Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Chấm điểm: 68/100. Gợi ý: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng (ví dụ: "color book" sai; lặp từ "in in"), rút gọn câu tránh dài dòng, và tổ chức ý rõ ràng: câu chủ đề + 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể. Hãy dùng liên từ hợp lý và từ vựng phù hợp (ví dụ: "psychology books", "insights into human behavior").

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I read every day during my lunch break and in the evening. I especially enjoy psychology books because they give me insights into human behavior and help me develop greater empathy.

Sugestão: Chấm điểm: 52/100. Gợi ý: Giảm tiếng 'uh/umm', sửa ngữ pháp (ví dụ: "reading on paper"; "helps me concentrate"), tránh câu rời rạc và từ không rõ nghĩa like "Cost". Nên nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể và liên kết chúng bằng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so".

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because I can physically turn the pages, which helps me concentrate. I also find paper books less tiring for my eyes than screens.

Sugestão: Chấm điểm: 72/100. Gợi ý: Cần sửa vài lỗi nhỏ về động từ và danh từ (ví dụ: "more mistake" → "mistakes", "cause problem" → "cause problems"), và diễn đạt mạch lạc hơn. Dùng linking words như "because" và "however" để phân biệt hai ý. Thêm một ví dụ cụ thể sẽ tốt.

Exemplo: I read carefully when signing contracts or checking important bills because mistakes can cause problems later. However, when I read novels or magazines, I usually skim to get the main idea and save time.

Sugestão: Chấm điểm: 60/100. Gợi ý: Cần sửa cấu trúc câu và số nhiều ("mistake" → "mistakes", "cause problem" → "cause problems"), loại bỏ cụm từ không rõ nghĩa như "skim the tasks to get the general idea weekly". Nên nêu rõ hoàn cảnh và dùng liên từ để kết nối ý.

Exemplo: It depends. For important or foreign documents I read in detail to avoid mistakes because small errors can cause problems. But when I'm reading for relaxation, I usually skim to get the general idea.

× My favorite color book is psychology books because the knowledge in in those kind of books help me gain the insights into human behavior and develop more empathy.

✓ My favorite books are psychology books because the knowledge in those kinds of books helps me gain insights into human behavior and develop more empathy.

Several issues: 'favorite color book' is incorrect adjective use; should be 'favorite books'. 'in in' is duplicated. 'those kind of books' should be 'those kinds of books' (agreement with plural). 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular collective noun 'knowledge'. 'the insights' can be 'insights' without 'the'. Suggestion: simplify phrase to 'My favorite books are psychology books because the knowledge in those kinds of books helps me gain insights into human behavior and develop more empathy.'

× If I have the chance, I prefer reading on the paper.

✓ If I have the chance, I prefer reading on paper.

Use of the definite article 'the' before uncountable medium 'paper' is incorrect. We say 'reading on paper' not 'on the paper'. Suggestion: remove 'the'.

× Uh, you know, uh, a paper book.

✓ Uh, you know, a paper book.

Extraneous filler 'uh' repeated; grammatically the phrase is a fragment but acceptable as spoken. Suggestion: keep one 'uh' or pause; 'a paper book' is fine as a noun phrase.

× I can physically touch and turn the page which help me concentrate more over the test on the paper.

✓ I can physically touch and turn the pages, which helps me concentrate more when reading a paper book.

'turn the page' -> plural 'pages' matches general action. Relative clause needs comma. 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'which' (refers to the action), or more naturally with 'this' action. 'over the test on the paper' is awkward; use 'when reading a paper book'. Suggestion: use plural pages, add comma before which, and correct verb agreement.

× Cost. Less eye strength and reading on the screen.

✓ It causes less eye strain than reading on a screen.

Original is fragmented and unclear. 'Cost.' is wrong. 'eye strength' is incorrect collocation; correct term is 'eye strain'. Structure should be a full comparative sentence: 'It causes less eye strain than reading on a screen.' Suggestion: use complete sentence and correct collocation.

× Well, I need to focus on details and read carefully when I sign contracts or check important documents like my household bills, because more mistake can cause problem later.

✓ Well, I need to focus on details and read carefully when I sign contracts or check important documents like my household bills, because more mistakes can cause problems later.

'more mistake' should be plural 'more mistakes'. 'cause problem' needs plural or article: 'cause problems' or 'cause a problem'. Suggestion: pluralize nouns to match context.

× But when I read for a letter, just as novels or magazines, I usually skim to get the general idea and save time.

✓ But when I read literature, such as novels or magazines, I usually skim to get the general idea and save time.

'read for a letter' is incorrect preposition and collocation; likely meant 'read for pleasure' or 'read literature'. 'just as' should be 'such as' to introduce examples. Suggestion: use 'such as novels or magazines' or 'for pleasure'.

× If I have to check foreign documents, I read them thoroughly to avoid mistake because small errors can cause problem.

✓ If I have to check foreign documents, I read them thoroughly to avoid mistakes because small errors can cause problems.

'avoid mistake' should be plural 'avoid mistakes'. 'can cause problem' should be 'can cause problems'. Suggestion: pluralize common nouns in general statements.

× But when I'm reading to relax and usually skim the tasks to get the general idea weekly.

✓ But when I'm reading to relax, I usually skim the texts to get the general idea.

Original sentence is ungrammatical: missing subject or misordered clauses and unnecessary 'weekly'. 'skim the tasks' is wrong collocation; use 'skim the texts' or 'skim' + object. Suggestion: reorder to 'When I'm reading to relax, I usually skim the texts to get the general idea.'