Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise: begin with a clear topic sentence naming your favourite food, avoid repetition and filler sounds, and add one or two specific supporting details (why you like it and when you eat it). Keep it under five sentences and use linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: My favourite food is rice. I especially enjoy plain steamed rice with grilled vegetables because it feels comforting and healthy. For example, when I have free time I often go to a nearby restaurant and order a rice dish with fresh vegetables.

Sugestão: Use past tense consistently and avoid unnecessary comments. Start with a clear past-topic sentence, then give specific examples and a brief reason for the change. Remove laughter or personal asides that interrupt fluency.

Exemplo: When I was young I preferred fast food. For example, I often ate burgers and instant noodles because they were tasty and convenient. However, as I grew older I began to choose healthier options and rarely eat those foods now.

Sugestão: Answer directly and reduce hesitation. Say simply that you change foods by season, give clear seasonal examples and a short reason using a linking word (for example/because). Keep sentences fluent and eliminate filler sounds.

Exemplo: Yes, I eat different foods in different seasons. For example, in summer I prefer ice cream and cold drinks because they help me cool down. In winter I usually choose hot soups and stews to stay warm.

Sugestão: Use correct grammar and precise vocabulary. Begin with a clear statement that your tastes have changed, explain what you liked before and what you prefer now, and give a specific reason. Correct phrasing: 'I've become healthier' or 'I eat more healthily.'

Exemplo: Yes, my favourite food has changed since childhood. I used to love sugary snacks like candy and chocolate, but now I prefer savory dishes such as grilled fish and vegetables because I have become more health-conscious. For example, I used to choose ice cream every time, but now I choose salads or grilled fish instead.

× I have a many delicious favorite food because I prefer delicious food.

✓ I have many delicious favorite foods because I prefer delicious food.

'a many' is incorrect; 'many' is used with plural countable nouns without 'a'. Also 'food' should be plural 'foods' when referring to multiple kinds. Suggestion: use 'many' + plural noun (many favorite foods).

× When I have free time, I go to restaurant and uh, I prefer to eat rice.

✓ When I have free time, I go to a restaurant and I prefer to eat rice.

Missing article before 'restaurant' ('a restaurant'). Also remove filler 'uh' and add 'I' for clarity. Suggestion: use 'go to a restaurant' for a single, unspecified restaurant.

× What kind of food did you like when you were young? -> When I was a young girl, I prefer fast food, I like burger and Nagis, but my mom didn't like it.

✓ When I was a young girl, I preferred fast food; I liked burgers and Nagis, but my mom didn't like them.

Question is past, so responses should use past tense: 'prefer' -> 'preferred', 'like' -> 'liked'. 'Burger' should be plural 'burgers' when general, and 'Nagis' likely plural so use 'them' not 'it'. Suggestion: match past tense throughout and use correct plural pronoun.

× He he he hate me when I was young, but now I don't eat all of them.

✓ Hehe, she hated me when I was young, but now I don't eat any of them.

Pronoun 'He he he' appears to be laughter; likely intended 'she' referring to mother, so use 'she'. 'Hate' should be past 'hated'. 'Don't eat all of them' is incorrect meaning; use 'don't eat any of them' to say none. Suggestion: use correct subject pronoun, past tense, and 'any' for none.

× Yes, yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I prefer uh, ice cream and ice water.

✓ Yes, I do eat different foods at different times of the year. For example, in summer I prefer ice cream and cold water.

Repetition 'yes, yes' and filler 'uh' are unnecessary. 'Ice water' is understandable but 'cold water' is more natural. Suggestion: keep present simple and remove fillers.

× Uh, then uh, uh, ice, all things. I like it.

✓ In summer I also like ice cream and similar cold treats.

Fragmented and unclear; 'ice, all things' is ungrammatical. 'I like it' is vague. Suggestion: combine into a clear sentence using plural or 'similar treats'.

× Yes, my favorite food has changed since childhood. I used to love sugary snacks like candy and chocolate, but now I prefer savory dishes such as grilled fish and vegetables because I've only healthy more.

✓ Yes, my favorite foods have changed since childhood. I used to love sugary snacks like candy and chocolate, but now I prefer savory dishes such as grilled fish and vegetables because I have been healthier.

'Favorite food has changed' -> 'favorite foods have changed' (plural) or keep singular but better plural. 'I've only healthy more' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is becoming healthier, so use 'I have been healthier' or 'I am healthier now'. Suggestion: use present perfect or present simple correctly to express change over time.

× For example, as a child, I would choose ice cream every time.

✓ For example, as a child, I would choose ice cream every time.

Sentence is grammatical; 'would' correctly describes habitual past action. No correction needed.