Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 発音と文法の誤り（例: “leading” → “reading”、語順や不要な語の重複）を直し、文を簡潔にまとめてトピック文＋具体例の構成にする必要があります。また、接続詞を使って文の流れを自然にし、語彙を少し広げて理由を具体化しましょう。例えば「どのような本が好きか」「最近読めていない事情」を短く付け加えると良いです。

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading because it helps me learn about society and explore new worlds. However, recently I haven't had enough free time due to work and studies, so I would like to read more when my schedule frees up.

Sugestão: 語法と一致、冗長表現を整理してください（例: “reading on papers” → “reading on paper”）。理由を述べるときは接続詞でつなぎ、具体例（通知や光）を簡潔に示すと説得力が増します。また、単数・複数の一致や冠詞に注意しましょう。

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because screens often distract me with light and notifications, so printed books help me concentrate for longer periods.

Sugestão: 文法（動詞の抜け、語順）と語彙（“vocabularies” → “vocabulary”）を修正し、比較の構造を明確にしてください。例えば、トピック文でまず答えを示し、次に具体例を挙げ、最後に対照を示すと効果的です。言い換えや接続詞（“however”, “whereas”）を使って流れをよくしましょう。

Exemplo: I read carefully when the material is important, for example academic articles or instruction manuals, because I need to understand the background and new vocabulary. Whereas for less important materials, like social media posts, I usually just skim them.

Sugestão: 反復や詰まる表現（“uh”）を減らし、不自然な語句（“out drawing”）を置き換えてください。理由を2点程度に絞り、接続語でつなぐと論理的に聞こえます。また、文を簡潔にして最大5文以内に収めましょう。

Exemplo: I prefer scanning because it allows me to identify key points quickly and collect information efficiently. Also, scanning is less time-consuming than detailed reading when I only need an overview.

× Yes, I like leading because it helps me learn about society and new worlds better. However, recently I don't know have free time enough free time to read books so I want to spend more time.

✓ Yes, I like reading because it helps me learn about society and new worlds. However, recently I don't have enough free time to read books, so I want to spend more time reading.

The student used 'leading' instead of the correct verb 'reading' (word choice error) and placed 'enough' after the noun 'free time' which is incorrect in English; 'enough' should come before the noun phrase or after the verb with a different structure. Also there was a duplicated phrase 'free time'. To improve, use the correct verb 'reading', say 'have enough free time' or 'don't have enough free time', and avoid duplication. Ensure clauses are connected with commas and conjunctions for clarity.

× I prefer reading on papers because when I use the screen I get easily, I can get easily distracted by lights and notifications. Printed books helps me concentrate on my reading for longer periods.

✓ I prefer reading on paper because when I use a screen I can easily get distracted by lights and notifications. Printed books help me concentrate on my reading for longer periods.

'Papers' should be 'paper' when speaking generally about the medium (uncountable). The phrase 'get easily' is misordered; 'can easily get distracted' is the correct word order. 'Printed books helps' is incorrect subject-verb agreement; with the plural subject 'books' the verb should be 'help'. To improve, use 'paper' for the medium, place adverbs like 'easily' before the main verb, and make sure the verb agrees with the subject number.

× I always carefully when I when the content is important, such as academic texts and instructions because it helps me understand the background and new vocabularies. On the other hand, the uh less important materials such as social media.

✓ I always read carefully when the content is important, such as academic texts and instructions, because it helps me understand the background and new vocabulary. On the other hand, I skim less important materials such as social media.

The original sentence is missing the main verb after 'always' and repeats 'when'. 'New vocabularies' is unidiomatic; 'vocabulary' is usually uncountable. The second fragment lacks a verb and subject. To improve, include the verb 'read' and use 'read carefully' or 'skim' as appropriate; use 'vocabulary' uncountably and ensure each sentence has a subject and a verb.

× I prefer scanning because it helps me get uh out drawing of the material and find key points quickly. It is effective to a effective way to, uh, collect information. And time less consuming.

✓ I prefer scanning because it helps me get an overall idea of the material and find key points quickly. It is an effective way to collect information and is less time-consuming.

Phrases like 'get out drawing of the material' are incorrect; the idiomatic expression is 'get an overall idea' or 'get the gist'. 'It is effective to a effective way' is ungrammatical; use 'It is an effective way to collect information'. 'Time less consuming' should be 'less time-consuming' with a hyphenated compound adjective. To improve, learn common collocations like 'get the gist' or 'overall idea', use 'an effective way to', and form compound adjectives correctly.