Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện: Nói rõ ràng và ngắn gọn hơn; dùng câu chủ đề ngay đầu để trả lời trực tiếp (Yes/No + lý do). Tránh lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp (ví dụ: 'I am not a person who likes reading' → 'I don’t usually enjoy reading'). Thêm một hoặc hai chi tiết cụ thể kèm liên từ để mạch lạc (because/when), giữ tối đa 3-4 câu.

Exemplo: I don’t usually enjoy reading for pleasure because I prefer watching videos. However, I will read when I need information for work or study, and I sometimes read comics for fun because they are quick and entertaining.

Sugestão: Cải thiện: Trả lời trực tiếp kèm lý do rõ ràng; dùng liên từ để nối ý (because/so). Tránh cách nói lặp 'I think' nhiều lần; sửa ngữ pháp (e.g. 'is not my cup of tea' có thể dùng sau chủ đề). Giới hạn 2-3 câu và thêm ví dụ cụ thể về thiết bị hoặc lý do (convenience, portability).

Exemplo: I prefer reading on a screen because it’s more convenient and portable. For example, I often read articles on my smartphone or ebooks on my tablet because I can carry many books without the weight.

Sugestão: Cải thiện: Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề tóm tắt hai trường hợp (when careful / when not). Dùng linking words (for example, whereas, so) và sửa ngữ pháp ('take information' → 'extract information' or 'learn something'). Cụ thể hóa với một ví dụ thực tế (study, work tasks) và giữ 2-3 câu.

Exemplo: I read carefully when I need to learn something important, such as studying from a textbook or checking a dictionary for accurate definitions. Whereas when I read for entertainment, like comics, I read quickly and casually because I’m just relaxing.

Sugestão: Cải thiện: Trả lời rõ ràng: chọn một trong hai và giải thích lý do ngắn gọn. Tránh diễn đạt lúng túng ('using a lot of technology on it') và lỗi ngữ pháp ('bring you the patient' → 'teach you patience'). Dùng liên từ (but, because) và đưa ví dụ cụ thể khi bạn dùng detailed reading (novels, classics).

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I enjoy immersing myself in the text and it helps me develop patience. For example, I like reading classic novels slowly to appreciate the language and ideas rather than just scanning for facts.

× From my point of view, I have said that I am not a person who like reading most, but when I have to read a book to take the information or raise a comic for entertain, I think I will read a book and read this reading this.

✓ From my point of view, I have said that I am not a person who likes reading most, but when I have to read a book to get information or pick up a comic for entertainment, I think I will read it.

Error: 'person who like' uses plural verb with singular subject; 'take the information' and 'raise a comic for entertain' are incorrect collocations. Suggestion: Use 'likes' to agree with singular 'person'. Replace 'take the information' with 'get information', 'raise a comic' with 'pick up a comic', and 'for entertain' with 'for entertainment'. Ensure pronouns refer clearly ('read it').

× MMM absolutely on screen about on boring white paper I think is not my cup of tea. Reading on screen like using smartphone or laptop for reading I think I will prefer it more.

✓ I absolutely prefer reading on a screen rather than on boring white paper; I think paper is not my cup of tea. I prefer reading on a smartphone or laptop.

Error: awkward tense and structure with redundant phrases. Suggestion: Use simple present 'prefer' to state general preference. Reorder sentence for clarity and remove filler words. Use articles ('a screen') and concise phrasing 'prefer reading on a smartphone or laptop'.

× MMM reading carefully is when I have to take an information on this book or on this dictionary for upgrading my knowledge. So I will read it carefully and I read very fast and chill easy when I entertainment for reading comics.

✓ I read carefully when I have to get information from a book or a dictionary to improve my knowledge. I read very fast and casually when I am reading comics for entertainment.

Error: 'take an information' and 'on this book' misuse prepositions and articles; 'for upgrading my knowledge' is incorrect phrase; missing auxiliary in 'when I entertainment'. Suggestion: Use 'get information from' and 'a book or a dictionary', 'to improve my knowledge'. Use present progressive 'am reading' for ongoing action and 'for entertainment' as correct noun phrase.

× Scanning using a lot of technology on it. Hmm. But I can say that I am the old nostalgia people so detailed reading I think is better than scanning because this reading can bring you the patient when you readings the word.

✓ Scanning often uses a lot of technology. However, I am an old-fashioned person, so I think detailed reading is better than scanning because careful reading can help you become more patient when you read words.

Error: 'the old nostalgia people' is incorrect pronoun/noun phrase; 'bring you the patient' wrong word choice; 'readings the word' wrong verb form and article. Suggestion: Use 'old-fashioned person' or 'nostalgic person'; 'bring you patience' or 'help you become more patient'; use 'when you read' (base verb) and 'words' plural.