Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Порада: Потрібно зробити відповідь більш структурованою та природною. Почніть з чіткої тематичної фрази, потім додайте 1–2 конкретні деталі (коли читаєте, що саме читаєте), уникайте заповнювачів (uh, umm) і зайвих повторів. Також корисно використати зв'язки (for example, because, so) для логіки розповіді.

Exemplo: I enjoy reading, especially in the evenings. For example, I like to read mystery novels while drinking a cup of tea because they create a cozy atmosphere. I usually read for about an hour before bed.

Sugestão: Порада: Відповідь має бути ясно сформульована та коротка. Почніть із прямої позиції (paper, screen, or both), потім поясніть причини з конкретними прикладами. Уникайте невпевнених фраз і граматичних помилок («from one hand» → «on one hand»).

Exemplo: I prefer both paper and screens. On one hand, I enjoy paper books because they feel more tangible and create a nice atmosphere. On the other hand, I use an e-reader for English books because they are cheaper and more convenient to buy and carry.

Sugestão: Порада: Чітко відповідайте на запитання, використовуючи правильні дієслова та приклади. Скажіть, коли потрібно уважно читати (наприклад, при редагуванні або вчителі) і коли можна лише переглядати (наприклад, легкі новини). Уникайте повторів і помилок у словах («reach» → «read», «edit my book» → «editing someone else's work»).

Exemplo: I need to read carefully when I am editing someone else's work or studying for exams, because accuracy matters and I must not miss mistakes. I do not read carefully when I browse social media or read short, unimportant articles; in those cases I just scan for main ideas.

Sugestão: Порада: Дайте чітку позицію та наведіть конкретні причини з логічними зв'язками. Використовуйте менш розмовні вставки та позбудьтеся заповнювачів. Можна додати приклад типу тексту для кожного стилю читання.

Exemplo: I prefer scanning when the text is boring or I only need a quick overview, because it saves time. However, I choose detailed reading for interesting or important texts, such as novels or academic papers, because I want to understand every detail and enjoy the content.

× Here say 2. I enjoy reading uh, like read uh, almost evening umm, because it uh, some vibes umm. Of course with a cup of tea and other sweets. It's uh, like mystery atmosphere and comfortable. Umm, I don't know.

✓ I enjoy reading, usually in the evening, because it creates a nice atmosphere. I like to read with a cup of tea and some sweets; it feels cozy and a bit mysterious.

The original has fragmented and unclear sentence structure, missing verbs, and awkward phrasing. Reorganize into complete sentences: use an adverb of time ('usually in the evening'), a clear verb phrase ('creates a nice atmosphere'), and combine related ideas with appropriate connectors ('and', semicolon). This improves clarity and fluency.

× I can answer totally because I like her as written paper and on the screen.

✓ I can answer this completely because I like both printed books and reading on a screen.

The original uses the incorrect pronoun 'her' and unclear phrase 'as written paper'. Replace 'her' with 'this' or restructure to specify 'printed books' and 'reading on a screen'. Use 'both' to show preference for two options.

× From the one hand I try to read on the paper because it feel a picture book and it cool atmosphere, but because I also.

✓ On the one hand, I try to read printed books because they feel like picture books and create a cool atmosphere,

Sentence fragments and missing agreement ('it feel' should be 'they feel') and incomplete clause at the end. Use 'On the one hand' and plural agreement for 'books', and finish the clause to be complete.

× Screen uh, I also read an English book uh, on the screen because I can buy it and I read in on the screen.

✓ On the other hand, I also read English books on a screen because I can buy them easily and read them there.

Redundant and awkward phrasing ('read in on the screen') and incorrect singular/plural consistency. Use 'on the other hand' to contrast, plural 'books' and 'them', and streamline the reason ('buy them easily').

× Uh, I think I need to reach carefully when it edit my book and I, umm, have to, umm, read it carefully because it isn't mine, uh and uh.

✓ I think I need to read carefully when I edit a book that is not mine, because I must be careful with someone else's work.

Multiple issues: wrong verb 'reach' instead of 'read', incorrect clause order, and repetition. Use correct verbs ('read', 'edit'), clarify possession ('someone else's work'), and combine ideas to eliminate redundancy.

× And I, I must be care of this book.

✓ I must take care of this book.

Incorrect construction 'be care of' should be 'take care of'. Use the correct verb phrase to express responsibility.

× If it's so boring text, I prefer scanning, but when it's so interesting and, umm, stunning, uh, detailed reading, I choose detailed reading because I wouldn't umm umm, skip. Any details? And of course I would read it.

✓ If a text is very boring, I prefer scanning, but if it is interesting or stunning, I choose detailed reading because I would not skip any details; of course I would read them carefully.

Awkward word order ('so boring text' should be 'a text is very boring'), repetition and punctuation errors. Change to conditional structures with consistent tense, remove filler words, and combine sentences with a semicolon for clarity.