Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g. "Thai dishes" repeated) and small hesitations. Also use more precise vocabulary (e.g. "balance of sweet, spicy, salty and umami flavors").

Exemplo: I love Thai food because of its balanced flavors. For example, dishes like pad thai combine sweet, salty and tangy tastes, while curries offer rich, spicy and savory notes, so I never get bored.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and one clear supporting detail with correct grammar. Avoid filler words ("like", "you know") and incorrect phrases ("a sweet tooth" is used without article). Use past tense consistently.

Exemplo: When I was young, I preferred very sweet foods. For instance, I often chose candy and sugary desserts over savory dishes because I had a real sweet tooth.

Sugestão: Structure the answer: a clear yes/no topic sentence followed by specific examples using linking words. Remove repeated words and use correct collocations ("seasonal dishes", "during festivals"). Be concise and avoid awkward phrasing.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. During festivals people prepare seasonal dishes, for example at Christmas I usually eat gingerbread cookies and marshmallows, while in my country there are special rice cakes made only during harvest festivals.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear statement about change, then give specific reasons and use past/present contrast with correct grammar. Avoid repetition and informal fillers.

Exemplo: Yes, it has changed. As a child I preferred sweets and avoided vegetables, but as I grew older I started enjoying vegetables and fruits because I became more health-conscious and tried new recipes.

× My favorite food is Thai dishes because Thai dishes are delicious and they have wide range of taste that you can choose such as spicy, umami, saltiness and sweet.

✓ My favorite food is Thai cuisine because Thai dishes are delicious and they have a wide range of flavors that you can choose from, such as spicy, umami, salty, and sweet.

Use 'Thai cuisine' or 'Thai dishes' (not both repetitively) and include the article 'a' with 'wide range'. 'Taste' should be 'flavors' and use parallel adjectives: 'salty' not 'saltiness'. Add 'from' after 'choose' for correct verb phrase. Ensure consistent noun forms and parallel list items. Suggestion: Say 'a wide range of flavors that you can choose from, such as spicy, umami, salty, and sweet.'

× When I was young I liked bland food and especially food that have like a maximum level of sweetness because I'm quite a sweet tooth as when I was a child.

✓ When I was young I liked bland food and especially food that had a high level of sweetness because I was quite a sweet-toothed child.

Tense should be past: 'have' becomes 'had'. 'Maximum level of sweetness' is awkward; 'a high level of sweetness' is clearer. 'I'm quite a sweet tooth as when I was a child' mixes present and past and incorrect noun/adjective forms; use 'I was a sweet-toothed child'. Suggestion: Keep past tense throughout when referring to childhood: 'had' and 'was'.

× Yes, especially like during like those festival times where people gathered all different kind of ingredients to make that particular dishes that that is limited on that seasons like during Christmas time, I always find myself finding a gingerbread cookies or like marshmallow.

✓ Yes, especially during festival times when people gather many different kinds of ingredients to make particular dishes that are available only in those seasons. For example, at Christmas I often find myself eating gingerbread cookies or marshmallows.

Problems: inconsistent tense and number ('gathered' should be 'gather' if speaking generally, and 'all different kind' should be 'many different kinds'). 'That particular dishes that that is limited on that seasons' is ungrammatical—use 'particular dishes that are available only in those seasons'. 'I always find myself finding' is redundant; use 'I often find myself eating'. Articles: 'a gingerbread cookies' is wrong—'gingerbread cookies' (plural) or 'a gingerbread cookie'. Suggestion: Use plural/singular consistently and avoid redundant words; keep present simple for habitual actions.

× Well, I think it quite differs from different ages. When I was a child I was like a really sweet toothed kid where that like doesn't like to eat any veggies or other kind of fruits. But as I grew, I tend to eat those those foods more.

✓ Well, I think it differs at different ages. When I was a child I was a really sweet-toothed kid who didn't like to eat vegetables or many kinds of fruits. But as I grew up, I tended to eat those foods more.

Several issues: 'it quite differs from different ages' should be 'it differs at different ages'. Use past tense for childhood: 'didn't like' not 'doesn't like'. Use 'who' to refer to 'kid' and 'sweet-toothed' as adjective. 'Veggies' is informal; use 'vegetables'. 'Other kind of fruits' should be 'many kinds of fruits' or 'other kinds of fruit'. For the change over time, use past tense 'tended' and 'grew up' for clarity. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent and use correct relative pronouns and plural forms.