Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and gives reasons, but it's slightly long and has minor grammar issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, use linking words, correct tense and article use, and keep it within 2–4 sentences. Be more concise and natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I do walk quite a lot recently because it helps me stay healthy. Also, I often walk with my mother, which gives us time to talk and strengthen our bond.

Sugestão: Good content but watch tense consistency and phrasing. Use past tense for past habits, avoid redundant clauses, and add a linking word for coherence. Make sentences more natural and concise.

Exemplo: No, I didn't go out often as a child because I preferred staying indoors. After school I usually did homework, watched movies, or had tutoring, so I had little free time for walks.

Sugestão: Clear and relevant answer. Fix the typo (‘works’ → ‘parks’) and tighten phrasing. Use linking words (for example, in addition) and avoid vague phrases like 'escape from the reality.' Be specific about what makes parks relaxing.

Exemplo: People like walking in parks because the green space and fresh air help them unwind after busy days. For example, I enjoy a ten-minute walk there to relax, listen to birds, and clear my mind.

Sugestão: Good idea but contains factual errors and awkward phrasing. Avoid incorrect statements (e.g., 'snowing all over the world'). Use clearer descriptions, correct word choice (steps/stairs, historic), and one or two concise supporting details. Keep sentences grammatical and natural.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I'd like to walk along the Great Wall of China because it's historic and offers stunning views. I imagine walking its long stone steps in autumn and enjoying the scenery and architecture.

Sugestão: Relevant answer but improve grammar, article use, and clarity. Use past simple consistently, correct plural/singular forms, and explain briefly with a linking word. Offer a clearer reason and a concise concluding sentence.

Exemplo: Lately I walked along my neighborhood roads because I usually walk at night. Since it's dark and I worry about safety, I prefer short walks rather than long ones.

× Recently I walked a lot because it gives me the feeling of being healthy and I usually go walking with my mother so it also gives me the time to have a bond with her.

✓ Recently I have been walking a lot because it makes me feel healthy, and I usually walk with my mother, so it also gives me time to bond with her.

The original mixes past simple 'walked' with present habitual 'gives' and 'usually'. Use present perfect progressive 'have been walking' to show recent repeated action that continues to present. Replace 'gives me the feeling of being healthy' with 'makes me feel healthy' for natural phrasing. Use 'walk with my mother' instead of 'go walking with' to be concise and remove the extra article before 'time to bond'.

× When I was a child, I never had any time to go out frequently because I prefer to stay inside.

✓ When I was a child, I never had much time to go out because I preferred to stay inside.

The sentence mixes past 'was'/'had' with present 'prefer'. Maintain past tense 'preferred'. Also 'any time to go out frequently' is awkward; use 'much time to go out' for negative context and remove redundant 'frequently'.

× For example, when it's after class, the time that I get home, I usually study and watch movies on my free time or have my tutor.

✓ For example, after class, when I get home, I usually study, watch movies in my free time, or have lessons with my tutor.

Maintain present simple 'get' and 'study' for habitual actions. 'It's after class' is unnecessary; reorder to 'after class, when I get home'. Use 'in my free time' instead of 'on my free time'. 'Have my tutor' is unnatural; use 'have lessons with my tutor'.

× People love walking in works because it gives them the time to unwind from the stressful and busy days that they have.

✓ People love walking in parks because it gives them time to unwind from the stressful and busy days they have.

'Works' is incorrect word; should be 'parks'. Remove unnecessary 'the' before 'time' and simplify 'that they have' to 'they have'. The sentence keeps present simple for general truth.

× For example, I also love walking in parks, even just for 10 minutes because it gives me the time to escape from the reality and to experience peace.

✓ For example, I also love walking in parks, even just for 10 minutes, because it gives me time to escape reality and experience peace.

Keep 'walking' as gerund is fine; remove unnecessary 'the' before 'time' and 'the reality'. Use parallel structure 'escape reality and experience peace' without extra 'to'. Add comma before 'because' for clarity.

× If I had a chance, I would like to take a long walk in the Great Wall of China.

✓ If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk on the Great Wall of China.

Use 'the chance' rather than 'a chance' in this conditional context. Use preposition 'on' for walking along a wall or path, not 'in'.

× It's a very historic place that is snowing all over the world, so it would be nice if I could experience how it feels like walking in that long stairs and see the beauty.

✓ It's a very historic place that sometimes has snow, so it would be nice to experience what it feels like to walk those long stairs and see the beauty.

'Snowing all over the world' is incorrect and exaggerated; replace with 'sometimes has snow' or 'is sometimes covered in snow'. Use 'experience what it feels like to walk' for correct phrasing and 'those long stairs' rather than 'that long stairs'. Remove extra 'in' before 'that long stairs'.

× Lately I went for a walk just on the road.

✓ Lately I have gone for walks just on the road.

Use present perfect 'have gone' with 'lately' to indicate recent actions. Also plural 'walks' sounds more natural if implying repeated short walks. Alternatively 'I went for a walk recently' (past simple) would also be acceptable.

× I wasn't able to have a specific destinations because I usually go for a walk during the night time, so it's very risky if I go for a longer duration of walks.

✓ I wasn't able to have a specific destination because I usually walk at night, so it's very risky for me to go on longer walks.

Use singular 'destination' after 'a specific'. 'Go for a walk during the night time' is awkward; use 'walk at night'. 'Longer duration of walks' is wordy; use 'longer walks' or 'longer walks for a longer time'. Also change 'it's very risky if I go' to 'it's very risky for me to go' for clarity.