Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and gives concrete details (step count, places). To improve, make the opening sentence more direct, avoid minor redundancy ("I work quite a lot" seems misplaced), and use one linking phrase to connect ideas. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and correct small grammar issues.

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot because I live within walking distance of most places I need to go, like the supermarket, the gym and my office. I usually do about 7,000 to 8,000 steps a day, which I find healthy. Also, when the weather is good, I prefer walking because it’s convenient and pleasant.

Sugestão: Good direct response with specific details and a clear contrast. To improve, combine sentences more smoothly with a linking phrase and correct minor phrasing ("stay indoor" → "stay indoors"). Aim for slightly more natural vocabulary (e.g., "explore" rather than "wandering around").

Exemplo: Yes, absolutely. When I was a child I spent a lot of time outdoors exploring the neighbourhood with my friends, and my parents encouraged us to play outside rather than stay indoors watching TV.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses reasons but has several grammar and word-choice errors that reduce clarity (e.g., "much more feels much more relaxing," "a busy streets," "past usually have present views"). To improve, state main reasons clearly, use correct plurals/articles, link points with conjunctions, and provide one short example or consequence. Keep sentences concise and correct verb forms.

Exemplo: I think there are a few reasons. Firstly, parks provide a break from city noise and stress, so walking there feels more relaxing than walking on busy streets. Secondly, parks offer pleasant scenery, fresh air and a sense of safety, which makes exercising comfortable.

Sugestão: The idea is good, but there are vocabulary and grammar mistakes ("watch along the coast," "Clave of Ireland," "look at wide open sky"). To improve, correct verb choices, use accurate place names, and connect emotional reason to the location. Keep it to two or three concise sentences.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I’d love to take a long walk along the coast, for example on the Cliffs of Moher in Ireland or on the beaches of New Zealand. I enjoy listening to the waves and looking at the wide open sky because it makes me feel calm and refreshed.

Sugestão: Strong and specific response with good sequence (present habit, recent event). Improve slightly by fixing one word choice ("working quite often in a small park" → likely "walking"), and tighten phrasing to avoid redundancy. Use a linking word to connect the habitual and recent action.

Exemplo: Lately I’ve been walking often in a small park near my apartment. It’s nothing fancy—just a few trees and a circular path—but it’s very convenient. Last weekend I also took a longer walk along the riverbank into town; the weather was perfect and it felt great to get fresh air after being indoors most of the week.

× On average I probably do around 7000 to 8000 steps a day, which I find healthy and convenient, especially when the weather is good.

✓ On average I probably do around 7,000 to 8,000 steps a day, which I find healthy and convenient, especially when the weather is good.

This sentence mainly needs number formatting (commas) rather than a grammar category from the provided list; however, it does not violate the listed types, so no grammatical correction required. Keep numbers clearly formatted; this is style not grammar.

× My parents always encouraged me to play outside rather than stay indoor watching TV.

✓ My parents always encouraged me to play outside rather than stay indoors watching TV.

The noun phrase 'indoor' is an adjective; the correct adverbial form 'indoors' should be used after 'stay'. This is a singular/plural and word-form related error listed under singular and plural issues (ID 1). Suggestion: use 'indoors' when meaning 'inside the house' in this context.

× I think there's a few reasons.

✓ I think there are a few reasons.

'There's' is a contraction of 'there is' which requires a singular noun after it; 'a few reasons' is plural, so use 'there are'. This is a sentence structure/subject-verb agreement issue (ID 26). Suggestion: match 'there is/are' to the number of the following noun.

× Walking there much more feels much more relaxing than walking along a busy streets.

✓ Walking there feels much more relaxing than walking along busy streets.

Redundant 'much more' and incorrect article 'a' before plural 'streets'. Remove duplicate modifier and use plural without 'a'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26). Suggestion: avoid repeating comparative intensifiers and ensure articles match count (a + singular noun, no 'a' with plurals).

× Also past usually have present views, fresh air and often a sense of safety so people can exercise and being comfortably.

✓ Also parks usually have pleasant views, fresh air and often a sense of safety, so people can exercise comfortably.

Multiple problems: 'past' should be 'parks' (plural noun), 'present views' seems wrong; 'pleasant views' fits context, 'being comfortably' is ungrammatical — use adverb 'comfortably' with 'exercise'. This matches singular/plural and word choice issues (ID 1). Suggestion: check for correct noun form and use adverbs to modify verbs.

× If I had the chance, I'd love to watch along the coast somewhere like Clave of Ireland or the beaches of New Zealand.

✓ If I had the chance, I'd love to walk along the coast somewhere like the Cliffs of Ireland or the beaches of New Zealand.

The verb 'watch' is incorrect; context requires 'walk'. Also 'Clave of Ireland' is likely 'Cliffs of Ireland' and needs the definite article 'the' with 'Cliffs'. This is a present-tense/word-choice issue (ID 6). Suggestion: use verbs that match the intended activity and include 'the' with well-known geographic features.

× I enjoy listening to the sound of waves and look at wide open sky because it makes me feel calm and refreshed, unlike walking in a busy city.

✓ I enjoy listening to the sound of waves and looking at the wide open sky because it makes me feel calm and refreshed, unlike walking in a busy city.

Parallel structure requires present participle 'looking' to match 'listening'. Add 'the' before 'wide open sky'. This is a present participle/parallelism error (ID 10). Suggestion: keep verbs in the same form when joined by 'and'.

× Lately I've been working quite often in a small park near my apartment.

✓ Lately I've been walking quite often in a small park near my apartment.

The verb 'working' is incorrect in context; the question asks where the student went for a walk, so 'walking' is appropriate. This is a present tense/word-choice issue (ID 6). Suggestion: choose verbs that match the activity described.

× Last weekend I also took a longer walk along the riverbank to the town.

✓ Last weekend I also took a longer walk along the riverbank to the town.

This sentence is grammatically correct in past tense; no change needed. Included for completeness; no error from the provided list.

× On average I probably do around 7000 to 8000 steps a day, which I find healthy and convenient, especially when the weather is good.

✓ On average I probably do around 7,000 to 8,000 steps a day, which I find healthy and convenient, especially when the weather is good.

Verb tense and usage are appropriate; only number formatting adjusted. No grammatical tense error. Suggestion: format large numbers with commas for clarity.