Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and finish your sentences. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words like “for example” or “especially” appropriately and avoid trailing off.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy reading, especially novels. For example, I usually read about three books a month that focus on everyday life and relationships, because I like realistic stories that help me understand characters’ emotions.

Sugestão: Correct grammar and complete your reason clearly. Use a topic sentence followed by a concise specific reason with a linking phrase like “because” or “so”. Avoid repetition and incomplete clauses.

Exemplo: I definitely prefer reading on paper because screens strain my eyes. For example, long reading sessions on my phone make my eyes tired and give me headaches, so paper books are more comfortable.

Sugestão: Provide a clearer contrast between when careful reading is required and when it is not. Use a topic sentence, then give two specific situations with linking words like “when” and “but”. Avoid repetition and finish thoughts fully.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when I want to understand a character’s feelings or complex plot details. But I don’t read as carefully when I’m skimming news articles or looking for quick facts.

Sugestão: Keep the answer concise and add a brief concrete reason or example. Use a linking word like “because” and avoid repeating the same idea twice.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I want to fully understand the writer’s ideas. For example, when I read a novel I pay attention to character development and language to appreciate the author’s style.

× Yes, I really love reading, especially reading novels and I usually read about 3 books a month and the content is about the daily lives and.

✓ Yes, I really love reading, especially novels, and I usually read about three books a month; the content is about daily life.

Mistakes: inconsistent pluralization and incomplete phrase. 'reading novels' is more natural than 'reading novels and'. Use 'three' instead of numeral in formal speech, and 'daily life' (uncountable) not 'daily lives and.' Also the sentence ended with 'and' leaving it incomplete. Suggestion: remove the trailing 'and' and combine clauses clearly using a semicolon or conjunction.

× I definitely prefer to reading on paper because I don't like see the screen on the phone or tablet because it may cause it.

✓ I definitely prefer reading on paper because I don't like looking at the screen on my phone or tablet; it may cause eye strain.

Mistakes: after 'prefer' use the base verb or gerund without 'to' (either 'prefer reading' or 'prefer to read'). 'Don't like see' needs gerund 'looking at'. Preposition 'at' is required with 'look'. 'the screen on the phone or tablet' is improved to 'the screen on my phone or tablet'. The phrase 'it may cause it' is vague; specify 'eye strain.' Suggestion: use gerunds correctly and include necessary prepositions.

× I need to read carefully as the time I I want to know the feelings of the person in the story, more details of it and I.

✓ I need to read carefully when I want to understand a character's feelings and the story's details.

Mistakes: tense and structure awkwardness. 'as the time I I want' is ungrammatical; use 'when I want'. 'Know the feelings of the person in the story' is better as 'understand a character's feelings.' 'more details of it and I' is incomplete and redundant. Suggestion: simplify sentence, use present simple 'want' for habitual or general situations, and combine ideas clearly.

× I prefer detailed reading because I want to understand the content completely and it is important for me to read carefully.

✓ I prefer detailed reading because I want to understand the content completely, and it is important for me to read carefully.

Mistakes: mainly punctuation and clarity; grammar is largely correct. Add a comma before the conjunction joining two independent clauses. Suggestion: keep present simple tense for habitual preferences and use comma to separate clauses.