Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), and finish the sentence. Add one brief reason or example using a linking word. Aim for 2–3 sentences total.

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. Because traffic in the city center is often heavy, I prefer walking to save time and also to stay fit.

Sugestão: Good direct response and personal detail. Improve tense consistency and avoid repetition; keep it within 2–3 polished sentences. Use a linking word to add a specific memory or reason.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often walked around my neighborhood with friends to play and visit each other's houses, which helped me stay active and make friends.

Sugestão: Be clearer and correct grammar mistakes. Give 2–3 specific reasons and use linking words (for example, moreover). Avoid vague phrases like 'envind'—use 'escape' or 'get away'. Limit to 3 sentences.

Exemplo: I think people walk in parks for several reasons. For example, they walk to relax and escape the stresses of daily life, and moreover many people use park walking to keep fit and improve their health.

Sugestão: Good imagery and clear reasons. Improve vocabulary accuracy (e.g., 'riverside promenade'), correct small grammatical errors, and tighten the second sentence. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the riverside promenade. Walking there in the early morning would feel peaceful, allowing me to enjoy fresh air, watch boats pass, and observe birds, which helps clear my mind.

Sugestão: Provide a complete, grammatically correct answer with one or two specific details. Use past tense consistently, correct 'prominent' to 'promenade' or 'riverside', and avoid vague endings. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Last weekend I walked with my mum and my younger brother along the riverside promenade. We talked about our day and enjoyed the peaceful surroundings, which helped me relax.

× Generally, I would say definitely yes uh, during rush hours in city center, there is huge traffic condition, so uh, save my time and try to be fit. I tend to walk around a lot and I.

✓ Generally, I would definitely say yes. During rush hour in the city center there is heavy traffic, so I save time and try to stay fit. I tend to walk around a lot.

The original contains run-on fragments and unclear clauses (sentence structure errors). 'Rush hours' should be 'rush hour' in this context, 'huge traffic condition' is unnatural -> 'heavy traffic', and 'save my time and try to be fit' needs an explicit subject and verbs: 'I save time and try to stay fit.' Remove the trailing incomplete 'and I.' Suggestion: split into clear sentences, use natural collocations, and include subjects for verbs. Grammar problem type ID:26

× When I was a child, I used to walk a lot around my neighborhood with my friends, like playing around and going into my friend's house. So I would say I walk a lot.

✓ When I was a child, I used to walk a lot around my neighborhood with my friends, playing and visiting my friend's house. So I would say I walked a lot.

The reply mixes past habitual ('used to') with present tense 'I walk a lot.' For consistency when referring to childhood, use past tense: 'I walked a lot.' Also 'playing around and going into my friend's house' is better as 'playing and visiting my friend's house.' Suggestion: keep tense consistent for past habits and use clearer verb choices. Grammar problem type ID:5

× In my perspective, I think it depends on individuals. There is several reasons why people like to walk around the park. Some of us like to restart their mind and envind themselves from passive lifestyle. Other is that they tend to like they want to be fit or healthy.

✓ From my perspective, I think it depends on the individual. There are several reasons why people like to walk in the park. Some people like to refresh their minds and escape a passive lifestyle. Others want to be fit or healthy.

Multiple issues: 'in my perspective' -> 'from my perspective' is idiomatic. 'Individuals' plurality conflicts with 'depends on', better 'the individual' or rephrase. 'There is several reasons' uses singular verb with plural noun; correct is 'There are several reasons' (quantifier/subject-verb agreement). 'Restart their mind' and 'envind' are wrong word choices; use 'refresh their minds' and 'escape a passive lifestyle.' 'Other is that they tend to like they want to be fit' is ungrammatical; 'Others want to be fit or healthy' is concise and correct. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement, use appropriate phrases for mental refreshment, and keep parallel structure. Grammar problem type ID:14

× If I had a chance I would take a long walk along riverside prominent. Walking beside the water in the early morning would feel peaceful and calm. I could enjoy fresh air, watch both pass and observe birds which helps relax and clear my mind.

✓ If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the prominent riverside. Walking beside the water in the early morning would feel peaceful and calm. I could enjoy the fresh air, watch people pass, and observe birds, which would help relax and clear my mind.

'If I had a chance' should be 'If I had the chance' (article choice). 'Riverside prominent' is wrong word order; use 'prominent riverside.' The third sentence has missing articles and awkward verbs: 'watch both pass' is unclear — likely 'watch people pass.' Also 'which helps relax' should match conditional mood and subject: 'which would help relax and clear my mind.' Suggestion: correct article use, fix adjective order, include missing articles, and maintain tense/modal consistency. Grammar problem type ID:22

× Last weekend I walked with my mum and my younger brother along the riverside prominent. We talk about our day and the peaceful surrounding help me refresh my mind and some kind of other gossips about something like

✓ Last weekend I walked with my mum and my younger brother along the prominent riverside. We talked about our day, and the peaceful surroundings helped me refresh my mind; we also had some other gossip.

Tense inconsistency: 'Last weekend' requires past tense throughout: 'We talked' not 'We talk.' 'The peaceful surrounding help me' should be 'the peaceful surroundings helped me' (plural and past). 'Riverside prominent' should be 'prominent riverside' (word order). The fragment 'some kind of other gossips about something like' is unclear; simplify to 'we also had some other gossip.' Suggestion: maintain past tense for past events, ensure noun plurality matches verbs, and avoid vague filler phrases.