Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the sentence grammatically correct, be concise, and add a brief reason or description. Use one topic sentence and one supporting detail, linked naturally.

Exemplo: My favourite food is chocolate ice cream because I love its creamy texture and rich flavor. I usually enjoy it after dinner as a simple treat.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence about past preferences, avoid unclear comparisons, and give a specific example or reason using a linking word.

Exemplo: When I was younger I liked street food such as pizza and burgers. For example, I often bought pizza from a nearby stall because it was cheap and tasty.

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence about seasonal changes (or lack of them), then give a specific supporting detail and use linking words to connect thoughts. Clarify the birthday point as an exception.

Exemplo: Not really — I usually eat similar foods throughout the year, but I do eat differently on my birthday. For instance, on my birthday I go to my favourite restaurant and order special dishes like steak or seafood.

Sugestão: Answer directly and concisely, avoid filler phrases like “by the way,” and provide a brief reason or example to support your statement using a linking word.

Exemplo: No, my favourite food hasn't changed because I loved ice cream as a child and I still enjoy it now. For example, I still choose chocolate ice cream when I want a treat.

× I think that's my favorite food is ice cream and literally chocolate ice cream.

✓ I think my favorite food is ice cream, especially chocolate ice cream.

The original has redundant and awkward structure ('that's my favorite food is...'). This is a sentence structure error (type 26). Remove 'that's' and use a clearer connector; 'especially' better expresses emphasis than 'literally'. Ensure subject 'my favorite food' links directly to the verb 'is'.

× When I was younger I preferred the street food, pizza, burgers, but I'm older than other years.

✓ When I was younger, I preferred street food like pizza and burgers, but now I prefer different foods.

The original mixes past and a confusing comparative phrase 'I'm older than other years', which is unclear. The main issue is tense consistency and clarity (type 5). Keep past tense for childhood preference and add a present-tense contrast ('now I prefer...') to show change. Remove the unclear comparative clause.

× I eat different foods only it's birthdays.

✓ I eat different foods only on my birthday.

Using 'it's birthdays' is incorrect. This is a preposition and noun phrase error (type 11). Use the preposition 'on' with 'my birthday' and keep singular 'birthday' to match the occasion.

× It's my birthday.

✓ It is my birthday.

This is not strictly ungrammatical but in spoken transcript contractions are acceptable. Marked as a sentence structure note (type 26). Expanded form 'It is my birthday' is clearer in formal responses; no tense change needed.

× I usually eat in one restaurant, which I love very much.

✓ I usually eat at one restaurant that I really like.

Use the preposition 'at' for restaurants (type 11) and avoid heavy relative clause wording 'which I love very much'. This is a sentence structure and preposition issue (types 26 and 11). 'That I really like' is more natural.

× By the way, I think it's didn't change because I loved ice cream and I love it now.

✓ I don't think it has changed because I loved ice cream then and I love it now.

Combination of 'it's didn't change' is ungrammatical. This is a past tense and tense consistency error (type 5). Use present perfect 'has changed' with 'don't think' to say something remains true from past to present. Also contrast 'loved then' with 'love now' for clarity.