Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak more fluently and reduce hesitations and filler words. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct grammar (e.g., “I like reading novels and stories”) and avoid ending abruptly.

Exemplo: I like reading novels and short stories because they help me relax and broaden my perspective. For example, reading historical novels taught me about different cultures and made me think about other people’s lives.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer, then explain with specific reasons and one example. Use correct grammar (e.g., “I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes”) and avoid fragmented sentences and repetitions.

Exemplo: I prefer reading on paper because it is easier on my eyes and helps me focus. For instance, when I read books on paper I can read for longer without eye strain, while screens often make my eyes tired.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence that answers both parts: when you need to read carefully and when casual reading is fine. Give specific examples and reasons using linking words (e.g., “when… because…”). Avoid vague and incomplete responses.

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when I study for exams or when I review work documents because I must understand details and avoid mistakes. On the other hand, I don’t read carefully when I read light fiction or social media posts since those are for entertainment.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clearly, then explain with concrete reasons and one brief example. Use appropriate vocabulary (“detailed reading” or “skimming”) and avoid unclear phrases. Keep answers within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because it helps me understand the author’s ideas and enjoy the atmosphere of the book. For example, when I read a novel slowly, I notice the characters’ feelings and the setting, which makes the story more engaging.

× Yes, I, I like reading uh, I such as novels, stories, umm, because uh, it's uh, it's uh, when I reading, I feel relaxed and I uh, mind open. That's it.

✓ Yes, I like reading. I enjoy novels and stories because when I read, I feel relaxed and my mind opens.

Multiple pronoun and clause errors: 'I such as novels' is wrong word order and missing verb; 'when I reading' uses incorrect verb form (should be 'read'); 'mind open' needs a possessive pronoun and correct verb form ('my mind opens'). Suggestion: simplify sentences, use correct verb forms and include possessives where needed. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12

× Actually, I prefer read on paper because it's, uh, it is, uh, I save my eye in the screen. It's a danger for eye eyes because I have. Some.

✓ Actually, I prefer to read on paper because it protects my eyes from the screen. Screens can be harmful to my eyes because I have some eye problems.

Problems: missing infinitive 'to' after 'prefer' and incorrect pronoun/possessive 'my eye'. 'I save my eye in the screen' is ungrammatical; 'eye eyes' is duplication. Also sentence fragments ('I have. Some.') need completion. Suggestion: use 'prefer to read', use 'my eyes', and complete the clause about having eye problems. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12

× I need the careful because when I need it.

✓ I need to read carefully when necessary.

Original is ungrammatical and unclear: 'I need the careful' is wrong noun phrase and 'when I need it' is vague. Suggestion: use the infinitive 'to read carefully' and a clear time phrase such as 'when necessary' or 'when I need to understand something'. Grammar Problem Type ID: 26

× Actually I read a detailed reading because I leave the the wind right when reading. I live I feel, feel in atmosphere reading in when a director is right.

✓ Actually I prefer detailed reading because I like the atmosphere when reading; it helps me concentrate.

This sentence has many unclear and incorrect pronoun and word choices: 'I read a detailed reading' should be 'I prefer detailed reading'; 'I leave the the wind right' and the rest are unintelligible fragments. Suggestion: replace unclear metaphors with clear expressions like 'I like the atmosphere' and state the reason concisely. Grammar Problem Type ID: 12