Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and add one specific reason or detail. Use a clear topic sentence, one linking phrase and one supporting detail. Watch verb forms, articles, and plural agreement.

Exemplo: My favourite food is biryani. I especially love my mother’s biryani because she uses fragrant spices and long-grain rice, which gives it a rich aroma and flavour. As a result, it tastes much better than any restaurant biryani I have tried.

Sugestão: Answer directly with correct tense and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, give one specific reason and a short example. Correct verb forms and word order.

Exemplo: When I was young, I liked eating potatoes. My mother often cooked simple potato dishes like mashed potatoes and fried potatoes, so I grew used to them and enjoyed their taste.

Sugestão: Organise the answer by time of day or season, use correct vocabulary and tense, and avoid repeating words. Use linking words (for example, "in the morning", "in the evening") and give one specific detail for each time.

Exemplo: Yes. In the morning I usually eat bread and eggs for a quick breakfast. In the evening I prefer heavier meals like biryani, while at night I choose light food such as a fresh salad to help me sleep better.

Sugestão: Provide a clear comparison between past and present using linking words (e.g. "when I was a child", "now"). Finish your thought with a specific example of current favourite and reason. Use correct grammar and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, my favourite food has changed. When I was a child I mostly ate simple foods like potatoes and bread, but now I prefer more complex dishes such as biryani because I enjoy richer flavours and spices.

× When my mother cook biryani it's they are very tasty biryani.

✓ When my mother cooks biryani, it is very tasty.

The verb 'cook' must be in third person singular form 'cooks' to agree with 'my mother' (subject-verb agreement). 'It's they are very tasty biryani' is incorrect pronoun and structure; use 'it is very tasty' to refer to the dish. Remove the redundant noun 'biryani' at the end. Suggestion: use 'my mother cooks' and 'it is very tasty.'

× It like a delicious and most tasty biryani.

✓ It is a delicious and very tasty biryani.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' and uses 'most' incorrectly with 'tasty.' Use the adjective 'delicious' and an adverb 'very' before 'tasty.' Ensure full clause with subject and verb: 'It is...'.

× I think my mother is the best best cooked in this world.

✓ I think my mother is the best cook in the world.

'Best best cooked' is ungrammatical. Use the noun 'cook' after 'best' to say someone is the best at cooking. 'In this world' is wordy; idiomatic phrase is 'in the world.' Remove duplicated 'best.'

× When I was young, young, I prefer to eat, eat, eat potatoes because because my mother cook only potatoes at the age of when I was young.

✓ When I was young, I preferred to eat potatoes because my mother only cooked potatoes then.

The timeframe 'when I was young' requires past tense: 'preferred' not 'prefer.' 'Cook' should be past tense 'cooked' to match. Remove repeated words. Place adverb 'only' before 'cooked' or before object. Use 'then' to indicate that time period.

× When the breakfast I eat eat ate bread and ate at the time evening I prefer to eat eat heavy like biryani.

✓ At breakfast I ate bread, and in the evening I preferred to eat heavier meals like biryani.

Use 'at breakfast' (not 'when the breakfast'). Maintain past tense 'ate' and 'preferred' to match the time frame if talking about past habits. 'Heavy' should be comparative/adjective modifying 'meals' so use 'heavier meals.' Remove repetitions. Use 'in the evening' for time phrase.

× At the night I prefer to eat salad like light food.

✓ At night I preferred to eat salads or light food.

Use idiomatic 'at night' not 'at the night.' Maintain past tense 'preferred.' 'Salad' as a countable noun in this context should be plural 'salads' or use 'a salad.' 'Like' is better replaced by 'or' to offer an alternative. Ensure consistent past tense.

× Yes, my favorite food has changed since childhood.

✓ Yes, my favorite food has changed since childhood.

This sentence is correct as written. 'Has changed since childhood' correctly uses the present perfect to describe a change from the past to now. No correction needed.

× When I was When I was a child, I prepared it simple like potatoes and bread for example I only eat potatoes but at the age of.

✓ When I was a child, I ate simple foods like potatoes and bread; for example, I only ate potatoes when I was young.

Remove repetition 'When I was When I was.' Use past tense 'ate' rather than 'prepared' if referring to what the speaker consumed. 'Prepared it simple' is unidiomatic; use 'ate simple foods.' Complete the sentence by replacing the unfinished fragment 'but at the age of.' Consolidate into clear past-time statements and avoid fragments.