Reading— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 発音の不自然さや停頓（um, uh）を減らし、文を簡潔にして流暢さを高めてください。具体的には冒頭で明確な主旨文を述べ（I enjoy reading.）、続けて具体例（what you read, frequency）と理由（relaxation）を一文ずつでつなげる練習をしてください。また“novel and fiction”は冗長なので“novels”か“fiction”のどちらか一方か、両者を正しく区別して使ってください。

Exemplo: I enjoy reading, especially novels and contemporary fiction, and I read every day. Reading helps me relax after work and I often read in my room before I sleep.

Sugestão: 繰り返しや意味の誤り（"eyes are getting bored"や"it feels me relax"）を直し、短くはっきりした理由を一つまたは二つで述べましょう。接続表現（because, so）を自然に使って理由をつなげ、不要なフィラー（uh）を減らす練習をしてください。

Exemplo: I definitely prefer paper books because reading on a screen tires my eyes quickly. Paper feels more comfortable and helps me concentrate for longer periods.

Sugestão: 意味が不明瞭で文法的な誤り（"I have to care a lot", "when I are taking a shower"）が多いです。質問は「いつ注意深く読むか/いつそうでないか」を尋ねていますので、状況を二つに分けて簡潔に述べてください。例えば、濡れる可能性がある場所では注意深く読むが、電子媒体や短い記事はざっと読む、など具体例を使って説明しましょう。

Exemplo: I read very carefully when I'm in places where my book could be damaged, like near water in the bathroom. For routine emails or short articles, I usually skim and don't read every detail.

Sugestão: 繰り返しと不自然な語順を減らし、理由を明確に一つか二つで述べましょう。例えば"because"で理由を導き、その後に具体例（favorite books）を挙げると論理的にまとまります。語彙は"detailed reading"の代わりに"reading in depth"なども使えます。

Exemplo: I prefer detailed reading because I like to understand the plot and characters fully. When it's a favourite book, I want to notice every detail and enjoy the author's style.

× Yes, I like reading to be honest, every day I read my book, uh especially novel and fiction.

✓ Yes, I like reading. To be honest, every day I read my book, especially novels and fiction.

The student used 'novel' singular with 'especially' which implies plural; use 'novels' or 'novel and fiction' is awkward. Also split run-on sentence into two for clarity. Suggestion: use plural when speaking generally (novels) and separate clauses with a period or conjunction.

× It helps me relax and comfortable when I rest too in my room.

✓ It helps me relax and feel comfortable when I rest in my room.

After 'helps me' use base form verb 'relax' and parallel structure 'feel comfortable' rather than 'comfortable' alone. Suggestion: keep parallel verbs and avoid extra 'too' or misplaced adverbs.

× I prefer to read on paper definitely because, uh, when I, I read on the screen, my eyes are getting bored, uh, getting tired.

✓ I definitely prefer to read on paper because when I read on a screen my eyes get tired.

Use simple present 'get' for habitual actions rather than 'are getting'. Also 'bored' is not appropriate for eyes; 'tired' is correct. Move 'definitely' before the verb for natural word order.

× So, uh, when I read the book on paper, it feels me relax.

✓ So when I read a book on paper, it makes me feel relaxed.

English uses 'make' + object + adjective ('makes me feel relaxed') rather than 'feels me relax'. Also use indefinite article 'a book' for general statement.

× Uh, when I, uh, entered the bathroom, I have to care a lot because if I drop my books on the water, uh, I cannot redo anymore.

✓ When I enter the bathroom, I have to be careful because if I drop my books in the water, I cannot get them back.

Mixing past 'entered' with present-tense context is incorrect; use simple present 'enter' for habitual action. 'Have to care' is incorrect; use 'have to be careful'. 'On the water' should be 'in the water'. 'Cannot redo anymore' is unclear; use 'cannot get them back'.

× So, uh, when I are taking a shower, it is really careful.

✓ So when I am taking a shower, I have to be really careful.

Use 'am taking' with subject 'I' (not 'are'). 'It is really careful' is ungrammatical; use 'I have to be really careful' to express the need for caution.

× I definitely I prefer a detailed reading because if I bought some favorite books, scanning is not a good thing, because I really want to know much details and I really want to know about that.

✓ I definitely prefer detailed reading because if I buy some favorite books, scanning is not a good idea; I really want to know many details about them.

Remove duplicate 'I' and use present tense 'buy' for habitual/future preference rather than past 'bought'. 'Detailed reading' is a better noun phrase than 'a detailed reading'. 'Much details' is incorrect; use 'many details'. Replace 'know about that' with 'know about them' to refer to books.