Walking— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Старайтесь отвечать более сжато и связно: начните с короткого утверждения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных деталей. Избегайте повторов («yes, yes») и незаконченных предложений. Работайте над правильной связкой мыслей и употреблением артиклей и количественных выражений (например, “no people on the streets” → “no one on the streets”).

Exemplo: Yes, I walk a lot every day. I usually walk alone or with my sister in the evenings, which is our favorite time because the streets are quiet and peaceful.

Sugestão: Избегайте смешения времен и двойных форм (например, “my mom always go with me, went with me”). Начните с простого прошлого утверждения, затем добавьте конкретные примеры. Следите за согласованием времен и употреблением артиклей.

Exemplo: Yes, I often went for walks as a child. My mother usually took me to the city parks or to amusement parks, and we sometimes had picnics where we would walk a lot during the day.

Sugestão: Начинайте с чёткой темы и избегайте бессмысленных фраз («Always hope you»). Дайте 2–3 конкретных причин и свяжите их логически (например, “because…, so…”). Исправьте слова: «the earth is really clear» неуместно — лучше «the air is fresh»; «work in parks» → «walk in parks».

Exemplo: I think people like walking in parks because the air is fresh and the scenery is beautiful, so it helps them relax and clear their minds.

Sugestão: Отвечайте прямо и структурированно: начните с места, затем объясните причину и ограничение. Избегайте повторов и незаконченных мыслей. Уточняйте формулировки: «take a long walk abroad» и «travel to another country»; говорите о реальной возможности или мечте кратко и ясно.

Exemplo: I would like to take a long walk through Europe if I had the chance, because I want to see different cultures and landscapes, but I cannot afford to travel that often at the moment.

Sugestão: Используйте правильные времена (для недавнего действия — present perfect или past simple) и точные слова. Фразы «see stars and series» кажутся ошибочными — скорее «stars and stars are visible at night» или «clear sky». Дайте одно-два конкретных примера и сравнение корректно сформулируйте.

Exemplo: Lately I have been walking in open areas near my home, especially at night when the sky is clear and the stars are visible; I find night walks more peaceful than afternoon ones.

× It's our favorite time because there is no people on streets.

✓ It's our favorite time because there are no people on the streets.

Subject-verb agreement with countable plural noun: 'people' is plural so use 'are' not 'is'. Also include definite article 'the' before 'streets' for specificity. Suggestion: use 'there are no people on the streets'.

× My mom always go with me, went with me for walk.

✓ My mom always went with me; she went with me for walks.

When talking about past habitual actions, use past tense 'went' for third person singular. Also parallel structure: 'went with me for walks' or 'went with me on walks'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistently and use plural 'walks' or article 'a walk'.

× Sometimes we go to the picnic and get a lot of steps in a day.

✓ Sometimes we went on picnics and took many steps in a day.

Context is past ('when you were a child'), so use past tense 'went' and 'took'. Also 'go to the picnic' is incorrect collocation; use 'went on picnics'. 'A lot of steps' is better as 'many steps'. Suggestion: match tense to context and use correct collocations.

× Always hope you.

✓ I always hope so.

Fragment 'Always hope you' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intended 'I always hope so' meaning 'I hope that'. Suggestion: include subject 'I' and use correct verb-object 'hope so' or 'I always hope people enjoy it' depending on meaning.

× the earth is really clear and the atmosphere is calm.

✓ the air is really clear and the atmosphere is calm.

'Earth is clear' is odd when referring to visibility; use 'air' or 'sky' as collocation. 'Really' as an adverb is fine. Suggestion: use natural collocations like 'the air is clear' or 'the sky is clear'.

× I really like to work in parks too because it can clear my mind and calm me.

✓ I really like working in parks too because it clears my mind and calms me.

When expressing general preferences, use gerund 'working' or 'to work'; if using 'working', follow with present simple 'clears' for general truth. 'It can clear my mind and calm me' is acceptable but 'it clears my mind and calms me' is more natural. Suggestion: use consistent verb forms and subject-verb agreement.

× I I really like to take a long walk abroad when I go through another country I can go in for work there for long times, but I can't do it every day because I haven't got a lot of money to go abroad every week or every month so it's my dream to go for a walk through the.

✓ I would really like to take a long walk abroad. When I travel to another country for work for long periods, I can't do it every day because I don't have much money to go abroad every week or every month, so it's my dream to walk through one someday.

This run-on sentence has tense and modal issues. Use conditional 'would like' for desire. Use 'travel' or 'go to' instead of 'go through', 'for long periods' instead of 'for long times'. Use present simple 'don't have' instead of 'haven't got' for clarity. End with complete object 'walk through one' (a country) to avoid sentence fragment. Suggestion: split into clear sentences, correct tense and collocations.

× Lately I go for walks for the open areas, especially when it's sunny on the streets because I can see stars and series in the clear sky.

✓ Lately I have been going for walks in open areas, especially when it's clear at night because I can see stars and constellations in the sky.

'Lately' requires present perfect continuous 'have been going'. Use 'in open areas' not 'for the open areas'. 'When it's sunny on the streets' conflicts with seeing stars; change to 'when it's clear at night'. 'Series' is wrong word for groups of stars; use 'constellations'. Suggestion: match time adverb with correct tense and use appropriate vocabulary.

× It's really amazing. For me, it's can't be compared with the afternoon walking.

✓ It's really amazing. For me, it can't be compared with walking in the afternoon.

Word order: 'it's can't be compared' is incorrect; use 'it can't be compared'. Also say 'walking in the afternoon' instead of 'the afternoon walking'. Suggestion: correct negation order and use natural noun phrase 'walking in the afternoon'.