Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, sentence structure and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, use correct verb forms, avoid repetition and keep answer within 3–4 fluent sentences. Add a brief specific detail about why you like it (taste, memories, convenience) and use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: My favourite food is rice. My wife cooks very delicious meals, and I especially enjoy the spicy chicken and vegetable rice she makes when I return from work. Because it is warm and comforting, it helps me relax after a long day.

Sugestão: Fix grammar and cohesion: use past and present tenses correctly and include a reason for the change. Use a linking word (e.g., but, however, so) and keep it concise with specific examples of junk food and healthy options.

Exemplo: When I was young, I loved eating junk food like chips and fast food, but now I avoid them and choose healthier options such as rice, steamed vegetables and grilled fish because I want to stay fit.

Sugestão: Be more specific about seasonal or festival foods and use clearer linking phrases. Mention examples of special dishes eaten during Ramadan and contrast them with regular meals using words like "whereas" or "in contrast".

Exemplo: Yes. During Ramadan we eat a greater variety of dishes such as dates, samosas and special stews for iftar, whereas in other months we usually have simpler meals like rice and vegetables.

Sugestão: Answer directly and correct repetition and grammar. State clearly whether your favourite food changed and give a concise, specific reason about cooking methods or tools, using linking words like "however" appropriately.

Exemplo: No, my favourite food has not changed since childhood. However, cooking methods have changed: people now use gas and electric stoves instead of wood fires, which affects taste and convenience.

× My favorite food is rice. My wife is a good cooker.

✓ My favorite food is rice. My wife is a good cook.

The word 'cooker' refers to a stove or appliance, not a person. Use 'cook' for a person who prepares food. This is a vocabulary choice error; replace incorrect noun with correct one.

× She cook very delicious meal.

✓ She cooks very delicious meals.

In the present simple for third person singular, add -s to the verb: 'cook' -> 'cooks'. Also make 'meal' plural or add an article: 'delicious meals' or 'a very delicious meal' to match general statement.

× I really like the other one when she make it when I come back from work.

✓ I really like the other one when she makes it when I come back from work.

For third person singular the verb should be 'makes'. Also the sentence is awkward: clarify 'the other one' by specifying the dish if possible. Maintain present simple for habitual actions (I come back).

× I used to like to eat junk food, however these days I stopped to eat them and start to focus on eating healthy food like rice, vegetables.

✓ I used to like eating junk food, but these days I have stopped eating it and have started to focus on eating healthy foods like rice and vegetables.

'Used to' plus gerund is natural: 'used to like eating'. To express change up to now use present perfect 'have stopped' and 'have started'. Use 'eat' -> 'eating'. 'Them' is incorrect for 'junk food' (uncountable), use 'it'. Use 'healthy foods' or 'healthy food' consistently and include 'and' between items.

× Yes I do. During the holiday month Ramadan, we eat kind of variety of foods, while in other months we eat a simpler food like rice and vegetables.

✓ Yes, I do. During the holy month of Ramadan, we eat a variety of foods, while in other months we eat simpler food like rice and vegetables.

Use commas after introductory 'Yes'. 'Holiday month Ramadan' is incorrect — say 'the holy month of Ramadan'. 'Kind of variety of foods' is ungrammatical; use 'a variety of foods'. 'A simpler food' is awkward; use 'simpler food' or 'simpler meals'.

× I think no. However the the way people are cooking the food might change because of the tools.

✓ I don't think so. However, the way people cook food might change because of the tools.

'I think no' is unnatural; use 'I don't think so'. Remove duplicate 'the the'. For habitual/general statements use present simple 'people cook' not progressive 'are cooking'. Omit 'the' before 'food' for general meaning.

× Nowadays they are used unlike before where they used woods to cook their food.

✓ Nowadays they use gas or electricity, unlike before when they used wood to cook their food.

'They are used' is incorrect passive. Use active 'they use'. Clarify what 'they' refers to (stoves/people) and give appropriate alternatives: 'gas or electricity'. Use 'when' not 'where' for time reference. 'Wood' should be singular or uncountable: 'wood'.