Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and relevant: answer the question about walking (not working), use a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and keep it concise (≤5 sentences). Add one specific reason and a brief example. Use linking words (because, so).

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot, especially for exercise and stress relief. I usually walk for 30–45 minutes every morning because it helps me clear my mind and stay healthy. For example, I walk to the nearby park most days and sometimes listen to music while I walk.

Sugestão: Use past tense for childhood, organize into a clear topic sentence plus supporting detail, and avoid repetition. Be specific about activities and duration, and use linking words (for example, so).

Exemplo: Yes, I often went outside to walk and play when I was a child. For example, I used to walk to the nearby sports ground to play volleyball, and I usually spent one to two hours there after school. Because of that, I was active and enjoyed spending time outdoors.

Sugestão: Start with a clear opinion and give two specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words (for example, because, furthermore). Avoid vague or unrelated phrases. Provide concrete examples (e.g., exercise, fresh air, family time).

Exemplo: I think people like to walk in parks because it relieves stress and provides fresh air. For example, many families do yoga or play games together in the morning, which creates a pleasant social atmosphere. Also, parks are safe and quiet, so they are good places to relax.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear location and reason. Use conditional tense correctly, be realistic about distance/time, and give specific sensory details. Keep to 1–3 sentences and link ideas (because, for example).

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would like to walk along a coastal path early in the morning because it makes me feel close to nature. For example, I would enjoy seeing seabirds, fishermen starting work, and the sunrise, and I would probably walk for two to three hours to take it all in.

Sugestão: Use past simple for recent events, give a concise answer with specific details (who, where, distance, when) and one brief comment about how you felt. Avoid repetition and incorrect tense.

Exemplo: Recently I went for a morning walk with my brother along a riverside trail that was about 2–3 kilometres long. We enjoyed the fresh air and chatted the whole time, and it was a nice way to spend time together.

× Yes I work a lot because it gave me a stress free life and I gave happy in the life so that way I preferred working is the best.

✓ Yes, I work a lot because it gives me a stress-free life and makes me happy, so I prefer working.

The student mixed past and present tenses and used incorrect verb forms. 'Gave' is past tense but the meaning is general/habitual, so present simple 'gives' is correct. 'I gave happy' is ungrammatical; use 'makes me happy'. 'Preferred' should be present simple 'prefer' for a habitual preference. Also remove redundancy and incorrect final clause. Suggestion: keep consistent present tense for habits and use correct verb collocations like 'gives me' and 'makes me happy'.

× Yes, I will always going to the outside when I have a child because in the childhood I am going to play volleyball in the sports ground for nearby for example near about I I spend a one to two hours to walking in the ground, so I always going to outside in the childhood.

✓ Yes, I always went outside to play when I was a child; I used to play volleyball at the nearby sports ground and would spend one to two hours walking there.

The student mixed future, present continuous and past when talking about childhood. For past habits use 'used to' or simple past 'I went'/'I used to play'. 'Will always going' is incorrect future progressive; 'I am going to play' is wrong for past. 'Spend a one to two hours to walking' should be 'spend one to two hours walking'. Suggestion: use 'used to' or simple past to describe repeated actions in childhood and correct verb forms for duration expressions.

× According to my point of view, people like to walking in the park because it relieves the stress and always happy in the life.

✓ In my point of view, people like walking in the park because it relieves stress and makes them happy in life.

'Like to walking' is incorrect; use either 'like to walk' or 'like walking'. 'Relieves the stress' should be 'relieves stress' (no article). 'Always happy in the life' needs a verb: 'makes them happy in life'. Suggestion: choose correct gerund or infinitive form and include proper subject and verb for 'happy' (e.g. 'makes them happy').

× They always joking and yoga with the family and fun together her childhood so that why people always walk in the parks.

✓ They always joke and do yoga with their family and have fun together, which is why people often walk in parks.

'They always joking' lacks auxiliary verb; use 'always joke' or 'are always joking'. 'Yoga with the family' requires 'do yoga with their family'. 'Her childhood' is wrong pronoun and phrase; context suggests 'as children' or 'together' so use 'have fun together'. 'So that why' should be 'which is why'. Suggestion: use correct verb forms ('do yoga'), possessive pronouns ('their'), and linking phrases ('which is why').

× Uh, I am going to about around 30 to 40 kilometers because it gave me a close connection to the nature because in the morning bloods birds are flying in the sky and workers are going to harbour and farmer also working in the working in the field.

✓ I would like to walk about 30 to 40 kilometers because it gives me a close connection to nature; in the morning birds fly in the sky, workers go to the harbour, and farmers work in the fields.

The original mixes 'am going to' with unclear intention; the question asks a hypothetical preference ('Where would you like...') so use conditional 'I would like'. 'Gave' should be present 'gives' describing the effect. 'Bloods birds' is incorrect; use 'birds'. Use present simple for habitual or general observations: 'birds fly', 'workers go', 'farmers work'. Also correct plural nouns ('farmers', 'fields'). Suggestion: match conditional mood for preferences and use present simple for general facts.

× So that's why I will see in the morning. So I will always one to two hours of working.

✓ So that's why I like to see those things in the morning. I would usually walk for one to two hours.

'I will see in the morning' is unnatural; better 'I like to see' or 'I enjoy seeing'. 'I will always one to two hours of working' is ungrammatical; for habitual duration use 'I usually walk for one to two hours' or 'I would usually walk for one to two hours'. Suggestion: use verbs that express preferences ('like', 'enjoy') and correct duration expressions with 'for' and the activity verb 'walk'.

× Recently I am going to with my brother in the long journey about a 2 to 3 kilometer with my morning walk with my brother.

✓ Recently I went on a long walk of about 2 to 3 kilometers with my brother in the morning.

The student used present continuous 'am going to' for a recent past event; use simple past 'went'. 'Long journey about a 2 to 3 kilometer' is awkward; say 'a long walk of about 2 to 3 kilometers'. Remove repeated phrase 'with my brother'. Suggestion: use simple past for completed recent actions and correct expressions for distance and 'walk' vs 'journey'.

× So that's why I will enjoy all the all the tracks. So that's why I will always spend a lot of time together and always.

✓ I enjoyed the whole route, and we always spent a lot of time together.

The sentences repeat phrases and use future 'will' incorrectly for past experience. Use past 'enjoyed' and 'spent' for a recent outing. 'All the all the tracks' is repetitive and unclear; use 'the whole route'. 'Spend a lot of time together' should match past tense 'we spent'. Suggestion: avoid repetition, choose correct tense for the context, and combine ideas into clearer sentences.