Food— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid redundancy and incorrect phrasing (e.g., “it makes me remind the moment” → “it reminds me of”). Use one linking phrase to connect idea and feeling.

Exemplo: My favourite food is my mother’s pumpkin soup. I especially remember it from my last birthday because it was warm, creamy and seasoned with nutmeg, and it always reminds me of the moment when we sang the birthday song together.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and more precise details. Use linking words (e.g., “because” or “so”) to explain why you liked them, and avoid vague phrases like “good moment.”

Exemplo: When I was young I loved the homemade cookies my mother baked because they were soft and sweet. They were made from potato flour and sugar, and I often shared them with my mother after school, which made those afternoons feel cozy.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct topic sentence and use clearer linking words for contrast (e.g., “for example” and “also”). Be specific about typical dishes for each season and correct small repetitions (“in summer or in winter” → give distinct examples for each).

Exemplo: Yes, I eat different foods depending on the season. For example, in summer I enjoy salads with fresh tomatoes and cucumbers because they are ripe then; in winter I prefer hot soups, such as pumpkin or chicken soup, to keep warm.

Sugestão: State clearly that your preferences have changed, use correct tense and smoother linking (e.g., “for example” and “now”). Be specific about the change and the reason (health, taste). Avoid vague items like “vitamin supplements” as food — mention healthier food choices instead.

Exemplo: Yes, my favourite food has changed. For example, when I was young I ate a lot of salty snacks such as potato chips, but now I prefer healthier options like mixed salads and grilled vegetables because I care more about nutrition.