes adjective/adverb and plural noun incorrectly. Use adjective 'culinary' with noun 'experience' or say 'experienced in cooking'. Also 'persons' is unnecessary; refer to self with singular. Suggestion: use 'I'm experienced in cooking' or 'I have culinary experience.'