Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and confident: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one clear reason and a brief example. Reduce hesitations and grammar errors (e.g., say "limited time" not "limited of time"). Keep within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Not really. At the moment I don’t walk much because I need to study a lot, so I have limited time. However, I stay active at home by doing short exercises in the evening.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and add one or two specific details with linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrasing (e.g., "we used to walk to the park"). Keep sentences grammatical.

Exemplo: Yes, we used to walk a lot when I was a child. For example, my siblings and I often walked to the local park after school, and sometimes we walked to relatives' houses on weekends.

Sugestão: Start with a concise reason, then support it with two specific points using linking words like "because" and "also". Improve grammar ("the environment is pleasant") and avoid general phrases.

Exemplo: People like walking in parks because the environment is pleasant and calm. Also, parks have greenery and playgrounds, so walkers can enjoy fresh air and watch children playing.

Sugestão: Be concise and avoid repetition. Give one main choice and two clear reasons connected with linking words (e.g., "because" and "also"). Fix repetition and awkward phrasing (remove duplicate "there is").

Exemplo: I would choose a large park because it is peaceful and full of trees. Also, I could meet other people and enjoy watching children play, which I find relaxing.

Sugestão: Use past simple or present perfect consistently when talking about recent activity, and give a specific time phrase. Replace "colony" with "neighborhood" if more natural. Avoid filler words like "so yeah."

Exemplo: Lately I have been walking in my neighborhood on a small track near my house. I usually walk for about 10–20 minutes in the evening whenever I have time.

× Uh, if I talk about now, no, because I have to study a lot.

✓ Uh, if I talk about now, no, because I have to study a lot.

No correction needed for tense here; sentence uses present simple correctly to describe current situation. (Included to show no change required.)

× That's why I don't get time to walk, but I'm very active.

✓ That's why I don't have time to walk, but I'm very active.

The verb phrase 'get time' is nonstandard in this context. Use 'have time' with the noun 'time' and preposition 'to' before the verb 'walk'. Suggestion: use 'have time to' + base verb for standard English.

× Uh, usually because of, uh, limited of time, I don't walk a lot.

✓ Usually, because of limited time, I don't walk a lot.

'Limited of time' is incorrect. Use the quantifier phrase 'limited time' without 'of'. Also move 'usually' to the beginning for natural word order. Suggestion: 'because of' + noun phrase (limited time).

× Did you often go outside to have a walk when you were a child?

✓ Did you often go outside for a walk when you were a child?

The question form is past (Did ...), so 'go' is correct. The prepositional phrase 'to have a walk' is awkward; standard collocation is 'go for a walk'. This is a preposition/collocation correction but impacts verb phrase choice. Suggestion: use 'go for a walk' for natural English.

× Yes, a lot when uh, whenever we get time, we love to walk.

✓ Yes, a lot. Whenever we got time, we loved to walk.

The examiner asked about childhood (past). Use past tense 'got' and 'loved' to match time frame. Also split into two sentences for clarity. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense when speaking about childhood.

× Me and my siblings, we go out and walk together and we go on go to park by walking and to any places we go for.

✓ My siblings and I used to go out and walk together; we would walk to the park and to other places.

Use 'My siblings and I' (correct subject pronoun order and form). Since the action is in the past, use 'used to' or past tense. Remove redundant 'go on go' and awkward 'by walking' and 'to any places we go for'. Suggestion: use 'used to' or 'would' for habitual past actions and proper subject order.

× Because parks are places where there are so many plants and children are playing, environment is very nice in the parks.

✓ Because parks are places with many plants and children playing, the environment in parks is very nice.

Use 'places with' rather than 'places where there are so many plants and children are playing' for conciseness. Also include the definite article 'the' before 'environment' and use 'in parks' (no need for 'the parks'). Suggestion: use 'the environment in parks' or 'parks have a pleasant environment.'

× So that's why people prefer to walk in park rather than on other places.

✓ So that's why people prefer to walk in parks rather than in other places.

Use plural 'parks' or 'the park' and the preposition 'in' for places; 'on other places' is incorrect. Suggestion: 'prefer to walk in parks' or 'prefer walking in the park to walking in other places.'

× If I get a chance to walk, long walk, I would prefer parks because parks are the places where there is there is a peaceful environment and you also get socialized as well meet new people and there are children as well because I love to spend time with children and watching children play.

✓ If I had the chance to take a long walk, I would prefer parks because they have a peaceful environment; you can socialize and meet new people, and there are children to watch playing, which I enjoy.

The sentence mixes present and conditional forms and repeats phrases. For a hypothetical situation contrary to present, use past tense in the 'if' clause ('If I had a chance') and 'would' in the main clause. 'Parks are the places where there is there is' is repetitive; use 'they have' or 'which have'. Use 'socialize' and 'meet' in base forms and simplify the list. Suggestion: use correct second conditional structure and avoid repetition.

× Where did you go for a walk lately?

✓ Where have you gone for a walk lately?

The question 'lately' (recent past) is better paired with present perfect ('have you gone') rather than simple past 'did you go'. Use present perfect to ask about recent experiences. Suggestion: use present perfect with 'lately' or 'recently.'

× I go for a walk in my colony where there is a track on which we actually walk.

✓ I go for a walk in my neighborhood where there is a track that we use for walking.

'Colony' is a regional word; 'neighborhood' is more natural in many varieties of English. 'On which we actually walk' is awkward; use 'that we use for walking.' Tense 'I go' is present simple and acceptable for habitual action. Suggestion: use natural collocations: 'a track that we use for walking.'

× I walk for about 10 to 20 minutes whenever I get time, especially in evening.

✓ I walk for about 10 to 20 minutes whenever I have time, especially in the evening.

Use 'have time' instead of 'get time' and include the definite article 'the' before 'evening'. Suggestion: 'whenever I have time' and 'in the evening.'

× So yeah.

✓ So yeah.

No grammatical correction needed; this is an informal closing phrase.