Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence (Yes, I walk a lot), correct word choice (e.g. 'wood' or 'yard' instead of 'ward'), and avoid redundancy. Use one or two specific supporting details and a linking phrase. Pronunciation/grammar: use present simple consistently and correct articles and pluralization.

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot. I have a wood next to my house, so I often spend my free time there and explore different paths; for example, yesterday I walked to the lake nearby.

Sugestão: Use past tense consistently and a clear topic sentence. Give one specific detail and link reasons with a connector (because/as). Correct modal/time expressions (we could/would).

Exemplo: Yes, I often went for walks as a child. I had lots of friends and we would explore the streets of our small town because there were many places to play.

Sugestão: Start with a concise topic sentence and use accurate vocabulary (e.g. 'inspired' not 'inspirited', 'gorgeous views' -> 'beautiful scenery'). Avoid contradictions like 'most' then 'any'. Use linking words like 'for example' or 'also' and provide specific reasons.

Exemplo: I think many people enjoy walking in parks because it helps them relax and feel refreshed. For example, they appreciate the beautiful scenery, take photos, and discover new routes.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer and avoid filler. Use correct article usage ('China' without 'the') and more concise reasons with linking words. Be specific about the place and what you would do or expect there.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would like to take a long walk in China, especially in its forested areas. I want to see the diverse trees and flowers and enjoy long peaceful hikes.

Sugestão: Use past simple or present perfect correctly for recent actions (e.g. 'lately I have been going' or 'recently I went'). Be concise and clear about specific routes or paths. Avoid vague phrases like 'travel ways' and 'I'm on the way to it'.

Exemplo: Lately I have been walking in the wood next to my house. There are many paths I want to explore, but I usually stick to the main trails nearby.

× Yes, I work a lot to be honest.

✓ Yes, I walk a lot, to be honest.

The student's response does not match the examiner's present simple question about walking habits. The verb 'work' changes the meaning. Use present simple 'walk' to answer what was asked. Suggestion: repeat key verb from the question or rephrase to show frequency using present simple (I walk a lot).

× I have a ward next to my house and I love to spend more free time there.

✓ I have a wood next to my house and I love to spend more of my free time there.

The noun 'ward' is incorrect in this context; likely 'wood' (small forest) is intended. Also 'spend more free time' needs the possessive 'my' and 'more of my free time' is the natural phrasing. Suggestion: use correct noun and include possessive when referring to one's free time.

× There are lots of travel ways.

✓ There are lots of walking paths.

'Travel ways' is unnatural and ungrammatical in English. Use a clearer noun phrase like 'walking paths' or 'trails'. Ensure noun choice matches intended meaning.

× For example, yesterday I walked to the lake.

✓ For example, yesterday I walked to the lake.

This sentence is grammatically correct. It uses the past simple appropriately to describe a completed action yesterday. No change needed.

× I really love to explore the other ways.

✓ I really love exploring the other paths.

Use the gerund 'exploring' or infinitive 'to explore' consistently; 'the other ways' is awkward—'other paths' or 'other routes' is clearer. Suggestion: use 'exploring other paths' for natural phrasing.

× Yes, to be honest, when I was a child I really often go outside to have a walk.

✓ Yes, to be honest, when I was a child I really often went outside for walks.

The time frame 'when I was a child' requires past tense 'went' not present 'go'. Also 'have a walk' is less natural than 'go for walks' or 'take walks'. Suggestion: use past simple for habits in the past: 'I often went outside for walks.'

× I had lots of friends and I lived in a small town so we can hang out everywhere.

✓ I had lots of friends and I lived in a small town, so we could hang out everywhere.

The sentence mixes past context with present modal 'can'. For past habitual ability use 'could'. Also add a comma before 'so' for readability. Suggestion: keep verb forms consistent with past timeframe.

× In my opinion, most of people like to walk in parks because it makes them feel more relaxed and inspirited.

✓ In my opinion, most people like to walk in parks because it makes them feel more relaxed and inspired.

Use 'most people' (not 'most of people'). 'Inspirited' is incorrect; the correct adjective is 'inspired'. Suggestion: use common collocations: 'most people' and 'feel inspired'.

× But any of them like to walk in parks because they like to see that gorgeous views, take photos or just explore new places.

✓ But some of them like to walk in parks because they like to see those gorgeous views, take photos, or just explore new places.

'Any of them' is incorrect here; 'some of them' fits the meaning. 'That gorgeous views' mixes singular demonstrative 'that' with plural 'views'; use 'those views'. Add commas in a list. Suggestion: choose correct quantifier and matching demonstrative.

× Actually, if I had the chance, I would like to go to the China.

✓ Actually, if I had the chance, I would like to go to China.

Do not use the definite article 'the' before country names like 'China'. Use the base country name. Suggestion: 'go to China.'

× For me, there are many woods where I would like to be.

✓ For me, there are many woods where I would like to go.

Saying 'where I would like to be' is not wrong but 'go' matches the question about taking a long walk and sounds more natural. Suggestion: use verbs that fit the action (go for a walk in the woods).

× There are many gorgeous trees and flowers, so this is the main reason.

✓ There are many gorgeous trees and flowers, which is the main reason.

Use 'which' to introduce a relative clause explaining the reason. 'So this is the main reason' is grammatical but 'which is the main reason' flows better. Suggestion: connect clauses smoothly with relative pronouns.

× As I've already said, I have a wood next to my house, so lately I go for a walk there.

✓ As I've already said, I have a wood next to my house, so lately I have been going for walks there.

Mixes present perfect 'I've already said' with simple present 'I go' when referring to recent repeated actions. Use present perfect continuous ('have been going') or present perfect ('have gone') to indicate recent habitual actions. Suggestion: 'lately I have been going for walks there.'

× There are much more travel ways where I'd like to explore, but I'm on the way to it so I'd like to spend most of my time there.

✓ There are many more trails I'd like to explore, but I'm on my way there, so I'd like to spend most of my time in the woods.

'Much more' is used with uncountable nouns; use 'many more' for countable 'trails'. 'Travel ways' is unnatural; 'trails' is better. 'I'm on the way to it' is awkward; use 'I'm on my way there'. Also 'spend most of my time there' is acceptable, but clarifying 'in the woods' is natural. Suggestion: use correct quantifiers and idiomatic phrases.