Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Говоря о чтении, постарайтесь давать чёткое вступление и использовать связки, чтобы мысль была логичной. Уберите повторы и неверные артикли («the yes», «the book»). Уточняйте примеры и давайте причину: скажите, какие именно книги вы читаете и как это влияет на навыки мышления. Ограничьте ответ до 3–4 предложений, используйте связки (for example, because, so) и правильную грамматику.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I often read books related to my job, especially about criminal justice, because they help me understand real cases and improve my professional skills. For example, last month I read a book about forensic techniques which gave me useful ideas for my work.

Sugestão: Сформулируйте чёткое предпочтение в начале и уточните причины последовательно, без повторов и «зависаний» (uh). Используйте связки (because, so, which) и конкретные примеры того, как экран помогает (поиск, словари, заметки). Ограничьте ответ до 2–3 предложений.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it allows me to quickly search information and use digital tools like dictionaries and notes. For instance, when I read articles on my laptop I can highlight text and open related sources instantly.

Sugestão: Начните с прямого ответа и объясните разницу между ситуациями, требующими внимательного чтения, и теми, где достаточно беглого просмотра. Устраните повторы («I can, I can») и незаконченные фразы. Дайте конкретные примеры материалов, которые вы читаете внимательно, и причину (чтобы объяснить коллегам, чтобы подготовиться к экзамену).

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when the material is work- or study-related, for example legal reports or academic articles, because I must understand details and explain them to others. For casual news or social posts I usually skim, since I only need the main idea.

Sugestão: Ответьте прямо и последовательно: назовите предпочтение и объясните почему, затем добавьте контрастный случай (when you do detailed reading). Избегайте бессвязных фраз и ошибок лексики ("tell it reading"). Используйте 2–3 предложения с подходящими связками (because, however, when).

Exemplo: I usually prefer scanning because I am busy and need to find key points quickly. However, when I have free time I enjoy detailed reading of books or long articles because it helps me learn more deeply.

× The yes, apparently I constantly read the book, especially it will related to my career, my job now, like yeah, it's the book about the criminal, criminal justice and the other.

✓ Yes, apparently I constantly read books, especially those related to my career and my current job, such as books about criminals and criminal justice.

The sentence contains several article and noun-number errors. 'The yes' is incorrect — use 'Yes'. 'Read the book' should be 'read books' because a general habit requires plural. 'It will related' is wrong verb form and article use; use 'related to' with plural 'those related to my career'. 'My job now' is more natural as 'my current job'. Use 'books about criminals and criminal justice' rather than 'the criminal, criminal justice and the other'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary 'the', use plural nouns for general statements, and correct word order. Grammar problem type and ID: 22:Article errors

× And I always recommend to everyone read the books every day because it can impact on our mind skills.

✓ And I always recommend that everyone read books every day because it can impact our mental skills.

'Recommend to everyone read' is incorrect construction; use 'recommend that everyone read' or 'recommend to everyone that they read'. 'Read the books' should be 'read books' for generalization. 'Impact on our mind skills' uses wrong preposition and awkward phrase; use 'impact our mental skills' or 'have an impact on our thinking skills'. Suggestion: use 'recommend that' + subjunctive or 'recommend to' with clause, remove unnecessary articles, and use 'impact' without 'on' or use 'have an impact on'. Grammar problem type and ID: 11:Incorrect use of prepositions

× Uh, if I have opportunity, I will choose uh, uh, read on a screen because I can search a lot of information through it and I can uh, get and I can, uh, explain easily, uh, and uh, using, uh, using my laptop or my phone it.

✓ If I have the opportunity, I will choose to read on a screen because I can search for a lot of information on it, and I can retrieve and explain information easily using my laptop or my phone.

Missing article in 'have opportunity' — should be 'have the opportunity'. 'Will choose read' needs infinitive 'to read'. 'Search a lot of information through it' is unnatural; use 'search for a lot of information on it'. 'I can get' is vague; 'retrieve information' is clearer. Redundant 'using, using' removed and 'it' at the end is unnecessary. Suggestion: use 'choose to [verb]', include necessary articles, use 'search for' and 'on' with devices, and avoid repetition. Grammar problem type and ID: 10:Verb in the present participle form

× Uh, when I should explain many information and related to my career or my study or my education, I always read carefully and because I can, I can explain everything, uh, for me.

✓ When I need to explain a lot of information related to my career, studies, or education, I always read carefully so that I can explain everything.

'When I should explain' is unnatural; use 'when I need to explain' to express necessity. 'Many information' is incorrect because 'information' is uncountable; use 'a lot of information' or 'much information'. 'Related to my career or my study or my education' is wordy; use 'related to my career, studies, or education'. 'I always read carefully and because I can, I can explain' has redundancy and incorrect conjunction use; better: 'I always read carefully so that I can explain everything.' Suggestion: use 'need' for necessity, treat 'information' as uncountable, streamline parallel nouns, and use purpose clauses like 'so that'. Grammar problem type and ID: 6:Present tense issue

× And I always, uh, read carefully in this time, uh, because I'm.

✓ I always read carefully at those times because it helps me understand the material.

The sentence is incomplete ('because I'm.'). 'In this time' is incorrect preposition; use 'at that time' or 'on those occasions'. The meaning is unclear; provide a complete reason, e.g., 'because it helps me understand the material.' Suggestion: avoid sentence fragments; finish clauses and use correct time expressions. Grammar problem type and ID: 26:Sentence structure errors

× Uh, I always prefer scanning reading because I am very busy.

✓ I always prefer skim reading because I am very busy.

'Scanning reading' is an incorrect noun phrase. Use 'skim reading' or 'scanning' alone: 'prefer skimming' or 'prefer skim reading'. Article isn't necessary. Suggestion: use the correct term 'skimming' or 'skim reading' for quick reading. Grammar problem type and ID: 22:Article errors

× I have a job and when I, uh, nevertheless, when I have a, a free time, I always tell it reading because I can enjoyable or I can enjoy it.

✓ I have a job, and when I have free time, I always spend it reading because I enjoy it.

Redundant conjunctions and filler words removed. 'A free time' is incorrect; use 'free time' without article. 'I always tell it reading' is wrong verb phrase; use 'spend it reading'. 'I can enjoyable' is wrong part of speech; use 'I enjoy it.' Suggestion: use 'spend time doing something' for activities, drop unnecessary articles with 'free time', and use correct verb forms for feelings ('enjoy'). Grammar problem type and ID: 1:Singular and plural issue

× Uh, from this I can learn about information.

✓ From this I can learn new information.

'Learn about information' is awkward; 'learn information' or 'learn new information' is better. 'About' is unnecessary. Suggestion: use 'learn (new) information' or 'learn about [topic]'. Grammar problem type and ID: 12:Incorrect use of pronouns