Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more fluent and accurate: reduce fillers (umm), correct vocabulary and grammar, and make your answer concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific detail (how often, where or why). Use linking words if adding a reason. Avoid invented words like “energyable.”

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot in my free time. I usually walk about 10 kilometres three times a week to stay fit and boost my energy. Because walking is low-impact and convenient, it helps me feel healthier and more energetic.

Sugestão: Answer directly and correct tense/use of words. Remove filler words and improve coherence: use linking words to compare morning and night, and provide a specific reason or example of feeling safe in the morning.

Exemplo: Yes, I often walked outside as a child, but only in the morning. I felt safer then because there were more people around and better lighting, whereas walking at night seemed risky and scary to me.

Sugestão: Be specific and use correct words: replace unclear words like “truck” with ‘tracks’ or ‘paths’, and avoid repetition. Give one or two clear reasons with linking words (for example, because/and) and a brief example of an amenity or social benefit.

Exemplo: People like to walk in parks because there are walking paths and sports fields where they can jog or exercise. Also, parks are social places, so people can meet others and chat, which helps build community.

Sugestão: Organize your answer: give one clear location and explain why with specific details. Use correct prepositions and reduce hesitation. A plan or route is a good detail—state it coherently using linking words (first, then, finally).

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk from the countryside into the city. First I would enjoy quiet rural scenery, then I would walk along a river path toward the city to see parks and shops, which would make the walk varied and interesting.

Sugestão: Answer the question in correct tense and be concise. The examiner asked about recently, so mention a recent walk; if you mean childhood, clearly say so. Avoid long, unclear explanations—give one specific recent example or one clear memory with reason and linking words.

Exemplo: Lately I walked in my neighborhood park last weekend for about 30 minutes to get some fresh air. When I was a child, I used to walk to my primary school and sometimes arrived late because I woke up late, but that was a long time ago.

× Umm yes, in my free time I work almost umm 10 kilometres to help me to stay fit and reach my body can feel more energyable.

✓ Umm yes, in my free time I walk almost 10 kilometres to help me stay fit and feel more energetic.

The verb 'work' is incorrect for walking; use 'walk'. The phrase 'to help me to stay fit' should be 'to help me stay fit' (omit unnecessary 'to'). 'Reach my body can feel more energyable' is ungrammatical; use 'feel more energetic'. Use the -ing form only for continuous actions (e.g., 'I am walking'), but here simple present 'I walk' is appropriate for habitual action. Suggestion: use clear subject-verb-object order and simple adjectives (energetic).

× Umm yes in the I only but I only walking in uh morning, which makes me feel self I safe compared to the night.

✓ Umm yes, when I was a child I only walked in the morning, which made me feel safer compared to at night.

The sentence refers to a past habit, so use past tense 'walked' not present participle 'walking'. Change 'when I was a child' for clarity. 'Which makes me feel self I safe' is ungrammatical; use comparative 'safer'. Use 'compared to at night' or 'than at night' for comparison. Suggestion: use past simple for past routines and correct comparative adjective form ('safer').

× It's very very scary. I feel threat and dangers.

✓ It was very, very scary. I felt threatened and in danger.

Context refers to past, so use past tense 'was' and 'felt'. 'I feel threat and dangers' is incorrect: 'threat' as a noun requires 'threatened' (adjective) to describe a person, and 'danger' should be singular or uncountable; use 'in danger' or 'surrounded by danger'. Suggestion: use correct adjective forms (threatened) and idiomatic expression 'in danger'.

× Umm for me is there are a lot of amenities like umm truck and field which they can also take a jogging and they also see a lot of people that we communicate and make a good relationship.

✓ For me, there are a lot of amenities like tracks and fields where people can also go jogging and meet many people to socialize with and build good relationships.

'Truck' is wrong; likely 'track'. Use plural 'tracks and fields'. 'Which they can also take a jogging' is ungrammatical; use 'where people can go jogging'. 'They also see a lot of people that we communicate' should be 'meet many people to socialize with'. Prepositions: use 'where' for locations and 'with' after 'socialize'. Suggestion: use correct nouns, plural forms, and idiomatic prepositional phrases ('go jogging', 'meet people', 'socialize with').

× Umm, I would like to walk in to, I will start in my town, like countryside, countryside and I go off. I have a plan to walk along with, uh, to the city, which I feel see a lot of amenities like malls and also, uh, parks.

✓ Umm, I would like to walk into the countryside starting from my town. I plan to walk to the city, where I expect to see many amenities like malls and parks.

Mixes conditional ('would like') and future ('I will start') awkwardly. Use 'walk into the countryside' (preposition 'into'), 'starting from my town' for clear sequence. 'I have a plan to walk along with to the city' is incorrect; use 'I plan to walk to the city'. 'Which I feel see' should be 'where I expect to see'. Use present/future appropriately: conditional desire + present simple 'I plan' is fine. Suggestion: keep clauses concise, use correct participles ('starting') and prepositions ('into', 'to').

× Umm, when I was a childhood, I'm walking to my school in elementary, elementary level, I let I like that because I not sleep early, so I woke up in umm almost late in 20 minutes going to school.

✓ Umm, when I was a child, I walked to my elementary school. I liked that because I did not sleep early, so I often woke up about 20 minutes late and hurried to school.

'When I was a childhood' is incorrect; use 'when I was a child'. Use past simple 'walked' for past habitual action, not present continuous 'I'm walking'. 'Elementary level' should be 'elementary school'. 'I let I like that' is ungrammatical; use 'I liked that'. Negative past: 'I did not sleep early' not 'I not sleep early'. 'So I woke up almost late in 20 minutes' should be 'I often woke up about 20 minutes late'. Suggestion: use past simple for past routines, correct noun phrases ('elementary school'), and standard time expressions ('about 20 minutes late').