Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 句子语法错误较多，措辞不自然且重复。回答没有直接用主题句简洁回应问题，信息过多且混乱。建议简化为一到两句的主题句并用一两句具体细节支持，注意动词时态、单复数和流畅性，例如把“working”改为“walking”，“bodies”改为“body”。使用连词（e.g. because, so）使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: Yes, I walk quite often. I find walking helps me exercise and clear my mind, and I enjoy admiring the scenery along the way.

Sugestão: 回答重复且有词汇错误（e.g. “soak our fresh air”, “sort out fresh air”）。结构上可以先用简短主题句回答，再给出具体例子和原因。改正固定搭配（breathe fresh air, go to the park），避免重复同一观点。

Exemplo: Yes, I did. My parents often took me to the park because we could breathe fresh air and enjoy the scenery, which was a good way to relax from school pressure.

Sugestão: 回答语法和词汇错误影响表达（e.g. “sew up fresh air”, “if you're working in the park”不合适）。应先给出直接原因句，再补充一两个具体细节并用连接词衔接。使用恰当短语如 “breathe fresh air”, “relieve stress”。

Exemplo: People like walking in parks because they can breathe fresh air and relieve stress. Also, parks offer pleasant scenery and open space, which makes walking more enjoyable.

Sugestão: 内容偏离且有较多词汇/事实错误（e.g. “Great War”, “long term match”），句子不连贯。应先直接回答地点，然后给出简洁、相关的理由，使用准确词汇（Great Wall, cultural heritage, impressive history），避免无关或错误信息。

Exemplo: I would love to walk along the Great Wall. It is an important cultural heritage with stunning views, and walking there would let me experience its history and beautiful landscapes.

Sugestão: 回答混乱且句子不完整，时态和介词使用错误（e.g. “I working in my universities”, “on the in the university”）。应直接回答地点和时间，然后用一两句具体细节说明目的或感受，注意句子完整性和连贯性。

Exemplo: Last week I went for a walk around my university campus. I walked between the buildings to relax after studying, and I enjoyed the fresh air and the campus scenery.

× Definitely is I always workings because it can exercise my bodies and I enjoy working which allows me to clear my mind and admire the beautiful scenery along the way. After a long day of study and.

✓ Definitely. I always walk because it can exercise my body, and I enjoy walking which allows me to clear my mind and admire the beautiful scenery along the way after a long day of study.

句子结构混乱、动词形式和主谓不一致。需要把碎片句连成完整句：使用简单现在时表达习惯（I always walk），将复数错误的 bodies 改为单数 body，working 改为 walking 表示散步/走路。将短句合并并放在句末以避免句子残缺。建议多用主语+谓语+宾语的完整句式，注意动词时态与名词单复数一致。

× Definitely. My parents always take me to the parks to walk because it it can soak our fresh air and admire the beautiful scenery along the way.

✓ Definitely. My parents always took me to the park to walk because we could breathe fresh air and admire the beautiful scenery along the way.

原句中存在时态与主谓不一致及冗余词（it it）。描述过去习惯应使用过去时（took），park 前一般不加复数定冠词（the parks→the park 或 parks 不加 the），'soak our fresh air' 用法错误，应为 'breathe fresh air'。建议说过去习惯时统一使用过去时并使用固定搭配。

× Parks are ideal places where people can sort out fresh air and escape from the pressure that comes with busy work.

✓ Parks are ideal places where people can get fresh air and escape from the pressure that comes with busy work.

原句中 'sort out fresh air' 用法不当，英语中通常说 'get/breathe fresh air'。谓语 'comes' 与先行词 pressure 主语一致但句子可更自然。建议使用常见搭配 'get/breathe fresh air'。

× Because parks are ideal places where people can sew up fresh air and escape from the pressure that come with busy work. And if you're working in the park, you can admire the beautiful scenery along the way.

✓ Because parks are ideal places where people can breathe fresh air and escape from the pressure that comes with busy work. And if you go for a walk in the park, you can admire the beautiful scenery along the way.

原句 'sew up fresh air' 是错误搭配，应为 'breathe/get fresh air'；此外 'pressure that come' 主谓不一致，pressure 是单数，应用 'comes'。第二句 'if you're working in the park' 不符合上下文，用 'if you go for a walk in the park' 更贴切。建议注意固定搭配与主谓一致。

× If I have a chance I will choose the Great Wall.

✓ If I had a chance, I would choose the Great Wall.

这是与现在事实相反或假设的情况，应使用与条件相符合的虚拟语气（第二条件）: If + past, would + 动词。建议在与现实相反或不确定的情况使用虚拟语气。

× As we all know the Great War is Chinese valuable heritage.

✓ As we all know, the Great Wall is a valuable part of China's heritage.

原句将 'Great Wall' 写成 'Great War'（拼写错误/用词错误），并且缺少冠词和所有格表达不自然。应使用 'the Great Wall' 和 'China's heritage' 或 'a valuable part of China's heritage'。建议注意专有名词拼写与所有格表达。

× The long term match which lasts for for several years shows how powerful human will can be during long distance walking.

✓ The long-term construction, which lasted for several years, shows how powerful human will can be during long-distance walking.

原句 'long term match' 用词错误且有双重 'for'，应为 'long-term construction' 或 'building'，并需使用过去时 'lasted' 描述已经完成的动作。'long distance walking' 前加连字符更清晰。建议注意词汇准确性、时态一致和拼写/重复错误。

× I want to look like them to continue to working.

✓ I want to be like them and continue working.

原句 'look like them to continue to working' 结构不自然：'look like them' 表示外貌相似，语境应为 'be like them'（像他们那样），'continue to working' 动词形式错误，应为 'continue working' 或 'continue to work'。建议学习常见动词搭配和不定式/动名词的用法。

× I remember last week I working in my universities and I enjoy working, which allows me to clear my mind and admire the beautiful scenery along the way.

✓ I remember last week I was working at my university and I enjoyed working, which allowed me to clear my mind and admire the beautiful scenery along the way.

句子时态混用：描述过去事件应使用过去时（was working, enjoyed, allowed）。'universities' 复数不合上下文，改为单数 'university'，并将从句动词相应改为过去时。建议保持时态一致并使用正确单复数。

× For a long day of study. Working on the in the university can admire the beautiful scenery such as the tall buildings along the way.

✓ After a long day of study, working at the university allows me to admire the beautiful scenery, such as tall buildings, along the way.

原文为句子碎片并且有多处用法错误：'For a long day of study.' 不是完整句，应合并为时间状语；'on the in the university' 是冗余错误，改为 'at the university'；'can admire' 主语不明确，应为 'allows me to admire'。建议写句子时确保主语、谓语完整并使用正确介词和冠词。