Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition (e.g. 'walk in the park' twice), and add one specific detail about frequency or purpose. Use linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I usually walk to work because it’s close to my home, and I often go for evening walks in the nearby park to relax and get some exercise.

Sugestão: Correct tense and phrasing errors and be more specific. Use past simple for childhood activities, avoid repetition, and link ideas (e.g. 'because' or 'so'). Add one concrete memory to enrich the answer.

Exemplo: Yes, I often went for walks when I was a child. After dinner my parents and I would walk to the local park, and I remember watching many different birds there because my parents loved nature.

Sugestão: Clarify and correct word choice (use 'walk' not 'work'), give two specific reasons and connect them with a linking phrase. Use natural vocabulary (e.g. 'fresh air', 'green space', 'relax').

Exemplo: People like to walk in parks because the green space has lots of trees and fresh air, and it’s a peaceful place to relax or exercise away from busy streets.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and fluency: use conditional correctly and natural expressions ('I would like to take a long walk along the lakeshore'). Give a specific reason and link it smoothly.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk along the lakeshore because the path is lined with trees and the fresh air would be a good break from my busy life.

Sugestão: Use correct past tense and reduce hesitation. Combine sentences for coherence and add one specific detail about the picnic. Correct plural forms and verb agreement.

Exemplo: Lately I went to a park near my house that has many trees and flowers. Last weekend we had a picnic there with my family and friends, and we enjoyed food, games, and a long walk together.

× Yes I do. I walk a lot from my home to my work because my work is near to my home in the evening and I also go to a park and walk in the park.

✓ Yes, I do. I walk a lot from my home to my workplace because my work is near my home; in the evening I also go to a park and walk there.

Multiple present-tense usage and wording: 'work' used for place should be 'workplace'; 'near to my home' should be 'near my home' (preposition error, but fits present-tense context); sentence run-on corrected with punctuation and clearer time phrase. Suggestion: use commas and semicolons to separate ideas and use 'there' to avoid repetition.

× Yes, when I was a child, I work, I work a lot on that time.

✓ Yes, when I was a child, I worked a lot at that time.

The verb should be in past tense to match 'when I was a child'. 'I work' is present and incorrect. Also 'on that time' should be 'at that time' (preposition). Suggestion: change verbs to past tense and use correct preposition 'at' for time expressions.

× My parents also love work.

✓ My parents also loved working.

Context describes childhood (past), so verbs should be past tense. 'Love work' is awkward; 'loved working' or 'liked to work' is more natural. Suggestion: use past tense and gerund to describe habitual actions in the past.

× So after dinner, we also went to the walk with my parents and I saw a lot of birds in the park.

✓ So after dinner, we also went for a walk with my parents, and I saw many birds in the park.

'Went to the walk' is incorrect; English uses 'go for a walk'. 'A lot of birds' is acceptable but 'many birds' is more natural. Also comma and conjunction improve flow. Suggestion: use 'go for a walk' for this activity.

× It's it's good for me.

✓ It was good for me.

Referring to a past habit, so use past tense 'was' rather than present 'is'. Also remove repeated 'it's'. Suggestion: choose tense consistent with the time frame and avoid repetitions.

× Yeah, nowadays most people like to work in a park because in the park there's a lot of trees and some fresh air.

✓ Yes, nowadays most people like to walk in a park because there are a lot of trees and some fresh air.

'Work in a park' contradicts context (walking); change to 'walk'. 'There's a lot of trees' is subject-verb disagreement and count noun issue: use 'there are many trees' or 'a lot of trees'. This is present-tense description, so keep present tense. Suggestion: use 'walk' and 'there are' with plural nouns.

× I would like to take a long walk to the Lakeshore.

✓ I would like to take a long walk along the lakeshore.

'Walk to the lakeshore' suggests destination; often people 'walk along the lakeshore' to enjoy it. Preposition choice depends on intended meaning; if you mean 'near the lake' use 'along' or 'by'. Suggestion: use 'along the lakeshore' for a long walk beside the water.

× I like there because there is a lot of trees and I have to take some fresh air to my busy life.

✓ I like it there because there are a lot of trees, and I can get some fresh air from my busy life.

Missing pronoun 'it' after 'like'. 'There is a lot of trees' should be 'there are a lot of trees' (subject-verb agreement). 'I have to take some fresh air to my busy life' is unnatural; 'get some fresh air from my busy life' or 'to escape my busy life' is better. Suggestion: include 'it', correct verb agreement, and use natural collocations like 'get fresh air' and 'escape a busy life'.

× Lately I went to a park near to my house.

✓ Recently I went to a park near my house.

'Lately' is usually paired with present perfect for recent actions; 'recently' is better with simple past. 'Near to my house' should be 'near my house'. Suggestion: choose adverb that fits tense and drop unnecessary 'to' after 'near'.

× Uh, there is a lot of trees and flowers.

✓ There are a lot of trees and flowers.

Subject-verb agreement: plural 'trees and flowers' requires 'there are' not 'there is'. Suggestion: use 'there are' with plural nouns.

× Last weekend we did picnic in the park and we enjoy a lot with my families and my friends.

✓ Last weekend we had a picnic in the park, and we enjoyed ourselves a lot with my family and friends.

'Did picnic' is incorrect; use 'had a picnic' or 'went on a picnic'. 'We enjoy' should be past tense 'we enjoyed'. 'With my families' is wrong; usually 'my family' (singular) and 'friends'. Add reflexive 'ourselves' after 'enjoyed' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: use correct collocations: 'had a picnic', past tense 'enjoyed', and 'family' (not families) unless multiple families were present.