Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and grammatical: start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two concise reasons using correct verb forms and linking words. Avoid repetition and unclear pronouns. Focus on yourself rather than vague references to "many people."

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk to work and around my neighborhood because it keeps me fit and saves money on transport. Also, walking helps me clear my mind after a busy day.

Sugestão: Use correct past tense and a clear structure: answer briefly, then give a specific example or reason. Replace unclear phrases like "work outside in market" with precise descriptions. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use linking words such as "because" or "for example."

Exemplo: Yes, I often walked outside when I was a child. For example, I used to walk to the local market near my house every day, which was good exercise and helped me make friends in the neighborhood.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific reasons using precise vocabulary (e.g., "peaceful," "clean," "green space"). Use linking words like "because" and avoid vague repetition. Keep answers concise (max 4-5 sentences).

Exemplo: People like walking in parks because they are peaceful and full of greenery. For instance, parks are quieter than busy streets, have fresh air and paths for exercise, and provide a pleasant place to relax with family or friends.

Sugestão: If you do not understand a question, ask a brief clarification instead of saying nothing. You can also give a short hypothetical answer to show willingness to engage. Use conditional grammar for hypothetical situations ("I would like to...").

Exemplo: Could you repeat that, please? If you mean where I would like to take a long walk, I would choose a coastal trail by the sea because I enjoy the fresh air and scenic views.

Sugestão: Answer the question directly in past tense and give a specific recent example. Avoid confusing "work" with "walk" and ensure verb forms are correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and keep it concise.

Exemplo: I went for a walk last weekend in the neighborhood park near my house. I walked for about 30 minutes along the lake to relax and get some exercise.

× Yeah, of course I working a lot because many people work in their in the state they will very happy and they they not harmful and their health is very good for her daily walking in the street, so they always work.

✓ Yeah, of course I work a lot because many people in the state are very happy, they are not harmed, and their health is very good because they walk daily in the street, so they always walk.

Errors: incorrect verb form 'I working' should be 'I work' (use base form for simple present); awkward phrasing and repetition. Also missing linking verb 'are' for 'people in the state are very happy' (there be / present tense). 'they they not harmful' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is 'they are not harmed' (use passive adjective 'harmed' with 'are'). 'their health is very good for her daily walking' mixes pronouns and incorrect preposition; correct to 'their health is very good because they walk daily'. Suggestions: Use simple present for habitual actions, include the verb 'are' for state descriptions, avoid repeated words, and keep pronouns consistent.

× Well, when when I'm child and I walk everyday, I work outside in market outside my home and there is very hel helpful for our health. So yeah, I work every day for I am child.

✓ Well, when I was a child I walked every day; I worked outside at the market near my home and it was very helpful for our health. So yeah, I walked every day when I was a child.

Errors: 'I'm child' should be past 'I was a child' (past tense for past time reference). 'I walk everyday' should be 'I walked every day' (past habitual). 'I work outside in market outside my home' needs past tense and preposition: 'I worked at the market near my home'. 'there is very hel helpful' is ungrammatical; intended 'it was very helpful'. Suggestions: Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood; use 'at the market' and 'near' for location; use 'it' as dummy subject for 'was helpful'.

× Well, uh, many people like walking in the park because park is very pitiful and park is very clean and the people always walk in the street, walk in the park and this is the silence here. And yeah, also the people walking in the park.

✓ Well, many people like walking in the park because the park is very beautiful and very clean. People often walk on the paths in the park, and it is quiet there. Also, many people walk in the park regularly.

Errors: 'park is very pitiful' uses wrong adjective 'pitiful' (means deserving pity); correct adjective is 'beautiful' or 'pleasant'. Missing definite article 'the park'. Redundant and awkward phrasing 'the people always walk in the street, walk in the park and this is the silence here' should be simplified to 'People often walk on the paths in the park, and it is quiet there.' Suggestions: Choose appropriate adjectives (beautiful, pleasant, peaceful), include 'the' before a specific park, and simplify sentences to avoid redundancy.

× Sorry, I don't understand your question.

✓ Sorry, I don't understand the question.

This sentence is grammatical but can be improved for the examination context by using 'the question' to refer to the examiner's previous question. Suggestion: Use 'the question' to be slightly more natural in this context.

× No, I did not work lately because work is very important for our health. So yeah, I daily walk in the street, walking outside my home.

✓ No, I have not walked recently; exercise is very important for our health. So yes, I walk daily in the street, walking outside my home.

Errors: 'did not work lately' mixes past simple with 'lately' which prefers present perfect for recent actions: use 'have not walked recently' if referring to recent walks. 'work' is incorrect verb for 'walk'. 'I daily walk' is awkward word order; 'I walk daily' is correct. 'walking outside my home' is a participle phrase that should be coordinated: 'I walk daily outside my home.' Suggestions: Use the correct verb 'walk' not 'work', use present perfect for recent time with 'lately/recently', and place adverbs appropriately ('walk daily').