Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Correct the grammar (use present simple or continuous correctly) and be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one supporting detail with a linking word. Avoid unnecessary words. Pronunciation of verbs and plurals should be accurate.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I usually run two or three kilometers in the park every morning, which helps me stay healthy and energetic.

Sugestão: Answer directly using past tense for childhood and contrast with the present using linking words. Remove hesitation and incorrect verbs. Keep it to one topic sentence plus one supporting detail (max 5 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, I did. When I was a child I often walked in the park with my family, but now I usually run along the road in the evenings instead.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and two specific reasons connected with linking words. Avoid fillers and unclear words like 'half' or 'spare.' Use vocabulary relevant to parks (fresh air, greenery, peaceful).

Exemplo: People like walking in parks because they offer fresh air and greenery, and also because parks are quieter and more peaceful than busy streets.

Sugestão: Answer the conditional correctly (If I had the chance) and stay on topic: the question asks where you would walk, not play sports. Give a location and a reason with linking words. Use correct verb forms and countable nouns.

Exemplo: If I had the chance, I would take a long walk along a coastal trail because the sea views are relaxing and help me unwind after studying.

Sugestão: Use past tense for a recent activity and give a specific, coherent time. Avoid mixing present habitual tense with past question. Be concise and clear about when you went and what you did.

Exemplo: Recently I walked in the park last night from 9:00 to 10:00 because I needed some fresh air after studying.

× I often running two or three kilometers every morning in the park.

✓ I often run two or three kilometers every morning in the park.

The original uses the base verb plus -ing without an auxiliary, which is incorrect for habitual actions in the present simple. Use the simple present 'run' with adverb 'often' to describe a regular activity.

× Yes, I did when I would enjoy, I often uh, work in the park, uh, every morning, umm, but nowadays I often running in the road.

✓ Yes, I did. When I was young, I often worked in the park every morning, but nowadays I often run on the road every night.

Multiple errors: 'when I would enjoy' is ungrammatical for past time reference — use 'when I was young' or 'when I enjoyed'. 'Work' should be past simple 'worked' to match 'did' and the past time frame. 'Running' should be 'run' for present habitual action. Use preposition 'on the road' and place time 'every night' at the end. Ensure verb tenses are consistent for past vs present.

× Because in the park, uh, it's a, it's half, MMM, more comfortable, spare.

✓ Because the park is more comfortable and spacious.

The original contains unclear words 'half' and 'spare' incorrectly used as adjectives. Use clear comparative 'more comfortable' and the correct adjective 'spacious' to express that parks feel roomy. Also remove filler words and unnecessary 'it's a' repetition.

× If I has a chance, I will play in footballs and basketball or volleyballs.

✓ If I had a chance, I would play football, basketball, or volleyball.

'If I has' is incorrect; use the past subjunctive 'had' in conditional clauses. The main clause should use 'would' for hypothetical results. Sports names are uncountable here, so use singular forms 'football, basketball, or volleyball' without plural '-s'. Also use 'play' without 'in'.

× It helped me uh, feel more comfortable after a long study.

✓ It helps me feel more comfortable after a long study session.

Context implies a general truth about how exercise affects the speaker now, so present simple 'helps' is appropriate. Also use 'study session' to clarify the noun phrase; 'after a long study' is incomplete.

× I often works in the park every morning at six at 9:00 PM to 10:00 PM.

✓ I often work in the park every morning at six, or from 9:00 PM to 10:00 PM.

'I' requires the base verb 'work' not 'works'. The times given are contradictory for 'morning' and '9:00 PM to 10:00 PM'; clarify by offering alternatives using 'or' and separate time expressions. Ensure verb agrees with the subject.