Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct, correct grammar, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific supporting details. Use a clear topic sentence, then add linked details (when/where/how often).

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I prefer to walk near my house, especially along the nearby river, because I usually go for a run there three or four times a week to relax and exercise.

Sugestão: Start with a clear direct response (Yes/No) and explain briefly why, using correct past-tense verbs and linking words to make it coherent. Give a specific example or frequency.

Exemplo: Yes, I often walked outside when I was a child. I was a shy child, so I preferred walking near my home because it helped me feel calmer, and I usually went for walks with my grandmother every weekend.

Sugestão: Give a clear main reason, then support it with specific benefits using linking words (for example, because/so/therefore). Use correct vocabulary (walking, improve health or mood) and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: People like to walk in parks because it improves their physical and mental health. For example, walking among trees reduces stress and lets people get fresh air and mild exercise, which boosts energy and mood.

Sugestão: Answer the hypothetical directly and clearly, name one specific place, and explain why with linked reasons. Use conditional phrasing correctly and avoid mixing places/confusing names.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along the Han River in my country because its riverbanks are peaceful and scenic, and I could enjoy cycling or walking for hours without traffic.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer in past tense and add specific details about the recent walk (when, what you did, who you went with, how you felt). Avoid repetition and correct common errors (walk, not work).

Exemplo: Recently I went to the Han River with a friend. We cycled along the riverbank in the late afternoon, enjoyed the sunset, and felt relaxed after about an hour of exercise.

× Of course, I very prefer to prefer to work in a nearby nearby my house.

✓ Of course, I prefer to work near my house.

Errors: redundant words ('very prefer to prefer to'), wrong adjective/adverb use ('nearby' repeated and incorrectly placed before 'my house'), and sentence structure. Suggestion: Use simple present 'I prefer' for habitual preference and use 'near' + place or 'near my house' rather than 'in a nearby my house'. Remove duplicates and extra 'very'. (grammar_problem_type_id:13)

× There are a good river in my country I usually enjoy go for a run among the river.

✓ There is a good river in my area; I usually enjoy going for a run along the river.

Errors: subject-verb agreement with 'there is' vs 'there are' for singular 'river' (Problem ID 3 and 27), incorrect verb form 'go' should be gerund 'going' when used after 'enjoy', incorrect preposition 'among' should be 'along' for running beside a river, and run-on sentence missing punctuation. Suggestion: Use 'There is' for a singular noun, use gerund after 'enjoy', and use 'along the river'. (grammar_problem_type_id:3)

× When I was younger I was quiet on awkward person so I preferred the work nearby my house.

✓ When I was younger I was a quiet, awkward person, so I preferred to work near my house.

Errors: adjective order and form: 'quiet on awkward person' is incorrect; should be 'a quiet, awkward person' (article and adjective order - IDs 22 and 18). 'Preferred the work' is wrong; use 'preferred to work' or 'preferred working' and 'near my house' rather than 'nearby my house' (preposition error ID 11). Suggestion: Add article 'a', use comma between adjectives, and use correct verb form 'preferred to work'. (grammar_problem_type_id:22)

× It was a great way to improve my energy.

✓ It was a great way to improve my energy levels.

Minor word choice: 'energy' is uncountable but collocates with 'levels' in this context. The tense 'was' is correct because speaking about the past. Suggestion: Add 'levels' to sound natural and clear. (grammar_problem_type_id:6)

× There are many reasons, but the biggest reason is that working is improve keepers in energy.

✓ There are many reasons, but the main one is that walking improves people's energy.

Errors: 'biggest reason' is wordy; better 'main one'. 'working' is probably meant 'walking' (word choice). 'is improve' is wrong verb form; should be 'improves' (third person singular present - ID 2). 'keepers in energy' is incorrect phrase; use 'people's energy' or 'energy levels' (preposition/pronoun issues ID 11/12). Suggestion: Use correct verb conjugation and clearer noun phrase 'people's energy' or 'energy levels'. (grammar_problem_type_id:2)

× So it comes, it helps me, people comes.

✓ So it helps me and other people.

Errors: 'it comes' is unnatural and incorrect in context; 'people comes' has subject-verb agreement error ('people' takes plural verb 'come' — ID 27). The sentence is also fragmented and repetitive. Suggestion: Simplify to 'it helps me and other people' or 'it benefits people'. (grammar_problem_type_id:27)

× It is a great way to walk among the among the park.

✓ It is a great way to walk in the park.

Errors: repeated phrase 'among the among the' and wrong preposition 'among' for park; use 'in the park' or 'around the park' (ID 11). Suggestion: Remove duplication and use 'in the park'. (grammar_problem_type_id:11)

× The Aurora or hot liver In my country I usually go to Han liver or go to there.

✓ In my country I usually go to the Han River.

Errors: 'Aurora or hot liver' seems unintelligible and likely incorrect nouns; capitalization inconsistent. 'Han River' requires the definite article 'the' (article error ID 22). 'go to there' is ungrammatical (redundant 'to'). Suggestion: Use 'I usually go to the Han River' and remove unclear phrases. (grammar_problem_type_id:22)

× I enjoy riding bike or going from London among the river.

✓ I enjoy riding a bike or cycling along the river.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'bike' and awkward phrase 'going from London among the river'. 'going from London' is unclear and likely incorrect. Use 'cycling' or 'riding a bike' and preposition 'along the river' (IDs 8 and 11). Suggestion: Use 'riding a bike' or 'cycling' and 'along the river'. (grammar_problem_type_id:8)

× It is a great time for me.

✓ It is a great time for me.

This sentence is grammatically correct but simplistic. No correction needed. Suggestion: Optionally say 'I always have a great time' for variety. (grammar_problem_type_id:26)

× Recently I went to I went to the Han River.

✓ Recently I went to the Han River.

Error: unnecessary repetition 'I went to I went to' (sentence structure error ID 26). Tense 'went' is correct for recent past. Suggestion: Remove duplicated phrase. (grammar_problem_type_id:26)

× Han River is my favorite place. A Han River is a great, great place to work among the river and enjoy riding a bike.

✓ The Han River is my favorite place. The Han River is a great place to walk along and to ride a bike.

Errors: missing definite article 'the' before 'Han River' (ID 22). 'A Han River' is incorrect; use 'the Han River'. 'work among the river' should be 'walk along the river' (preposition and verb choice issues ID 11 and 26). Remove duplicated 'great'. Suggestion: Use 'the Han River' consistently and 'walk along' or 'walk by' the river; use 'ride a bike' for clarity. (grammar_problem_type_id:22)