Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and clear: start with a simple topic sentence naming the dish, then give 2–3 specific details (flavour, ingredients, when you eat it). Use correct grammar and avoid repetition. Link ideas with short connectors (because, and, especially). Keep to 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: My favourite food is Tom Yum Goong. It is a traditional Thai soup that tastes sour and spicy because of lime, lemongrass and chili. I especially like it when it has fresh shrimp and fragrant herbs. I often eat it at restaurants because it feels comforting and flavourful.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence stating the food you liked as a child, then give a brief reason and an example. Use correct tense and avoid vague phrases. Keep sentences concise and link reason with because or so.

Exemplo: When I was young, I liked non-spicy foods such as crispy pork. Because I was sensitive to strong flavours, I preferred fried and mild dishes. For example, my family often bought crispy pork with rice for weekend meals.

Sugestão: Answer directly and then give 2 clear examples showing seasonal or situational differences. Use linking words (for example, when, but) and avoid repetition and grammar errors. Be specific about times or occasions and the foods you choose.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. In summer I eat more seasonal fruits like mango and watermelon because they are fresh and cooling. I also eat Thai food when I go out with my family, but I usually have Japanese food when I visit friends because they prefer that cuisine.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement whether it changed, then explain how and why with 2–3 concise sentences. Use correct past and present tense and avoid filler words. Give a specific reason (taste development, exposure to new foods) and an example of a spicy dish you now enjoy.

Exemplo: Yes, my favourite food has changed. As a child I preferred mild dishes like crispy pork, but as I grew up I began to enjoy spicy foods because I became more tolerant of strong flavours. For instance, I now love Tom Yum Goong and other spicy soups that I could not eat before.

× I love Tom Yum goong, it's Thai traditional dishes as consists of shimmed this the taste is like sour and spicy, a bit spicy and it's quite unique one.

✓ I love Tom Yum Goong; it's a traditional Thai dish that consists of shrimp. The taste is sour and spicy, a bit hot, and quite unique.

The original sentence misused adjectives and articles ('Thai traditional dishes' should be 'traditional Thai dish'), had word choice errors ('shimmed' for 'shrimp'), and awkward phrasing ('as consists of' and 'unique one'). Suggestions: use the correct noun order 'traditional Thai dish', use 'consists of' followed by the correct noun 'shrimp', separate ideas into clearer clauses, and replace vague phrases like 'unique one' with 'quite unique'.

× When I was a kid, I preferred the first that not spicy like via crispy pork.

✓ When I was a kid, I preferred foods that were not spicy, such as crispy pork.

The original sentence used incorrect word order and verb forms ('preferred the first that not spicy like via crispy pork'). Correct past tense 'preferred' is fine but the clause describing the foods needs correct relative clause and plural: 'foods that were not spicy' and 'such as crispy pork'. Suggestion: use 'such as' to give examples and 'were' to match plural 'foods'.

× So that's one of my favorite foods that I always wanted to eat.

✓ So that's one of my favorite foods that I always wanted to eat.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable but slightly awkward in time reference. For clarity, if referring to childhood desire, say 'So that was one of my favorite foods that I always wanted to eat' to match past context. Suggestion: ensure tense consistency between main clause and relative clause.

× Yes, definitely, because they are variety of kind of fruits and Thai food.

✓ Yes, definitely, because there are a variety of fruits and Thai dishes.

The phrase 'they are variety of kind of' is incorrect. Use 'there are a variety of' or 'there is a variety of', and 'Thai food' can be 'Thai dishes' to match countable 'a variety of'. Suggestion: use 'there are a variety of' plus plural noun.

× So I usually eat Thai food when I go out with my family. But I and I usually eat Japanese food, have Japanese food when I visit my friend.

✓ I usually eat Thai food when I go out with my family. But I usually eat Japanese food when I visit my friend.

The original repeats 'I and I' and mixes verbs ('eat Japanese food, have Japanese food'). Remove the duplicate pronoun and use a single verb 'eat'. Suggestion: keep subject once and use consistent verb forms.

× Yes, definitely when they were the kid.

✓ Yes, definitely when I was a kid.

The pronoun 'they' is incorrect for referring to the speaker; use 'I'. Also 'were the kid' is ungrammatical; use 'was a kid'. Suggestion: use first-person pronoun and correct past tense 'was'.

× I prefer not spicy foods like crispy pork as I said before, but now when I grow up I like literally like spicy foods is quite something that's a can't leave it out.

✓ I preferred non-spicy foods like crispy pork, but now that I've grown up I really like spicy foods; I can't live without them.

Multiple errors: tense inconsistency ('prefer' vs past), adjective placement ('not spicy foods' should be 'non-spicy foods'), awkward filler words ('literally like'), and incorrect verb forms ('is quite something that's a can't leave it out'). Use past for childhood preference 'preferred', perfect/present for grown-up state 'I've grown up' or 'I grew up', and correct idiom 'can't live without them'. Suggestions: simplify sentences, maintain consistent tense, remove filler words, and use correct idiomatic expressions.