Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Answer the question directly and avoid repeating the same idea. Use the correct verb "walk" rather than "work," and explain how often you walk and why. The phrase "many of us are very painful" is unclear; use "it helps me stay healthy" instead. Organize your answer with a topic sentence and a linking word such as "because."

Exemplo: Yes, I walk for about thirty minutes every day. I usually walk around my neighborhood because it helps me stay healthy and reduces my stress.

Sugestão: Use the past tense because the question asks about childhood: "went" instead of "go" and "was" instead of "am." Say "go outside for a walk," not "go to outside for walking." Add a specific detail, such as where you walked or who accompanied you, and connect the reason with "because."

Exemplo: Yes, I often went outside for a walk when I was a child. I usually walked around my neighborhood with my friends because we had plenty of energy and enjoyed playing outdoors.

Sugestão: Give a clear reason related to parks rather than mentioning unclear "things." Parks are attractive because they offer fresh air, pleasant scenery, and safe paths for exercise. Use specific vocabulary such as "walking paths," "green spaces," and "relaxing atmosphere."

Exemplo: People like walking in parks because they provide fresh air and a relaxing atmosphere. In addition, most parks have walking paths and beautiful scenery, so people can exercise while enjoying nature.

Sugestão: State a specific place and explain why you would choose it. The answer should directly respond to "where," so mention a beach, forest, city, or another location. Use a conditional structure such as "I would like to walk... if I had the chance" and add one or two supporting details.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk along the beach. I would enjoy the fresh sea air and the sound of the waves, and it would help me relax.

Sugestão: Mention the place you visited recently and use the past tense clearly. The answer is currently difficult to understand and does not identify a location. You could say "I went to..." and then add what you did or how you felt there.

Exemplo: I went for a walk in a nearby park last weekend. I walked along the lake for about an hour and enjoyed the peaceful atmosphere.

× Yes, I work a lot and I everyday thirty minutes I work every day and this is very beneficial for healthy and many of us are very painful.

✓ Yes, I walk for thirty minutes every day. It is very beneficial for my health, and many of us enjoy it.

The answer should use the present tense because the question asks about your current habits. Every day is the correct adverbial phrase, while everyday is an adjective. Healthy is an adjective, but health is the noun needed after my. The original answer also contains a run-on sentence with repeated and unclear word order. Use a clear structure such as subject + verb + time expression.

× Yes, I go to outside for walking because I am child and not fear anything.

✓ Yes, I went outside for a walk because I was a child and was not afraid of anything.

The question uses the past tense, so go must become went and am must become was. We say go outside, without to. The natural expression is for a walk, not for walking in this context. Child is a singular countable noun, so it needs the article a. The correct expression is was not afraid of anything.

× Because there are many things for exercising like gyms, things and many of things are helpful for humanity.

✓ Because there are many facilities for exercise, such as gyms, and many of them are helpful to people.

After for, exercise is used as a noun in the phrase for exercise; exercising is not natural in this expression. Many of things is incorrect because the quantifier must be followed by a determiner, such as many of these things, or by a pronoun, such as many of them. The examples should also be connected with a clear sentence structure. Helpful to people is more natural than helpful for humanity in this context.

× Long term completely and many benefits provide

✓ I would like to take a long walk in a park because walking provides many benefits.

The original answer does not contain a complete subject-verb structure. A complete sentence needs a subject and a finite verb. The corrected answer directly answers the question by stating where you would like to walk and uses provides as the main verb. Long walk is the correct phrase here; long term describes duration or a long-term situation, not the length of a walk.

× We did you go for a walk gradient.

✓ We went for a walk in the garden.

The question asks about a recent past event, so went is the appropriate past-tense verb. Did you go is a question form and cannot be used as the main statement here. We say go for a walk, and in the garden requires the preposition in and the definite article the. The original word order also does not form a complete grammatical sentence.